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The End of Dark Willow

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Review of chapter "Take One" from eriktheviking
Review:
I had to shake my head in bemusement at this short, well done.
Comments from author:
Sometimes Musie and I get a little loopy.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Take One" from zigpal
Review:
Riotous.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I thought so.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [5 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Take One" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Very appropriate! :)
Comments from author:
Can't believe I haven't seen it before.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [5 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take One" from vampygal
Review:
Too funny! I think, maybe, this would ease the awkwardness of the sentence, once again maybe: A large jagged stone that broke off the statue when it was raised, split his skull as he struck the earth, killing him instantly.
Comments from author:
I realize it's rather evil of me to kill them both, but to be honest, I was shocked that the cheesy 'I love you' approach actually worked.
Review By [vampygal] • Date [5 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take One" from WinterRayne
Review:
Love it. Laughed so hard!!!
Comments from author:
Isn't it wrong that we'd find this so funny?
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Take One" from soulNchantress
Review:
Hahahahaha. I had the Wicked Witch of the West theme song stuck in my head since the house fell on her!! Oh, this is so gonna be a classic for me.

Another thought provoking drabble. I guess, though, that since Tara is dead, Dorothy isn't gonna have a good witch to help guide her this time. :-)

Nice job.
Comments from author:
Sorry for getting that song stuck in your head.

Guess Dorothy will just have to become a SoCal girl.
Review By [soulNchantress] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take One" from Harry
Review:
NOW THAT, was a ending no one expected!
Comments from author:
Nope. That's probably a good thing, though.
Review By [Harry] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Take One" from MrGordo
Review:
ROFLMAO!!!!! I SOOOO didn't see that one coming.
Comments from author:
I'm not sure where the idea came from, but once the it popped up, I couldn't stop Musie.
Review By [MrGordo] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take One" from CarmenLindsay
Review:
Oh man, that's just messed up and I LOVE IT!!!
Comments from author:
I think by the time this is all over, I'm gonna come up with a way to get rid of all the big bads in a weird way.
Review By [CarmenLindsay] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Take One" from uten
Review:
Nice - You killed off one of my fave characters and I laughed..

As a quibble, something flows wrong in there. I'm not the best writer, so I'm not sure what it is, but the sentence where Xander dies jolted me out of the scene somehow. Seems weird to be jolted out of the scene in a drabble, but there you go.

Regardless, I still enjoyed it immensely.

I wonder if Buffy will try to slay the house.. or Dorothy. I can just imagine her charging at Dorothy (since she's obviously a demon since she just 'landed' a house), trips over Toto and stumbles off the cliff. ^_^
Comments from author:
I tried to fix the wording; hopefully it's better now. LOL. I can picture Buffy setting the house on fire 'cause it killed her friend.
Review By [uten] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Take One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Gee whiz! You killed two of my favorite BtVS characters and made me laugh like a loon at the bloodshed. Well done, in a totally insane way of course.
Comments from author:
Well, I think there has to be a compliment in that.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [3 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take One" from poe
Review:
Funny story and an excellent twist at the end. The only issue I have with the story is the way you phrased Xander's death. I don't mind that you killed him, but those couple of sentences describing his fate just feel awkward. The only reason I'm noting this is that your turn of phrase tends to flow, and this just doesn't. Like I said, though, neat twist.
Comments from author:
I tried a couple different phrases, and hopefully this last one works better.
Review By [poe] • Date [3 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Take One" from winnie
Review:
he he, just what we needed right now...a bit if a laugh!
Thank you!
Comments from author:
Yeah, always need some giggles.
Review By [winnie] • Date [3 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take One" from Earthmage
Review:
OMG....

hahah, awesome
Comments from author:
Kinda bad that two more people die, but it's all for fun.
Review By [Earthmage] • Date [3 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take One" from Greywizard
Review:
LOL! Never saw that one coming.

And neither did Wilow. ;-)
Comments from author:
Apparently. She really needs to learn to look up. But then again, who really worries about falling houses?
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [3 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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