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Harry Potter and the Mouth of Hell

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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Klimmatt
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This story is really interesting, I can't wait for the Golden Trio to finally meet the Scoobies.
Review By [Klimmatt] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from DarkFaerieYumi
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I love it!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from VillageOrchid
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An interesting and relevant issue for Hermione to be concerned with. A few word drop outs. The only one I wasn't sure of was:

To see how strong is.

Is that to see how strong she is? I would think it would be more to see how clever she is, because they've taken away the supernatural strength and unless the slayer is also a body builder or a blacksmith - not much with the strength.

Or did you mean that they are testing how strong the vampire is?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Martin
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They could have walked to France in the amount of time they wasted looking for a portkey. This whole sequence doesn't any sense. Let's say they get a portkey at the Ministry, wouldn't somebody notice which one they took?

I like HP and Buffy crossovers, but not so much this.
Review By [Martin] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from trongod
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They need to travel via normal means, otherwise they get spotted or leave a trail the Death Eaters will be more than happy to slaughter along - but Ron is a major problem here, not even considering how any trio will be examined in detail by the new Ministry.

He's loud, obnoxious, hot tempered, inconsiderate, boorish - all qualities that will exacerbate problems the travelers will face in the future as they cross the peaceful sea - and just why the hell are they routing across the Pacific to get to California? - in a very time constrained fashion. Riddle is a halfblood, has seen air power the hard way from living through the Blitz, and is NOT stupid enough to ignore normal means of travel for his enemies - especially when he /knows/ one is the smartest witch of her age AND a normal born, and his most powerful and irritating enemy was raised in the normal world, giving them tremendous advantages over his Pureblood, inbred, normal-ignorant minions.They'll be watching Apparition points and for Portkey purchase or manufacture - he owns the Ministry, he'll use its assets - not even thinking of any other way to move about, except maybe by foot or broomstick.

Bottom line - Ron is a hazard and an unneeded danger for their trip. He needs to stay in Britain or get to France while the other two hit for the Hellmouth.
Review By [trongod] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Hanzo
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♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story.♥
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [2 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from spygrrl
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Great update. I like how you explained the US's magical community's lack of involvement in the war with Voldermort.
Review By [spygrrl] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from kiwi
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great chapter. wonder what the key will open. :D
Review By [kiwi] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from eclecticcollect
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This is an interesting start and I am looking forward to seeing where you take it.
Review By [eclecticcollect] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Rod
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Intriguing. I'll be fascinated to see where this goes. I'm glad you're looking for a beta; there are a few little proof-reading errors that I tripped over. It's hard to proof-read your own writing because you know what it should say already!
Review By [Rod] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from spygrrl
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Cool start! In this first chapter you've done an awesome and believable merging of the two universes and considering some of the questions that come into play when merging them that is saying something. I was as raptured by Remus' lessons as the kids and I know the stories! :) I can't wait to read more.
Review By [spygrrl] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Greywizard
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An interesting beginning, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of this.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from immortalbliss
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Nice start.. Can't wait to see what Hermione has been hiding..
Review By [immortalbliss] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from JediMormon
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I like this lead-in, Lupin being the one to teach them about it and all. It seems good so far, a few grammatical errors here and there. Also, I believe Luna was the year below the Trio, so I'm not quite sure why she'd be in the class with them.

All in all though, a great start, I look forward to seeing a lot more of it.
Review By [JediMormon] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from AlecMcDowell
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Ah, I haven't actually read many of these fics where the GT meet up with the Scoobies to share resources so I am looking forward to this. I'm glad you are going books over movies as there are some weird bits in the movies, but I'd be hesitant to stick to them as gospel. For one thing, Harry is far too ordinary in the books and he more or less stumbles his way into goading Voldy into committing suicide. You've already seemed to have made a smarter Harry than in the books so I'd say continue that. I liked Remus' involvement and obvious discomfort with the idea of slayers- he might even have a bit of a history, being a werewolf. I could see him helping out in the future with them finding Buffy. If they are willing to go to the Scoobies for help with Voldy and his horcruxes I'd think they'd be more willing than in the books to accept adult help as well. Couple of small errors I'm not sure if you overlooked on purpose or not- Cho Chang is a year older than the kids and Luna is both a year younger and blonde. Anyway looking forward to more of this
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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