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Review of chapter "Guardian Angels" from PATM
Review:
I had a authorization failure so my comments here went away. I loved the cliff hangers vampire ambush the flying rescue of Buffy and Marigold mysteries but it had Joyce. A great reason to read this story. Love each chapter.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I get that too, Highly annoying. Joyce of course, is the reason for writing this story...

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Review By [PATM] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Guardian Angels" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
Brat. I really shouldn't complain about cliffhangers, but... *grins*

So, still really loving the story, and cannot WAIT until Jack meets Evy... *wicked smirk* kinda looking forward to Jon meeting her, for that matter...
Comments from author:
I don't use them often, but in this case I just had to. As for Jack meeting Evy...soon. Well...within the next five chapters...

Thanks, and thanks for reviewing!
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [19 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Guardian Angels" from Eureka
Review:
GRR!! Cliffie!! I hope you update soon after leaving that big of a cliffhanger!
Jolly good show ol' bean.
Comments from author:
Sorry, next saturday, I need the time to actually write the chapter. And apparently I should do cliffhangers more often...

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Review By [Eureka] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Guardian Angels" from rexcalon
Review:
.....You bastard if i didn't love this story so much i would hunt you down for this cliffhanger lol.

But good work as always im really looking forward to Marigold being taken down, and as to your hacker circle some of my fav people are in it. I can't wait for more of your work its a great read and a wonderful Fic keep up the good work :)
Comments from author:
If you did, it would preclude any further chapters...

Marigold, ah yes...The Hackers, well as I said elsewhere it's going to take a while for all of them to age suffciently for Simon to allow them back.

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Review By [rexcalon] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Guardian Angels" from (Current Donor)ayg
Review:
So now Giles has told Jenny all of his dark secrets. And Jenny still plays innocent and ignorant about Angelus. That's going to lead to a really nasty fight, I think.

Is it the Master (the one trapped in the Hellmouth) who is planning and organizing the ambushes?

Now that Buffy knows the flying person is a Chelia, will she ask Dave about it? How upset will she and Willow be about the fact that he knew who it was and didn't say anything? In that sort of fight, it would have been easy for the flier (Michael, right?) to be hit by mistake and hurt.

The Hellmouth is affecting Joyce? Making her more angry about things? Is it affecting Simon, too, or does he have too little power to be affected?

Stupid of Sunnydale? Well, that may not be nice but it's actually a good name for a non-evil magic-user knowingly moving to the Hellmouth.

Is Witch Queen Lillith? You said it wasn't Jenny.

Is Marigold and the NID the same organization? Or only partly connected in some way? If Jon ran into them in the fifties and they still exist, they obviously have lots of power and influence. Will they manage to escape again? If they had forced witches to join them, the Grand Magister should have done something about it. That would have been Simon's father in the fifties. I'm surprised he didn't kill them all for being a threat to his own power.
Comments from author:
Yes. The worst being he's a spawn of the Nobility. As for Jenny...maybe she'll wise up.

I am going to ask you to be patient as to who is organizing the ambushes, next week should show you that.

Well now...how will Willow react...next time as well. That will be one busy chapter...

Yes, Joyce is affected, but how remains to be seen. Anger is one. Simon doesn't need the Hellmouth to get angry. We'll get to that later...

SoS- Jon's idea exactly.

As for the last, very pertinent questions: Next chapter! When the identity of the Grand Magister will be revealed as well...

However, if you want the answers sooner...drop me a line and I'll give you spoilers.

Thanks for the long and thoughtful review
Review By [(Current Donor)ayg] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Guardian Angels" from FireWolfe
Review:
Damn I hate cliffhangers. This is pretty good. I do hope Marigold gets squished. It should be fun to see everyone run headlong into each other. I can hardly wait to see where this goes. I think maybe Jenny will see the other side of the curse. Maybe it will be a good thing. Also the bird creature sounds interesting.Maybe he would be a better match for Buffy then that idiot Angel.
Well done as always.
Fire
Comments from author:
Heheheheh. Marigold...Well there are reasons they still exist... A few more chapters and the headlong running will start in earnest.

My twenty year dead pet rabbit (Evil biting son of a bitch that was) would be a better match for Buffy than The Amazing Hair Product Poster Boy... ;-) But then, she never had much luck relationship wise...

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Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Guardian Angels" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
Simon finally popped the question yay

cute Abby and McGee interaction

great update
Comments from author:
Yup, now all Joyce has to do is answer...

I fear it will be some of the last Mcabbs for the foreseable future. Simon does not like calling in under age hackers, especially not to the Hellmouth...

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Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Guardian Angels" from war
Review:
Jon is not someone you want angry at you. Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Oh, this was only mildly miffed. Now if it had been The Director...

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Review By [war] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His demonic visage" from Eureka
Review:
So I take it that Jenny and he are FINALLY going to come clean to each other? Hopefully Mike is there to help protect Buffy like last time.
Comments from author:
Finally? They´ve only dated once and actually I´m still months ahead of the series...But yes, it is about time. As for Mike being there, you´ll have to wait until next saturday.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [11 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His demonic visage" from EricJablow
Review:
You know, I was expecting the most-feared hacker of all, Mrs. Roberts, who can rewrite IP packets in real time while wearing oven mitts, and who named her son, "Robert'); DROP TABLE Students;--."
Comments from author:
I´m not going to mix XKCD in here as well...Hat guy should not be near children.

But the notion is amusing...

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Review By [EricJablow] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His demonic visage" from war
Review:
should be interesting to see how Jenny responds to the news of Buffy being the slayer.

someone has very good intel on the group and well disciplined vamps on their payroll. to bad Giles didn't know the number for the bodyguards.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Heh, well in canon her reply was along the lines of but she´s so tiny!

Giles will remedy that oversight, I assure you. He´s not used to modern technology or having a slayer with bodyguards. He´ll get there, don´t worry.

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Review By [war] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His demonic visage" from grd
Review:
Amazing what you have created. Love how the action is picking up. Your crossovers are surprising and outstanding. Eagerly waiting to see what happens next!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Well, now that most of the cast has been introduced, something has to keep the story going...

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Review By [grd] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "His demonic visage" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
congrats on the fiftith chapter

can't wait for more
Comments from author:
It had to happen sometime. Not really earthshaking, but it moves the story along and hey, Angel´s back.

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Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Witches and Confused mothers" from DofEire
Review:
9 out of 10 for this one...only because of the following: "The Warren House, of which you represent the Halliwell, Ellis and Abrahams lineages are one such House."

Not Ellis. Johnson. =) That is all. Otherwise, talking heads and all, the chapter is terrific!
Comments from author:
Hey, this was before the Beta reading. But I think I could throw up a spirited defence that than it would just be Abrahams and Johnson, and Halliwell and Ellis both would be removed. Both sisters (Penny and Cece) chose to take their husband's names.

THanks, and thanks for reviewing.
Review By [DofEire] • Date [7 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Communication errors" from (Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
great update
can't wait for more
Comments from author:
Thank you. I wish I could say chapter 50 was going to be pivotal, but I fear it isn't...

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Review By [(Recent Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [4 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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