Review of chapter "Chapter One - (V1.1 17.05.11)" from
HanzoReview:
♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story.♥
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Hanzo] • Date [11 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - (V1.1 17.05.11)" from
DustmoteReview:
Excellent Story.
Very enjoyable to read, though it may have been interesting to add a screen where at least Willow had to watch what her spell had done.
I look forward to the next installments.
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Dustmote] • Date [11 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - (V1.1 17.05.11)" from
oraReview:
Great start. I never liked Xander and Anya together. Sucks to be the baby with a destiny though.
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ora] • Date [11 May 11] • Not Rated
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michaelangeloReview:
Well written and very plausible, I really, really enjoyed reading this story.
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michaelangelo] • Date [11 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - (V1.1 17.05.11)" from
utenReview:
Very awesome start. The reactions of everyone will be quite interesting, although I think I'm most looking forward to Anya's reaction, when she finds out Willow has cost her, her boyfriend (unless they are engaged at this point). I also think Tara's and Xander's response will be extremely interesting as well, as I can't imagine them wanting to be near Willow at any time soon, and I especially look forward to Xander and Tara's interaction with each other.
I do like how the Goddess let her know that she was being punished, but I do wonder if it will be enough. I'm curious to see what plans the Goddess has for Xander and Tara.
I look forward to the next chapter a great deal.
Comments from author:
I am glad you have enjoyed the beginning of this story but I think you missed the notes section before the story began as it stated that this fic ignored anya and xander been a couple as it ignored spike and buffy been a couple. Just thought I'd point that out. The rest will be shown next chapter. (razial)
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uten] • Date [11 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One - (V1.1 17.05.11)" from
zimaReview:
Wow... I love Xander and Tara parings. This is a very good beginning and I can´t wait until Willows and Buffys reaction when they see them.
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zima] • Date [11 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - (V1.1 17.05.11)" from
YshuryReview:
good start. please more.
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Yshury] • Date [11 May 11] • Not Rated