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Review of chapter "Prolog: Some Kinda Party..." from weirdbutgifted
Review:
Interesting start - one problem though, it seems that the death of Jean Claude was the only AU part of the AB-verse, and without him there everything still ran exactly the same way for the others, i.e. Warrick died when he came to St. Louis as a part of the Council to make sure that Jean Claude wasn't growing too strong. Here, Jean Claude had been dead for a very long time prior to that, and yet things still played out the same way? It doesn't ring true, at least not without a fair amount of plausible exposition explaining why the timeline didn't change. Alternatively, you might have them come from different, parallel versions of the AB-verse.
Comments from author:
While JC was the biggest change, from a while different tree of reality instead of a branch, Seraphina died the first time she tried to institute her scheme to gain power instead of by fire when Anita and Cops burned her house down. Damien died instead of his fellow-viking buddy when his Mistress got in a snit and decided to show all the other Master vamps that it was HER power that allowed her people to walk in sunlight. I can't remember if Gretchen died in cannon yet...

Warrick, however, was from cannon ABVH. So yeah.
Review By [weirdbutgifted] • Date [15 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prolog: Some Kinda Party..." from CrystalBlaze
Review:
You know, when Cordy wakes up--and she will--there's gonna be a rather disappointed fallen Power. And maybe not for very long.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [15 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prolog: Some Kinda Party..." from ebony
Review:
OMG this is going to be very interesting considering that they are all vampires now and Xander is JC lite.
Comments from author:
So who wants to try and be Master of the City?
Review By [ebony] • Date [15 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prolog: Some Kinda Party..." from feynstrom
Review:
Lass los! - Let go!
No. Nicht Damien. Willow. Lass mein Bein los. Ich muss mein Schwert finden! Und Buffys Hosen! - No. Not Damien. Willow. Get off my leg. I have to find my sword! And Buffy's Pants! (Changed the actual sentences a bit. Your version if translated directly is too clumsy in German. Especially for somebody just waking up.)
Ich hatte keine Ahnung dass Du das mit Deiner Zunge anstellen kannst. - I had no idea you could do that with your tongue. (Changed from the polite 'Sie' to the familiar 'Du'. I don't think Harmony/Gretchen would use the polite address for her bed partner.)
Gott sei Dank. - Thank God. (It's the usual German equivalent expression.)
Comments from author:
Ah ha! Thank you! Your versions look so much nicer than mine... will be editing them in shortly.
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [15 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prolog: Some Kinda Party..." from jormunguard
Review:
Definitely has potential, really interested in seeing where you take this story. I will have to admit though that you have rather strange choices in who became which character. I mean mainly about who became master and minion level vamps kinda strange.
Comments from author:
I assure you, there's a method to my madness. Or at least there is supposed to be. Also, just because the person they turned into was a master/minion doesn't mean they will stay at that level. Though may take them a hundred or so years to grow stronger...
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [14 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prolog: Some Kinda Party..." from evilredknight
Review:
Real good. Well, except for the Joyce/Xander hook up. THAT rates a 12 on the ewww, scale.
Please, please, please do not revisit that ever. Massive quantities of BRAIN BLEACH now needed.
Xander hooked up with anyone but his brain eating demon date (or Anya) is just a big cringe waiting to happen.
Though maybe Harmony. The idea of one of his abusers being hot for him kind of works for me.
Comments from author:
I was thinking about getting him hooked up with Anya still. She likes Orgasms, he's part incubus... match made in heaven (hell?) to me.
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [14 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prolog: Some Kinda Party..." from SamDragon
Review:
Interesting. Oh no,it just hit me who Cordy is.What happens when she wakes up?
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [14 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prolog: Some Kinda Party..." from borgrabbit
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Cheer-ku:

Fantastic story
Just now reaching chapter one
Muse be kind of fun
‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺‼☺♥☺‼

Lots o vamps, shame one wasn't Ceres.
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [14 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prolog: Some Kinda Party..." from Ramenth
Review:
Killing off Jean Claude to save Asher's servant seems a little odd, but good other than that.
Comments from author:
Yup. Even Xander noted that, but I wanted non-whipped pre-Anita JC, and that seemed like the best time to do it.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [14 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prolog: Some Kinda Party..." from superbrutal
Review:
Looks like its going to be very good, im looking forward to more.
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [14 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prolog: Some Kinda Party..." from Greywizard
Review:
This looks like it has the potential to drive EVERYONE involved nuts! Great work! ;-)

Looking forward to seeing more of this, whenever you can get it out.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [14 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prolog: Some Kinda Party..." from Neverwillmini
Review:
The potential in this story is tantalizing. All of the new Anita-type vamps (it seems minus the 'dead during the day' part) will probably be thoroughly disgusted by the Sunnydale vamps and look down on Angel as an inferior/weak species. Can't wait to see where you take it.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [14 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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