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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from serenityselena
Review:
well... that was interesting...
hope to read more soon ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [17 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
poor Jack. Love the chapter
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [16 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from WolfWriter
Review:
I kinda expected Jack to have a complete, obscenity laden meltdown, but then, one can't have everything.

Looking forward to more of this. It's great stuff!
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [16 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well... only a few tense errors, and you did warn us. Meanwhile, good job at outlining some of the alternate continuity elements. Jocye dying earlier, no mention of Dawn or Dracula (the episode before Dawn appeared), and Xander thankfully enrolled in college.
Comments from author:
Thank you.. I am glad you see the warning. I do admit I am very bad with grammar etc. Glad you you love the story too.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [16 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Wolflady
Review:
I am not sure who I feel most sorry for, Buffy or Jack. Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [16 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from elfwyn
Review:
Although it needs a bit of editing, it is a great story line. I like the idea of Loki using Jack's sperm to impregnate Buffy. However, the question remains how will Buffy find Jack...perhaps her dreams? Or will Thor help with either by telling Jack what Loki did or having them meet? Please continue this fic!
Review By [elfwyn] • Date [16 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spk
Review:
I just love this storyline. Can't wait to see what you do with it. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [12 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Gideon
Review:
I see your story is still not run past a beta. That doesn't make it a bad story - it is still engaging, but it could be soo much better! Almost every verb in this chapter is in the wrong tense :( But that will be the last time I mention it- promise!
I hope we still get to see the whole story through to the end.
Comments from author:
Thanks.. I was not planning to post this story, so I didn't get beta. However. I am looking for someone. So If you have any ideas please let me know.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [12 May 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Is this a companion piece or another possibility of how the story goes?
Comments from author:
This is another version of the same story. This was written first, then I change to a POV, because at the time I thought it work better.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from serenityselena
Review:
like the start very much....
can`t wait to read more ^_^
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
And things start to heat up! Really loving this story. Can't wait to see more, good job.
Comments from author:
More is on its way.. thanks for the reviews
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Netchka
Review:
Continue this story as soon as possible please it's quite good.
Comments from author:
Thanks.. I do have several more chapters of the story.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [12 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
Hmmm, very interesting. I would will the scoobies think it's a demon baby and if so what will Buffy do? Anyways can't wait to see where you go with it. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
I agree with you... See the next chapter.
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [11 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Interesting story. I'm sure Buffy will continue to wish it was a dream for some time to come! I wonder how she will track down the Father? I did notice a large number of misplaced words and gramatical and tense errors. You might want to read through the next chapter an extra time or two to get rid of some of the errors. If English is not your first language you might want to run it past a beta who is more fluent.
Comments from author:
Thanks Gideon your review was very insightful. But as I stated at the beginning, this story is unbeta. I know there are lot of grammatical errors, but my decision to post it as is, depend on several issues. 1. Because I had receive several inquiries regarding this story. And 2. The Surrogate is another version of Second Chance. Same story different POV.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [11 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CadenceCascade
Review:
This has some interesting components. I'm interested in how it will turn out!
Review By [CadenceCascade] • Date [11 May 11] • Not Rated
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