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Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from (Current Donor)Sulien
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If there was an "I Loathe Xander" club, I'd probably be it's president. However, I truly like the character as you've written him here and much prefer this story to actual canon. It isn't even just the fact that Xander doesn't betray Buffy by not telling her that Willow was attempting to return Angel's soul; it's that the Xander of your story isn't a jealous, self-centered git, he's a truly decent and caring human being. I thought it very apropos that Buffy went into the hell dimension with Angel and that Faith actually had a good, decent support system in the form of Giles and Joyce Summers after she arrived in Sunnydale (also unlike canon, which I hated...yes, there were a lot of things done in the show which I despised). I love how you managed to bring Xander and Willow into the lives of Jack O'Neill and SG-1 without overly bashing their parents (who deserve a lot worse than character bashing, if the truth be told). I'm also glad that Jack got a chance to enjoy having family in his life besides his team and I think you handled him and his reactions very well.

All in all, very nicely done! Thank you very much for sharing this story, it made for a wonderful evening's reading.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [14 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from maxthehobbit
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Excellent story and the action parts were also good. You took facts from 'Buffy' and expanded them to create a better in-depth look at both Willow and Xander as well as a few thing thrown in about Jack and Daniel. Well put together.
Thank you for sharing.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from IcemanII
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Excellent job and I'm looking forward to your sequel some day.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from Mordare
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I truly loved the story. I am really looking forward to you writing a sequel later on. As always. Keep up the excellent work.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [11 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from slmncpm
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thank you so much my dear! it was fantastic. *hands you scones*
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from Morgomir
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Great ending. Keep up the good work, whatever it may be.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from Runewolf
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Really heartwarming.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from leonamasha
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This was a wonderful story. Really loved how everyone was portrayed and the fact that you didn't sugarcoat relationships and let the story flow seamlessly. Thanks
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from Studyofchaos
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Congrats on completing your story. So many writers get started on what looks to be a quality story and then all of a sudden it just stops and the reader never gets to find out how the story turns out. Again, excellent job and I'm looking forward to your sequel some day.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from Orion
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Great! I'm sad to see this end, but all good stories must and this was certainly a happy ending. Thank you for writing, and sharing you work with us.
Review By [Orion] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from CastorandPollux
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This was good. Please do a sequel.
Review By [CastorandPollux] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from Elleria
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Love this, kinda sad to see it end.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from Keshkreature
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Excellent story! The end made me tear up!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from Misty
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Beautiful, fabtastic, brilliant, I could go on. Thank you for an amazing journey. It was.... Perfect x
Review By [Misty] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from msdarque
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Wonderful and just awesome and fitting ending. I absolutely loved reading it! :D
I think they presented their acceptance letters and decision of where to go to school very nicely.
And I'll bet they'll do greatly in the Air Force.
Congrats and kudos!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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