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Review of chapter "Dawn's Plan Part II" from Mcspender
Review:
And today's lesson is: Suck it Althanea, that's what you get for being an easily scared witch :P.

Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Indeed! scared, arrogant and wanting to control everything... not a good combo.

Blue
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [21 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn's Plan Part II" from Misty
Review:
So Althanea's about to get her just desserts, Dawn's connected to Giles with both Ethan & Willow helping & this could maybe work..... You're almost getting my hopes up that Giles could come back to us.... Thank you for another astonishing chapter x
Comments from author:
Indeed. Yes, this might just work. More will be revealed in the next chapter, coming by Monday at the latest. You're more than welcome. Thank you for your continued support.

More soon.

Peace,

Blue
Review By [Misty] • Date [21 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn's Plan Part II" from Dmitri
Review:
That was intense. Please continue. (And Ethan, as always, is involved.)
Comments from author:
Thank you. More very soon. Ethan... i really like Ethan, and I really do miss poor Robin Sachs.

Blue
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [21 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn's Plan Part II" from burmafrdnow
Review:
too much to ask if we can all sing

"DING DONG THE WITCH IS DEAD"
Comments from author:
hehehehe... Sing your song my dear!
to all ambitious witches: be careful who you mess with, right? :-)

Blue
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [21 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn's Plan Part II" from Harry
Review:
Well Althena, you TRIED to interfere in this matter, and you got SHUT DOWN! Your own Coven, along with Red, took you down. Now, its time for Dawn Patrol to go to work and get Giles back. And if anyone wants to try and explain this when its done, just say that it was something similar to what happens in the Bermuda Triangle.
Comments from author:
On behalf of Cuddy, I'd love to hear the Bermuda Triangle explanation, because I got nothin'! :-)

Yes, Althanea... got shut down... And you don't know the half of it. More in the next chapter. Lots of interesting little differences on the other side. More soon. thank you for your review and your support. It is very much appreciated.

Blue
Review By [Harry] • Date [21 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "She came in through the bathroom..." from Dmitri
Review:
Well, Cordy's back for real. Let the sarcasm commence!
Comments from author:
Yes, indeed. This may very well be my favorite pairing to write.

blue
Review By [Dmitri] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "She came in through the bathroom..." from ianquest
Review:
Brilliant! I could see it like I was watching an episode - excellent characterisation, and you really caught the character's voices. Bravo!
Comments from author:
Thank you! Takes a grateful bow! I love writing those two... it's like... mixing two volatile chemicals and watching the colorful, noisy reaction reaction! So much fun.

Blue
Review By [ianquest] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "She came in through the bathroom..." from Mcspender
Review:
Dawww, they do really love each other xD!!!.
Cool chapter, see ya!!!.
Comments from author:
Yup! Love at first bite! Or at least biting sarcasm!

Peace,

blue
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "She came in through the bathroom..." from bucksavage
Review:
Those two are totally screwed up.....perfectly screwed up. That's a scary amount of sarcasm they have between the two of them, is the world ready for that much sarcasm? Will they care if it is? *laughs* Probably not. But hey, that's the fun part right? *smirks*

House always needed someone to keep him on the path, to keep him from going too far; Wilson does what he can, but he's only one man. Cordelia can, if anyone ever could, keep him together. Or she'll kick his ass trying. *laughs*
Comments from author:
Yup, they are I think the perfect amount of screwed up and peculiar. No, I don't think the world is ever ready for that much sarcasm or brutal telling it like it is-ness! but it's definitely fun if you like watching combat sports!

House definitely needs someone to keep him from edging over from difficult and cranky into pure, self destructive cussedness. If there ever was a one, Cordelia's his demon! I'm not sure if she'll keep him together, but there's is definitely a forever kind of thing!

Blue

EDIT: wonder how Xander's gonna feel when he realizes he dated his father! :-)
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "She came in through the bathroom..." from Misty
Review:
OMG! How screwed up & perfectly sweet. Seriously, Cordy & House are so perfect for each other, its almost scary... But what about Giles? You're starting to really worry me. Thank you for another fabtastic chapter x
Comments from author:
Yeah, they are screwed up... humans are that way. Yes, they are kind of perfect together, aren't they... a match made in some kind of crazy quilt, sarcastic version of heaven! :-) Don't worry about Giles... don't worry your purty little 'ead about all those serious thingses... (crocodile grin).

More tomorrow... or soonish, anyway...

Blue
Review By [Misty] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "She came in through the bathroom..." from Cordyfan
Review:
Poor Cordy... Such an undignified way to regain consciousness and bet she hated the idea of someone cleaning her up, too! Writers always seem to forget certain side-effects of being in a coma. Good to see that House is okay - and a perfectly logical reason behind him taking an OD. So House has his girl and Cordy has her guy. Now all we need is Althenea to be dealt with and - hopefully - Giles returned to the land of the living.

Thanks for writing this.
Comments from author:
You know my girl was UN-happy about this. Of course, being who I am, and knowing what I know, I couldn't make it prettified b/c that would not have been real. Yes, our girl is back, and soon to be kickin' poor House's bony arse back into shape!

All I'll say about the terrible/terrific two is that you don't ever want to be on their wrong side... particularly if you're allergic to hurt feelings and sarcasm.

Yup. more to come, probably tomorrow... wish me monsters.

Blue
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "She came in through the bathroom..." from Harry
Review:
OH YEAH! Queen C is back and loaded for bear! And first target is Gregg House! Time to get the other half of the Chase twins back in shape. Now, we need to get checking on Giles. If a certain head of a coven gets her way, Giles will NOT be back!!!!
Comments from author:
Queen C is alive and kickin'! It was so much fun to write these two together. I can imagine the two of them together in a room... leaving devastation in their wake! Yes, back to Dawn's plan tomorrow... Dawn and Giles and Althanea, OH MY! Speaking of lions, tigers and bears....

Hold onto your horses, if you can!

Blue
Review By [Harry] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn's Plan Part I" from (Moderator)Teri
Review:
Good chapters, but I keep going back to House. I am having trouble thinking he would try to kill himself BEFORE Cordy is actually dead. No problem believing he could do it after - although I would have hoped your House would have given at least a little thought to Xander. I hope everything is not quite as it seemed in that chapter's cliffhanger.
Comments from author:
You're right. He didn't try to kill himself. House just doesn't always think at all. I know it looks dire, but House is like Periplaneta americana, kind of hard to get rid of even if you want to! ;-) Trust me when I say there's more to everything than meets the eye. Read on, my dear. More will be revealed.

Blue
Review By [(Moderator)Teri] • Date [20 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn's Plan Part I" from bucksavage
Review:
Dawn is no fool, she knows what she is doing, her only problem is making sure it isn't interrupted. Of course that what Althanea, Queen of the Morons plans on doing. Travers was shortsighted, stubborn and had a stick up his ass that must have been implanted at birth. I'm starting to think, in a really creepy way, it's like Althanea has Travers up her butt. I mean, really? She calls him an arrogant ass, when she's acting WORSE than he did. Pot, kettle. Pot, kettle.

She's doing EXACTLY what she lambasted him for but with even less tact and compassion. How is that even possible? Someone should pull her aside, bitch slap her one, and remind here that arrogance, stubbornness and egotism are not gender specific.
Comments from author:
You're not wrong. You're not wrong. You're not wrong. i could answer every question or comment with that, but that would be boring. so... yes, yes, and yes.

Seriously. Althanea just... happened. I think people hate her more than they hated Monster or William. That's just... inspired. Of course, she's menacing our girl, so that's definitely part of it.

Poor Althanea. All my readers want to do her grievous bodily harm. GET IN LINE!

Blue
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn's Plan Part I" from ianquest
Review:
The tension mounts! I'm going to go nuts waiting for the next chapter, I just know it... :)

I had been beginning to wonder where the story was going, as everybody seemed to just be standing around talking to each other and having general personal melodrama, but you've more than made up for that! It's a great story, and my nerves thank you for the rapid update pace - I don't think I could stand having to wait longer for each new chapter!

I look forward to seeing where you're going with the story, and keep up the great work! (And yes, I know there's a heck of a lot of exclamation marks in this review, but the last two chapters call for it (!)) :D
Comments from author:
Don't worry, there will be another chapter soon. If not later today, then tomorrow.

In my defense... well, this story is like life... you live it... sometimes it's exciting, sometimes it's just life... but important things happen while you're just going about your day and dealing with your relatives and friends. I'm glad I've been redeemed, however.

Also glad I could update fast. Blame muse. He's setting the pace, and I'm trying to survive it. I can't sustain it forever, but fortunately, that won't be necessary.

Very glad you're excited. Thank you for your feedback and your compliments.

More soon,

Blue
Review By [ianquest] • Date [19 Feb 14] • Not Rated
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