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Review of chapter "Closure" from inqonehundredandone
Review:
I noticed the new story and remembered enjoying the first one so decided to give it a chance. It's a good story and nicely written. Well done.

I think you need to work on your conversations. They seem a little stiff, like the speaker has carefully considered what to say and made sure that they cover all the points. It also affect the rest of your writing to an extent though it only really bothers me in the conversations.

Tom
Review By [inqonehundredandone] • Date [10 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Closure" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Looking forward to more soon.
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Closure" from Rune
Review:
Sorry to hear life is rough right now, I hope it gets better soon.

You ended the story at a fine stopping point, yes it could go on, the best are neverending.

I'm looking forward to any more stories in this series, they will be great.
Review By [Rune] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Closure" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Closure" from Caliadragon
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This was a fantastic story. It had all of the elements that make for good reading. I loved seeing what came next and the truth behind Willow and Buffy's changes. It was also good to see Faith and Dawn in this story. I hope that Real Life picks up for you and becomes less horrible.

Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Closure" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Good ending.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Closure" from purrfus
Review:
Sorry to see this come to an end, but I love what you've done with the reality and the people.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Closure" from Omegaprime
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A nice ending to this story.

But I hope you can add more to this wonderful universe.

Is that a Xander/Zatanna pairing I see?

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Closure" from Almadynis
Review:
I really love this story. Please don't give up on it.
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Closure" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Closure" from VillageOrchid
Review:
A nice stopping point. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where do we go from here?" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Unexpected choices and nicely done. I probably would have picked the hand-maiden who couldn't interfere "punishment" for Willow, as it would preserve her personality and give her some time to think things through...but just as well not a chance to fester.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Something Wicked" from VillageOrchid
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I'm guessing Xander was given their powers? Tainted or not?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Closure" from Genuka
Review:
Great story. I hope you have another in the series in mind. If not that's okay to. Either way it was fun to play!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Closure" from mithrilandtj
Review:
COOL!
Will there be more?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [7 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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