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Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from killjoy
Review:
You know LOL...as much as I HATE Xander it still cracks me up a bit how easily distracted he is by food LOL.
Comments from author:
I glad you like that bit... I didn't think it was out of character. mmmmm
Review By [killjoy] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Gideon
Review:
Oh dear I can't see this ending well, Willow and the others will try to kill Jack if they find out he is the Father, and Buffy won't like that - neither will Jack's team!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from stahchild
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I really enjoy this story, your plot is interesting and im excited ro see where you plan to take this.

Please dont consider this a criticism of your story, its more of a question/observation. Are you planning to explain how Jack is so accepting of this, esp factoring in the age diff between him & buffy?
Review By [stahchild] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from grd
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I hope things are cleared up now. Dd not like the feeling that the Scoobies were trying to Exorcise Buffy.
Comments from author:
It was unusual the way, Buffy got preggers. I do understand her friends believing she was pregnant with a demon especially since she lived on the hell-mouth. And I imagine my reaction to such news and there you go. Willow. I believe she would be the one to blurt such information like that.
Review By [grd] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Lulubell
Review:
Great updates... I love the dynamic between Buffy and Jack, and even the rest of the team.. Buffy's friends are getting on my last nerve.. Even on the show they pissed me off more times than not... Cant wait for more..
Comments from author:
That's my feeling exactly, but I don't like to bash the Scoobies too much because I was called on it. So my take on it is "The Scoobies doesn't exist much in my stories."
Review By [Lulubell] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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I liked the extra scenes you put in here, as well as changing Jack and Sara's relationship a bit from the show. It wouldn't do for Jack to still be pining over his ex-wife.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from mithrilandtj
Review:
And Willow opens her big fat mouth.
Comments from author:
Yes...
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from serenityselena
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and there they go with their theory again...
their reactions will surely be funny when they will find out the truth ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seventeen" from Wolflady
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Ooooh, MAN! Willow really needs to learn how to curb her tongue. Ripping it out by the roots might work, but I doubt it. That thing has a life of it's own. If Buffy forgives Willow anytime in the next decade, I will be surprised.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from elfwyn
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Going great. I like the subtle humor and although the one scene with Jack was OOC perhaps you can play it off as him reacting to the pregnancy. You know gets craving, phantom pains, wacked out emotions, eccentially everything Buffy has to deal with...it could perhaps bring them closer, a bonding experience. I don't know who to feel sorry for, SG1 or the Scoobies/Angel gang when they meet...whom will kick who's butt?
Comments from author:
I knew it.. after reading it back I thought . That"s not Jack. As for whom will kick who's butt? Read and find out. Thanks for the review!
Review By [elfwyn] • Date [8 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from killjoy
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I like this...mostly because it doesn't have the normal part where the Buffy bunch show up throwing their weight around "i know the President" and making the SG bunch look stupid like you see in many Stargate/BTVS crossovers.I can also tell the Scoobies along with the Fang Gang are going to come in like rabid dogs thinking Buffy has a demon pregnancy and won't listen to a word anyone says lol.
Comments from author:
When I write fanfiction. I tend to focused on the main couples(meaning Buffy and someone else and not on the Gang. Scoobys will be in the background. Although there will be confrontation about the demon baby.
Review By [killjoy] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from chaosrachel
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I agree with EasterCat the story just took a tremendous dive with all the out of character's and the ridiculous scenes "orgasmic food".....really I mean come on. Also please proofread before posting that could help the story. Its a bit distracting. The story really did start off great but now............
Review By [chaosrachel] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from EasterCat
Review:
Your story is getting to be too difficult to read with all the errors. Coupled with the ridiculous pancake orgasm scene, I'm going to have to give this a break.
Even if you can't find a beta reader, you should proofread your stories.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [EasterCat] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from bradsan
Review:
Ok, she gets an orgasmic from food and shows it while complete strangers are sitting around her. You think very low of Buffy (women)don't you.
Comments from author:
I am choosing not to respond to this review. Thanks.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm a little confused why you decided to say it was a week later as the development and plot seemed like a day later, possibly two. Other than that, expected Buffy to say, "Jimmy Chu shoes."
Comments from author:
Major mistake there. Sorry I didn't catch that!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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