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Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from physcocadiliac
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The fact the site is messing you about stinks - please please please stick with it even if you have to split chapters! My life would be deeply saddened by a slower posting schedule as I barely survive the time between chapters as it is! Here's hoping it's a temporary issue on the site.
Review By [physcocadiliac] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from Senko
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Blinks . . . um so how did you manage this update saying there's going to be a shortage of updates?
Review By [Senko] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Jamaica Blues Now for real" from spikesplayfulpet
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That sucks. Hopefully it will let you post. Maybe its a glitch. Here's hoping it works for you.
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [9 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down into the Valley of Fear" from FireWolfe
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I look forward to seeing more soon.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [8 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down into the Valley of Fear" from spikesplayfulpet
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Took me a little bit to get to a computer so that I could post my review. I think this was an excellent chapter. I have to say that I didn't see Simon's dad being Trueheart, that was a very nice twist. Kudos to you. I like that Sineya got to show that she can be the family protector and that she is getting to at least in some way enjoy being normal and not just the first slayer. I think it is going to be good for everyone, including her even if it is just in dreams and to occasionally virtually with Rowan. I like how you brought out the blood curse and how Cordelia dealt with it, along with Willow. Simon's dad being her great grandfather was a nice twist as well and now it only further integrates her into the whole family/Scooby dynamic. A good way to help Billy with Buffy dreamwalking and also a great way to deal with Rack. I wish the Son of a B would have died, but I understand that he is a good villain to have around on occasion.

Poor Kendra, thinking that she (or is she), a new slayer and that Buffy was dead. It was good to see that her training paid off and that she was able to fight off the vampires. It was cute and a little funny how she came right out of the bushes once Buffy put Joyce on speaker phone. Its nice to see her realize that she does have a family and that they aren't going anywhere. The ending with her and dawn and kit curled up sleeping was a nice way to end it.

Thanks for the update and keep up the great writing. I will be patiently awaiting your next one.
Review By [spikesplayfulpet] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Down into the Valley of Fear" from SpacedCadet
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"...there was a small, long-legged creature looking up at him, with a long, furry tail banded in black and white and with huge, startled eyes. It sat on it’s bum and looked around curiously for a second, then started to move off..."

He turned her into a Ring-Tailed Lemur ? I must say that indicates a very interesting, and unexpected, sense of humor!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [26 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down into the Valley of Fear" from AriaDragoncrest
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Excellent
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down into the Valley of Fear" from Cordyfan
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Great chapter, with a lot going on.

Nice to see that the First Slayer has appointed herself family protector, even if she's a little clumsy about it still.

Interesting introduction of Simon's father. A dyed-in-the-wool bastard, but a complex one, and I look forward to seeing how the revelations about the blood curse and The Shadow play out. Rack must die horribly, of course. Nice to see the Director having some personal trouble for once.

Good resolution to the Billy situation, but poor Kendra. At least Buffy will have a properly matched partner (once all the Council nonsense is trained out her sister).

Thanks for writing this.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [23 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Witches and Confused mothers" from fanreaderonetwo
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So True Heart was Meier XIV’s imprisoned soul. Wondering if his soul “went on” when the spell ended, or was it returned to the crystal or is it still wandering around as some sort of ghost? Image of a _very_ pissed XIV spirit playing gruesome poltergeist games on his and his kin’s enemies and tormentors. Image of The Director being ripped apart or driven away from his HQ and Rack being finished off.


Meier finished the circle before he answered. “Before I married, I loved a married woman. Her name was Constance. Constance Chase.”

If Meier XIV was Cordy’s Father’s Father, that might explain where he got the power to scare the WR&H lawyer, seven pricks from his “indicator ring” IIRC. That might also explain Cordy's powers came from, tho whether her strength is closer to XIV or XV is yet unknown.


I could really use a Meier family tree to keep track of the clan. Tho given all the unknown blood relatives that keep appearing and all the adoptions, it might better be described as a “family shrub”. grin

Why does the old song “I am my own Grandpa” come to mind when I think of the Meiers? Grin

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I'm_My_Own_Grandpa

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eYlJH81dSiw



I assume that “The Shadow” faked his death (“According to the Council, he died a century ago.”) and became ‘Mayor Wilkins I’, or else took over Wilkins body ala Amy’s mother. Amusing thought, that The Shadow was _always_ named Wilkins, and just faked his death and founded Sunnydale. Assuming a takeover, wondering if the real Wilkins was a powerful sorcerer _before_ being taken over, or all of the magic came from The Shadow. Maybe Wilkins was already powerful, The Shadow took him over and was able to keep and use most or all of their combined magical powers.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [23 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Witches and Confused mothers" from RedCalypso
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Okay, I'm a tad confused. Did Simon free Constance or did he just release her back to her "master"? Also, how will this affect Cordelia and Willow? Not that it really matters, since Joyce is bearing the next heir, but which one is more closely-related to the current Simon?
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [22 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down into the Valley of Fear" from Ishi
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Yay another chapter!! Love that you have explained why Simon 14 turned into such a butthead. As usual very well written and the characters are nicely 3 dimensional :-). Loving that Kendra is slowly turning into a Real Girl. I'm interested to see how she will handle being one of the Chosen Two. Please post again soon!
Review By [Ishi] • Date [22 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Down into the Valley of Fear" from ShalaDakiri
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You know, I'm not sure if I'm surprised or not that the show's writers didn't consider whether the Nightmare incident could have Called a new Slayer. (I'm going with canon version only made Buffy appear to be a vampire. They saw her with vamp face, didn't actually check for a pulse, and either the nightmare kept her from noticing, or her heart just slowed and didn't stop).

And, I'm guessing Kendra's reaction and running was part of the nightmares. I'm pretty sure that Buffy would prefer Kendra staying to protect their family if Buffy were to die and pass the Slayer to Kendra.

And, about the blood curse and Simon XIV... IIRC there were hints in previous chapters that something had happened to him during a visit to Sunnydale.

Edit: I don't know if it was intentional or not, but Mike's "She's dead! Everybody's dead, Dave!"... uhm were you trying to slip a Red Dwarf reference in there?
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [22 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down into the Valley of Fear" from zonianx
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Good chapter. I look forward to seeing if Kendra was called or was that well trained and if the use of magic opened up his magical pathways. The action was well done but I really liked the "taming" of the first slayer.
Review By [zonianx] • Date [22 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down into the Valley of Fear" from EllandrahSylver
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It's nice to see that Simon's father actually did love him. That curse is a truly nasty piece of work, and when the family figures out who is behind it, I have a feeling Sunnydale will be holding a surprise election.

I hope this particular misadventure at least opens Buffy's eyes about Mike's feelings. She deserves a boyfriend who will put her before himself.

I feel so bad for Kendra. It well be interesting to see if the slayer sprit stays with her, or if that battle was blind luck, good training, and adrenalin.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [22 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Down into the Valley of Fear" from Misty
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Fabtastic as always, thank you x
Review By [Misty] • Date [22 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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