This was a fantastic story. It had all of the elements that make for good reading. I loved seeing what came next and the truth behind Willow and Buffy's changes. It was also good to see Faith and Dawn in this story. I hope that Real Life picks up for you and becomes less horrible.
Thanks Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where do we go from here?" from VillageOrchid
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Unexpected choices and nicely done. I probably would have picked the hand-maiden who couldn't interfere "punishment" for Willow, as it would preserve her personality and give her some time to think things through...but just as well not a chance to fester.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Something Wicked" from VillageOrchid
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I'm guessing Xander was given their powers? Tainted or not?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting of the Spandex" from VillageOrchid
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Interesting dynamic. Also to show that Xander had enough will-power to change what the "green energy" looked like in the spectrum .... or to show more than one source of power (the "divine" power he was "blessed" with?). Love the chapter name! Looking forward to the mostly unbreakable boys that show up at the dance. And yes, I was wondering about patrols.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated