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Harry Potter and the Mouth of Hell

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Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Inoeth
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wohoo, great stuff. I look forward to the next update. I wonder if you have things get so bad they go to war (literally) on everyone in the government (and by that, i mean actively killing the corrupt cops, thugs and politicians) Kill enough humans and actively try to get the FBI down in Sunnydale and things will get real interesting....
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [26 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from draconis
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Very nice last couple of chapters.

This was a very funny, stand-out observation...
"Why do I feel like we're about to get eaten alive?" he asked.
"That's 'normal' for Sunnydale residents," Xander pointed out. "Congratulations, you've gone native."
Review By [draconis] • Date [26 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from ChaosLady
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Whoa. You don know how to write an exciting chapter!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [26 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from immortalbliss
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The Watcher Council is in for it now. And the Mayor. How are those two things going to affect things? Hmm. Also found it interesting that Faith also quit the Watcher Council, that's going to have an impact somehow.
Review By [immortalbliss] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Inoeth
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Ah wonderful fic and a wonderful update. Once again the Council sticks its big antiquidated nose where it doesn't belong.
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from MarcusSLazarus
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As always, the Council continues to be an idio and be more concerned about the internal politics rather than actually fighting the good fight when the two conflict; nice way of capturing that issue, to say nothing of Wesley's attack of conscience.

Nice touch with the Mayor being able to speak Parseltongue, but the way; given what he's going to become, it actually makes sense.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from ChaosLady
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Delightful! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [27 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Morgomir
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Interesting story so far. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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The plot thickens... And very interestingly too. I must admit that the Cup of Hufflepuff as a holy item strikes me as funny.

Thanks for writing
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Inoeth
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Oh shit what a chapter. Keep it up. I wonder who the heak it was attacking everyone with 'muggle' military grade weapons (aka flash bangs and some form of gas grenades). I predict a third party - misguided but honorable (and competent) FBI or SWAT or something. Either that, or the Mayor and his goons but I somehow doubt that.

In any case, great job and update again soon.
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [7 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from ChaosLady
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This was amusing as hell. I wonder who threw the grenade? Can't wait til the next update!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Rich
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Just a wild guess, but those canisters seem like the kind of weapons that might be used by muggle commandos - perhaps the ones based in UC Sunnydale ?
Review By [Rich] • Date [6 Feb 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from ChaosLady
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Wonderful update! Plot keeps getting twistier and twistier.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [22 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Inoeth
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woo hoo. one hell of an update. keep up the good work and update again soon. I really wanna see someone like Drusilla just be vaporized by Harry in a surprise attack with something like the Patronus- which is a purely light and good spell which i think would vaporize vampires better than any other spell he has.
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [9 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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