Great chapters, wonderful handling of the Atlantis Civil War, Aquaman story line.

Long term Xander may have problems with the more lily white members of the league, his little "questioning" scene with Deadshot raised some eyebrows in story and probably some red flags in Bats and Sups mind. Probably less in GL and WW and I don't know about MM.

Great story so far!

Wait till i show his reaction to the Joker

Great new chapter. Keep up the good work. :)

Nice job with the Aquaman episodes of the show.

I loved how Xander shocked Aquaman and GL with a side to him that he probably never revealed to them, i.e. Halloween.

He also showed that he sometimes deals with things his own way and some of the Justice League might not agree with that.

I loved Superman's reaction to Xander's suggestion of what to do with Lex. But if he causes Batman to crack up then things might get a little weird for everyone.

Hmmm, I wonder if Booster Gold has any interesting stories from his timeline?

Keep up the good work.

Well done overall. Not a big Aquaman fan, but you did a good job with this part.

Really enjoying the re-writes of the Justice League series with Xander as Thor tagged in. You're doing a good job of using the initial material and incorporating some slight alterations to the theme. Looking forward to your next entries. Good work.

It is very nice to see more of this fic. :)

“Ah ease up Di, I can handle t…” she unfortunately she gave it a squeeze as she spoke.
*ZAAATT!*
“CRAAAAPPP!!!” Xander yelled as the beam launched him through the doors.

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Hehe, For some reason this part of the story made me giggle like the proverbial loon. :D

I hope we will see more chapters added to this story soon.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Shepard's Pie::

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Words are only painted fire;
a book is the fire itself.
- Mark Twain
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EDIT: When you wrote the scene where Xander accidentally got shot through the door with the weapon I was for some reason reminded about the scene in Robin Hood (The Disney version) where the vulture who is holding a crossbow tells the Sheriff that "The safety's on "Old Betsy""

http://en.wikiquote.org/wiki/Robin_Hood

I liked this story when you first started it, but what happened to the creativity that you had when you started it? What I mean is that when Xander gained his powers you altered the storyline when Fate and Xander took care of the Mayor, but you now just seem to be following the comics storyline almost to the letter with barely any changes. Personally, with the way Xander acts regarding the criminals on Earth, I think he would be a lot more outspoken when they arrived at the trial towards the judges and manhunters in regards to them coming to Earth and doing whatever they want in hunting down GL. If they have the right to do that, then shouldn't Xander have the right to take the judges and manhunters back to earth to face charges for the destruction they caused? Weren't any humans hurt during the battle with the manhunters? Are thay somehow exempt from prosecution?

Personally, I would rather have seen Xander respond to the tribunal that he was there to take them into custody for trial on earth for sending the manhunters after GL and all the destruction they caused. I wonder what you would have wrote as their response. Would they consider themselves above Earth law? How about a one shot scene showing how that would have played out?

Btw, my rating was for this chapter only a 2 in regards to the changes in the story, because so little was changed.

P.S.

Sorry about that, I accidently left out a line. I meant that Xander should have been GL's lawyer and use those arguments to defend GL to give the others time to investigate. Then you could still follow the episode plot.

Then i suggest you stop reading now because while there will be original events in this fic, i will still adhere to storyline when i choose which episodes to use, they will be altered of course to adapt to his character but i can only stray so far from the base idea of the episode. This is how it was intended to be from the start for i never stated this was pure OC in any of my opening or closing comments, i while alter events yest but i must stay true to the work that inspired me.

That is my greatest challenge to find a way to take that which is old and give it a new twist.

Why don't you just write smaller chapters? Updates would be faster then. Also, how far along the next chapter of "Alexander Belmont" coming along?

Good chapter. I didn't really get a visual on the manhunters and their power rods, but the plotting and character moments were good.

Good chapter.

I'm enjoying your remade combination universe.

I do have it on my fav list on FFN. And here is that 10 I mentioned for making me laugh.

Just found your story and it was a good read. However, the first chapter specifically the conversation between the Scoobies almost turned me away. At the point in time where you started the story Xander didn't really have any reason to suspect that Buffy wouldn't deal with Angelus especially since the most anyone would know she was planing on killing him at the mall she even stated that what he had done was making it easier to kill him. It wasn't until after they destroyed the judge that she realized that she couldn't.
Also Willow saying anything about doing magic at this point doesn't fit. Since she only started practicing when she found books amongst Jenny's stuff when she took over Jenny's classes after she died.
I can give you his reaction to Buffy because of the way you have her act, but the statement by Willow just doesn't fit with what was going on in the series at this point. Especially since it was used only as a reason for Willow to side against Xander, if there had been some other reason to bring this out now it would have made better sense.
However, other than that part of the first chapter your story is well done.

Great handling of the trial of GL. I hope that Flash and Fire can date for at least a little while.

Great story, great chapters!