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Review of chapter "Shocks to the system" from Senko
Review:
You know the more I read this story the more I wonder if there are any families not commuted to good or evil, or mind controlled victims. Should be interesting to see SH1's reaction since the BTVS seem to be of an opinion that hiding information about the supernatural, in general if not them in particular, can be dangerous.

As for the school you rather skipped the meeting but Chases's attitude us very dangerous particularly if that's a private school I know if my kid attended a school where this incident happened and the board ONLY punished the children involved I'd be pulling them out and sending them to a different school.

Oh and hank needs someone to tell him his daughter's affections don't depend on money since you'r going with this version of him
Comments from author:
Lots of families are commited to neither side. However, they would make pretty dull reading. Heh. Maybe I should wirte a story about that...

Sunnydale Elementary is a public school, most parents can't afford to send their kids to the private schools in Sunnydale, but the attitude is pretty bad, yes.

We'll be getting to Hank. Don't worry. Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Senko] • Date [16 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shocks to the system" from evilredknight
Review:
You know, even before I got to your A/N I was thinking, Thank God, things are starting to happen.
Not that I don't love the story, but there's been a LOT of set-up. Which considering the number of crosses shouldn't be surprising.

Waiting for more.
Comments from author:
There will be a lot more happening, several things will be cleared up and done. Hopefully I'll have more action the next few weeks...Glad you're enjoying it.

Next update on monday. And thanks for reviewing
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shocks to the system" from Panaka
Review:
Oh Sam. The colonel will not like you handing him that hot potato. BTW Samantha, prepare to have your mind blown.
Adds Victor Chase to the list of people who need a kineticly energetic date with a .50 round.
You tell her Evy. Mean old captain trying to take your mom away.
The Peru stuff is going to start off the Impata arc?
Penny, stop scarring your grandaughters. It's not nice.
Poor Kit.
Comments from author:
Sam can't officially activate Arlene, she's inferior in rank, so either Major Davis or Jack would have to do it. Jack is superior in rank, and Arlene is bound to be difficult, so Jack had better step up to the plate.

Yes, poor Evy is not having an easy time of it. Yup, the Peru stuff is part of the Mummy girl arc. Penny is just getting back at them for nights of worrying while the girls went out on dates. ;-)

Kit is not having an easy time either. Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Panaka] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shocks to the system" from Eureka
Review:
Vid; Kit is gonna be OK isn't she? They have to make her understand that she IS wanted there and that she is NOT causing more problems for them.

TARA's there!!! YEAH!!! So Carter and Daniel FINALLY get there but man! can you say BAD TIMING! LOL I don't think they are gonna have as easy time as Carter was thinking they would AND they got a very nice intro to Sunnyhell's nightlife since they did NOT listen to Bottley's (Correct spelling?) advice to STAY IN after dark. Although if they had not of disobeyed they they would not have found out that one of their own is there besides them. LOL
Keep em coming Vid!
Comments from author:
Kids can be difficult that way, especially in the early days of fostering, or after divorces, etc. The Family will do their utmost to show they do not think she's trouble.

Bad Timing? Wait until Jack meets Arlene... Is there one Crossover between SG and BtVS in which the SG team does not ill advisedly run into the nightlife? ;-)

I will certainly try. And thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shocks to the system" from Garmorn
Review:
I can only say that this story and the related ones have become the high points in my week.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I feel honoured. And thanks for reviewing
Review By [Garmorn] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shocks to the system" from AllenPitt
Review:
At least they're not handling the Shumash Indian stuff (from S4).. Xander is not ready for the funny syphilis.
I sure hope Mr. Chase goes to jail for tax evasion sooner than in the series. Yikes. And her dad may be a half brother of Simon's...?
The Air Force isn't going to take 'no' for an answer on the reactivation, signing up for the Reserves is a serious step. Poor Marcie.
Too bad this isn't' farther along in the SG-1 storyline, being able to use the Asgard tele porter and more Zatnikels would come in handy. Though a meeting between Daniel & Giles could be lots of fun. Teal'c would be interesting to see in Sunnydale, but it'll be quite a while before he's trusted off base, I imagine.
So, Inca Mummy Girl coming up.....
Comments from author:
Heh. I think at this point Xander would want sex before getting funny syphillis. No, Victor Chase is not Simon's half brother.

The Airforce is not going to take no for an answer, this is true. But as to the exact results. Daniel will meet Giles, Teal'c will take a while to show up yet. And indeed, Inca Mummy girl coming up.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shocks to the system" from war
Review:
Wonder if Cordy's father is one of Simon's half brothers that's out there?

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
I can swear with my hand on my heart that Victor Chase is not one of Simon's half brothers.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [war] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Delinquent Fathers" from (Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
Another great chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you, and thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Delinquent Fathers" from etienneofthewestwind
Review:
Definitely setting up a lot with this chapter...
Comments from author:
Thank you, yes, I am. Problem is that that slows things down. I hope to pick up speed in 'story time' november and December, but I fear too much will happen there too.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [etienneofthewestwind] • Date [14 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Delinquent Fathers" from PATM
Review:
Lovely lovely lovely.
Comments from author:
Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Review By [PATM] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Delinquent Fathers" from Tanydwr
Review:
I have a fondness for etymology that you keep tickling - I love the Halliwell/holy well note.

I also look forward to seeing if Dawn and Buffy develop any witching talents.

Hank is an idiot, although his heart is sort of in the right place, he doesn't understand that it isn't the money that draws the girls to Simon, but the fact that he's there. Way to shoot himself in the foot.

I hope and pray for Piper/Leo. Don't mind about the others, but Piper/Leo is too wonderful not to happen. We've also had precious little reference to the Elders and Whitelighters, so it would be interesting to see how they work in this world.

I also love that Simon and the older generation keep calling Angel 'Liam' - it's a nice reminder of his soul, and the sins he made as a human, as well as avoiding the fact that Angel is a shortening of Angelus, who was one of the worst vampires in history. I've read one or two of the Buffy books, and one particular torture by Angelus still leaves me feeling queasy whenever I remember it. Being associated with his old identity is not good.

Keep up the good work - I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
I like etymology, you can play around with it endlessly...Well, if anything happens, it will be in San Francisco.

Hank is indeed an idiot. He may yet learn, but it may be too late. Piper/Leo I find a lot easier to stomach than most other pairings in Charmed. I rather liked Cole, for some reason. There's a reason for the lack of Whitelighters, I'll get to that. Don't worry.

Liam is a reminder to him that calling himself Angel is just adumb way to torture himself for things he did not do. I try to keep the torture descriptions short and not too gruesome. THe gruesome ones I use at the gaming table...

Thanks and thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Delinquent Fathers" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
awesome updates

Will Xander and Cordie have any suprise powers?

I think Xander could be a fire elemental. He did set that book on fire by just reading from it

can't wait for more
Comments from author:
Thank you. As for Xander and Crody, you'll have to wait and see... Didnt the book set itself on fire? Need to see that again..

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Delinquent Fathers" from war
Review:
That is one nasty counter measure they thought up, Simon must really be pissed.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Simon, Joyce, Lilith and numerous others, yes...

Thanks, and thanks for reviewing.
Review By [war] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Delinquent Fathers" from Roth
Review:
I haven't reviewed anything you've done in a while. It's another great chapter in my opinion. You've added to the richness of the Mystical of the Universe you are writing in, as well as blending in the various universes into one big crossover event. Well done.
Comments from author:
Ha, I was wondering where you'de gotten to. Glad to see you still around. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. THe problem is that a lot of my ideas need planting and then it takes time for them to grow...And we're working up to the major league crossings, people are now finally converging on Sunnydale.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Roth] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Delinquent Fathers" from Eureka
Review:
1st off, someone needs to slap hank in the face and let him know that those girls DON'T need his dang money! They NEED his time and attention!
2nd, Good chapter. Yes, it may have been mostly information, but it was info that we can use for later chapters...RIGHT?
Comments from author:
1st, totally agreed. 2nd, yes every snippet of information will be used in later chapters. Some of it was to answer in canon questions asked in reviews (Mike's state) Practically eveyrthing I write can and will be used again in a future chapter ...;-)

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Eureka] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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