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Review of chapter "Nesting and fast moves" from Tabercil
Review:
Well I was faced with the prospect of sitting for a long time in a laundromat waiting for my washing to finish up, so I decided to dump the entirety of this story to my netbook and read it through during the wait (having only recently come across this website). The reason for this review is one small phrase which made me literally laugh out loud and caused everyone else in the room to look at me: "She filed this one under ‘things that will make Buffy pound her head on the table.’" :)

I can't wait to go through the rest of the story.
Comments from author:
I love doing that to people. Don't forget to read the Devil of Sunnydale Elementary before you read chapter 39! ;-)

Glad you're enjoying the story, hope you enjoy the rest of the series as well.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Tabercil] • Date [23 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conflicting Rituals" from Blackett
Review:
Loved the update. I'm sorry that I don't review much, but I am a loyal follower and I read every chapter. *grins*
Comments from author:
Good to hear from you again, I always fear I lose early readers/recommenders when they don't review for a while, so I greatly appreciate the occasional word. Glad you're still enjoying it. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Blackett] • Date [23 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conflicting Rituals" from Mordare
Review:
Great chapter. Looking forward to the next. As well really wanting to see what happens with the mummy. Actually I had an odd idea thinking about her and wondered if it was possible for her to live off the eating of vampiric & demonic life forces. Thought that might be an interesting turn. Also might make a good story on its own.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I hope to get some Mummy in 57, yes. I considered that, it would give her a food supply, but it might also affect her negatively. You might want to make it a Challenge...

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Mordare] • Date [23 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conflicting Rituals" from PATM
Review:
There are plenty of red heads around aren't there? But I am a fan of Tara as heroine and would love to see more of her and her mother. I feel the phrase "caught up" is more accurate as the wording of "caught out" where it is used as refilling the candy supplies from the year before if there was any left.
Comments from author:
Yes, all the Weasley's come to mind. ;-) I like Tara too, she will be back, but not frequently for now. I was a bit confused about the caught up and caught out unitl I realized you meant cleaned instead of caught. Agreed on that and changed, thanks.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [PATM] • Date [23 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conflicting Rituals" from AllenPitt
Review:
In a weird way, I'm glad to see that the bad guys did prepare for the possibility of discovery, and had some defenses prepared. i.e. they're not idiots. Evil, but not stupid....
Meanwhile--wow, and this is Joyce with her powers not fully in place yet? ... One question: what about whitelighters? Penny can't call on Leo or whoever her WH is now? (admittedly that would make things too easy--just wondering what the rationale was. Probably that they can only heal witches who were injured fighting demons or something?-The "Elders" had a lot of 'rules' )-
Now if only Walsh can get a naquadah generator for her Adam project....
Comments from author:
Yes, opponents who are supposedly powerful and yet a pushover at the first opposition don't really work for me either.

Ayup, this is Joyce with only her subconscious powers, but it may take a long time for the 'active' parts to kick in. Also note what happened to Eileen...

I think I can fit the Whitelighters into chapter 58, or 57 if I make it a long one. Hmmm.

Welsh with Naquadah is never a pretty picture...

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conflicting Rituals" from LordSchmodder
Review:
I liked your idea of using Dulles. And kudos for making Kit shrewd enough to want to use her cast for getting more candy.
Thanks for posting.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I felt he fit. He, I fear lots of children have that sort of shrewdness. Kit just has a little more reason...

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [22 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conflicting Rituals" from Lithie
Review:
I wanted to say this is a good story that I've become addicted to read

For me it started as a simple light and easy reading that I even only start after you've posted the first chapter on the one about Faith (she's my weak spot I think you say in English) but it grows to a really interesting story that I now try to anticipate what might happen next or how Intel is going to react or who you might introduce next (you get the idea)

Congrats also to be able to treat some heavy subjects without losing its easy read

Now I'm going to look about reading the other story of this series... and wait for more
Comments from author:
Thank you, I appreciate the compliments.

The intertwining of universes and ideas is my favourite part of it and I'm glad you try and divine in advance what I might be planning. I just hope I don't become to obvious...
Parts of the story are fairly dark, but I've tried to intersperse some humour. I fear that Forever is too long is just very sad.

Hope you enjoy them as well, thanks for reviewing
Review By [Lithie] • Date [22 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conflicting Rituals" from war
Review:
Lucien should have listened to his friend. I'm surprised Joyce is willing to hand off his punishment to someone else instead of handling the matter herself.Oh well hope he enjoys eternity he's earned his.

Interesting vision Jenny got can't have been very enjoyable seeing that.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Well, since both are bastards...Lilith and the Grand Concordat have to decide on his fate, who deals out the actual punishment, that is open for debate.

No, seeing Frank ripping through the Watchers isn't very pleasant.

Thanks and thanks for revieiwing
Review By [war] • Date [22 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conflicting Rituals" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
yay halloween goodness

great update
Comments from author:
Thanks, just wait until I get to next year's...

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [22 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Conflicting Rituals" from Eureka
Review:
Glad they are better now! Kit can go Trick or Treating!!!! Hey and maybe Tara's Mom can dress up too! Glad they got that warlock! Who's soul is in the white stone? I think I may have missed something there.
Comments from author:
Actually, so am I. There is a dress for Eileen as well, and even Janet and Mary will get one. The nature of the soul will be addressed in teh next chapter, it may be known, but hasn't actually been written in the story, I couldn't find a good way to do so until now, but an attentive reading of the genealogies may give an inkling...

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Eureka] • Date [22 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Conflicting Rituals" from grd
Review:
Wonder what fit punishment is for a warlock that steals and sells souls. Eager to see what mischief Kit and Dawn can get into.
Comments from author:
It will be pretty bad, especially if the Ellis and Johnson Matriarchs get to enforce it. Kit and Dawn, misschief...actually I'm just glad right now they're still so young, that limits their options. Slightly.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [grd] • Date [22 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shocks to the system" from Obsidian
Review:
awesome so far I look forward to more! MORE! MORE MORE!
Comments from author:
Thank you, saturday is very near.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [19 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shocks to the system" from Shatterstar
Review:
Finished reading this story and I like it....although, to be honest, I felt like it kind of dragged a bit when you introduced the Charmed crossover. The SG1 introduction is a bit better.

I kind of miss the big, Joyce and Simon chapters from the beginning of the story, since that's what drew me to it, as well as Simon's moments with each of the children (Buffy, Dawn, Xander, Willow). Can we get more bonding like that, like when Simon talked to Xander about the bug lady thing and the abuse? I feel like this story is long overdue for a Summers family bonding moment. I mean, without all of the visiting relatives and all cause they're hard to keep track of.

I like Dave...but I don't think I've really warmed up to him yet, cause I'd rather Willow be paired with Oz or Tara >_>

Although...Amy and Tara. That'd be kind of interesting to see, I've gotta admit.

Interested to see where the Cordy storyline is going to go. She was always my favorite, so I hope she gets help soon.

Also, I don't know how it would be done but I would totally love it if Buffy's dream car came from Hank instead of Simon. That would be hilarious.
Comments from author:
Thank you. The problem with crossovers is that you intorduce a new dynamic and it takes time for the dynamics to start moving together, but I'm glad you stuck around to read it. There will be more 'nuclear family chapters' pretty soon, everybody else does have a life after all. Think Christmas and Thanksgiving. (Though some relatives will be there.)

Oz and Tara eh? Ah well, No shame there those are good pairings. Amy and Tara? Hmmm. We'll see where we get. Though Amy, in canon, likes boys. ;-)

The Cordy story line is dear to my heart.

Simon would not buy Buffy any type of motorized vehicle at this time, far too dangerous, so Hank may be her only option...

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Shatterstar] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shocks to the system" from etienneofthewestwind
Review:
Interesting choice for the Kendall family story time.

Sam and Daniel are clearly going to be looking harder into this town, even if Sam shrugs off the vampire comment. And I don't think Jack would get a better *reception* than Major Davis, though with Evy, the SG command and letting them get to know each other may hold some appeal. I Jack can grovel enough. Or Great-grandad makes a good impression...
Comments from author:
Hmm, isn't it just? Sam is going to go look long and hard and she's going to get a shock when Jack arrives.

Sam doesn't know Jack will not get a good reception, she just thinks it wise to get a (much) senior officer to get Major Ellis to comply with her orders. As for what will happen when Jack meets the Family...

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [etienneofthewestwind] • Date [18 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shocks to the system" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
As always, the developing plot leaves me wanting to know what happens next, and looking forward to the next part.

I feel like the many subplots are gradually coming together, even as you introduce new elements and find even more ways to shift and bend what you've already brought to the table.

I'm not going to pick too much at any specifics today, since I'm waiting to see what you do with some of the things I noticed, but I'm definitely watching. ^_^
Comments from author:
Thank you. A lot of things are coming together, yes, and new bits will be introduced. I'm a very big believer in the doctrine of 'there's no such thing as one big bad' So lots of the nasty things in the woodwork, with plenty of warning for the readers.

I hope the continuation will be found as enjoyable. Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [17 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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