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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from msdarque
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It's different, sad, intriguing - I absolutely loved it and would very much like to read more. :)
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [16 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from borgrabbit
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I assume that Xander is naught special, save for some Halloween memories, primal and fish influences, and Willow is just past pencil floating and soul restoring. Will this be enough to give them a leg up in a Goa'uld confrontation?
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [16 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PsychoWing
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This is pretty interesting. I'm looking forward to reading more.
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Blackett
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Review By [Blackett] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mountainelements
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Interesting. I hope that we can read more soon.
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
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an interesting start...
poor Xander and Willow... life sure struck them hard....
hopefully things will get better for them...
can`t wait to read more ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from neris
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There is little to review, so the review will be short. I liked it.
Never before have I seen this kind of scenario, fcourse there were some which included jack being Xander's father, but not like this. As for the rest - all is hmm..., proper. Not amazing, but a very good start. It has potential to be a great story, all depending on where you go from here. Most likely you'll mix Xander and Willow with Stargate world, but I don't think that a couple of teenagers could be so easily allowed to enter into a top secret life of SG. It all depends how you're going to introduce them, maybe some kind of an artifact left by Daniel, maybe Asgard intervention. Or maybe you'll go the other way around and have demons attacking SG and Xander will come to their rescue. Like I said, there is not enough yet to review properly.
Review By [neris] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from antra
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While it is certainly an original variation of the whole Jack-is-Xander's-father thing I can't picture Jack knowing he has a child and not being in contact with it. He just isn't the type for that.
But I can imagine him taking his childs best friend as well
Review By [antra] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
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So Jack has come for Xander, that's great... I bet the other members of the SGC will be very surprised to hear about X's existence, but it's understandable considering how shattered he was by Charlie's death... Maybe he agrees to take Willow in, too?
I would like for Buffy and Angel to return at some point, but B. would be greatly changed by her experiences in the hell dimension; for her years would have passed (maybe she didn't age while in it, that's part of the torture, it goes on forever?). Or conversely it led to a planet where there's a stargate, who knows. But she should return at some point.
Anyway-- otherwise, the story's kind of over. I suppose Jack might find out that Willow can read Sumerian, Latin, Greek, all that stuff, maybe she sees some papers Daniel is reading?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from euceri
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Interesting start....can't wait for more
Review By [euceri] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from winddancer
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A good start, the story is believable, in the myths, and looks to be a good read. Looking foreword to the next chapter. Thanks Author for the story and the hard work.
Review By [winddancer] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wormbait
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Interesting beginning, I'll be keeping an eye eye to see where you go with it.

Well done and thanks for sharing, I look forward to more.
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)jcon
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Like all other reviewers; an interesting start. Especially with such tragedy to occur. Looking forward to the development of the plot. Anticipating how you write around the OOC Jack FUBAR.
Don't stop now, sometimes the inspiration when you do error with a character gets the muses onto high speed.
Review By [(Current Donor)jcon] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MissE
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Interesting start. Begs the question: what happened with Buffy and Angel? Will they come back of their own accord, or will Jack find them on some hell-like planet? Also, how far into Stargate are you setting it? Will mini-Jack be around, or will he make an appearance? Very curious :)
Review By [MissE] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Xovervore
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Interesting concept. The previous reviewers raise good points about the prior relationship between Jack and Xander, so the thing to do is to ask how such a situation arises, so as to determine a solution. Here is my proposal: we know the death of Charlie was pretty devastating for Jack, and let's say that when Jessica was first informed of his death she wasn't given the full details of how it occurred. Then a couple of days later she does, and she is enraged, and makes demands that involve Jack not having any contact with Xander. Jack in his particular emotional state unwisely agrees and signs documents to that effect. The next question then becomes - surely Jessica would cool down after a year or so, and allow Jack to see Xander or send him messages? I will leave it to aomeone else, like the author, to resolve that. Also, it is quite possible the author already had a solution when started the story?
Comments from author:
Um, wow. You actually got it pritty much on the spot. When i wrote this part of the story, i never really considered the idea that it would be majorly OOC for Jack to not be involved in Xander's life. Of course, i know better now. In my head, i tend to think that Jack did keep in contact with Jessica and Xander after the divorce, up untill she married Tony, at which point he got told to stay out. Then, when Charlie dies, we know Jack was shattered, and doubted himself as a father, possibly coming to the conclusion that Xander was better of without him in his life (little did he know...)

Anyway, i'm glad you like the concept

R.W.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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