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Review of chapter "Memories of things not done" from dawnkey
Review:
Great Story just wondering is Dawn the Key in this and is she going to learn magic as well as the series she could and one of the demons she met in series 5 said she had a lot of magical potential from her family and just wondering if you are going to do any think with it. Anyway please keep updating as this is one of best pieces of fanfiction I have read in the last several years so good on you.
Comments from author:
Heh. Well, season 5 is many, many chapters away... So I fear you will have to have patience and keep reading. And yes, I do intend on keeping the series going.

Thanks very much and thanks for reviewing
Review By [dawnkey] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Memories of things not done" from Meneldur
Review:
Powerful. Amazingly powerful, and disturbing. But excellent.
So, Hannah is actually a demon hunter. Why is she 'rogue'? And is she connected somehow to Xander - long-lost aunt or something? It seems likely, since Xander's parents knew about vamps and demons.
Poor Brenda. But, she's already feeling better, and no doubt Joyce's mother power helps. And Simon will get justice for her, so that's settled.
And we learn what fun John and Jack have been getting up to. Can't wait to see how they handled that.
The truth about Amata is revealed, and she tells it as well. She has Mengele's memories... that must have been as bad as the torment she suffered. Still, it seems like they might be able to help her. Too late for a few people, but Roger's been caught and so has Tony. So damage is minimized, at the least.
So, Jessica is dead. And she was a Romani. i always suspected something of the sort, and have seen it done in a few other fics. But it's interesting. I wonder if we'll get the full story of why she married Tony and what exactly estranged her from her family and caused her to hate Xander. We shall have to see, I suppose. Until then.

"It's betrayed me, its hardly going to be better for him." - Um, I think it should be 'It betrayed me, and it's going to betray him'.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Actually, Rogue Demon hunter is a line that Wesley utters when he first makes his appearance in Angel.

I'm going to put up a vote to ask if people want to read a separate story about Jon and Jack and Billy the Kid...

Might I ask in what stories you read about Jessica as a Romani? I'd like to read them and see how the author's handled it.
Jenny will no doubt make a grand reveal.

I have to think about that suggestion. I considered it actually, but I need to think about it. Interesting you thought the same though.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Memories of things not done" from etienneofthewestwind
Review:
Interesting twist on the fem-Bubba... I can´t help but think she might be able to shed some light on Xander´s heritage.

You really make the reader feel sympathy for Amata here. The storyline is so much more fleshed out. And the addition of a certain snake demon. With two season two elements making an appearance (and possibly meeting defeat), I wonder how long before your verse veers completely away from Buffy canon.

The phone call between Giles and Carnahan was hilarious.
Comments from author:
I thought it might surprise people. ;-)

I always felt rather sorry for Amata, but this plot jumped straight into my mind. As for canon/AU, some enemies will be faced earlier, and there will be changes, but it will hopefully still be recognizable to attentive watchers of Buffy.

Yes, I can't wait for them to meet face to face.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [etienneofthewestwind] • Date [21 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Memories of things not done" from Blackett
Review:
What Roth said. That last scene almost brought tears in my eyes. Also, loved Jon and Giles on the phone....hilarious.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I did feel badly for Jessica. I had not imagined quite how depraved Tony demanded to be. And I must admit that Jon and Giles on the phone amused me too.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [Blackett] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Memories of things not done" from Panaka
Review:
Nice comeback. In fact, awesome chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I just hope the next one will be as satisfying.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Panaka] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Memories of things not done" from Roth
Review:
Depressing but needed I'd say. Looked at in one direction the life of Buffy, Xander, Willow et al in Sunnydale is a huge dark comedy. Looked at from another it's a group of people with PTSD cracking jokes so as to not start sobbing horribly and not stop.

You're managing to create something that's in the middle, in my opinion. You've saved a number of characters from fates worse that death (or did your best to), but you've also shown a wider, more horrible, more fantastic world that needs it's heroes.

Well done.
Comments from author:
Glad to see you're still reading.

Yes, that's a very good definition. I think the family will help with the PTSD. After 'Anne' and then Angel showed the evil in other places, I doubted Sunnydale would be a big enough playground. And it does need heroes, and it will get them.

Thank you and thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Roth] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Memories of things not done" from Zaz
Review:
<3
Comments from author:
Thank you. ;-)
Review By [Zaz] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Memories of things not done" from LordSchmodder
Review:
Good chapter, brings the story along nicely.
I like that Ampata relate to Joyce, and I liked your Nazi angle.
I am really interested what will happen to Roger and Tony.
Thanks!
Comments from author:
Yup, I suddenly felt the need for speed. Many answers in the next chapter.

Thanks for reading, reviewing and I hope you continue enjoying.
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Memories of things not done" from traceyw
Review:
Well worth the wait. A brilliant story with another great chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you, much appreciated.

And thanks for reviewing
Review By [traceyw] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Memories of things not done" from AllenPitt
Review:
I like the connections you're forging --Machida is a good touch. Hannah Harris, a relative maybe? Is Brenda Walsh related to Professor Walsh? Why is Brenda a Pru lookalike? Wow, a story where Amata actually has a shot at coming out ok, that's different. Deserved, too.
Though I had to chuckle at the thought of Paige arriving at the Summers residence in the midst of all this. Suitable environment for kids? I wonder!
Nice scene at the police station, precautions + safe room. I think the whole 'Sunnydale Syndrome' is part of the magic the mayor has set up around Sunnydale, so it's a good feeding ground & nobody notices. Would make sense, otherwise the populace would have fled years ago, and there'd go his Ascension.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I thought he was much underused and noticed on the Wiki that some interesting lines were cut...

Much will be answered the coming chapters, though by no means all. And when Paige shows up, deary, deary me...

Part of it is indeed that, but part is also mankind's desire to deny the existence of the supernatural.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Memories of things not done" from Eureka
Review:
So we save Amata?? RIGHT?
What gonna happen to the "guys"?
Xander is Romany? Perhaps related to Janna/Jenny? I mean Jenny recognized her, and called her a Romany name, Jessia told her to tell Xander of his heritage and all.
We gonna see Hanna again?
Sorry if I seem awfully questiony and all.
Comments from author:
Do we? Possibly for a certain value of save.

All your questions will be answered, do not worry. Not a problem, but I think you'd prefer to read the next chapter rather than a spoilery (note Buffy-ism) answer.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [Eureka] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Memories of things not done" from DofEire
Review:
"Lockhart is like a cockroach, he keeps turning up and is hard to kill." So..."Lockroach" wouldn't be a bad epithet for him, then? ;) He's soooo flipping creepy. Buuuuhhh.

Poor Amata.
Comments from author:
Lockroach. Heh. And yes, he is creepy. Far too goo a vilain to kill of. ;-)

And yes, poor Amata.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [DofEire] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Memories of things not done" from war
Review:
Poor Amata she must have some truly horrendous memories running through her head.

So Xander has some Roma blood in him. Interesting. I see he still speaks without thinking things through when he's upset. Understandable this time but I'm glad he realized he was in the wrong quickly this time. I feel sorry for Jessica so matter how bad she did by Xander she didn't deserve that.

Interesting that all the cops in Sunnydale aren't on the take. Nice to see that save his partner and hold the line.
Hanna interesting hope we see her again. Anyone who is willing to get that close to a suspected vamp just to be sure has the blood of heroes in her veins.

Great story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Indeed she does. I have a list of fourteen Nazi's here...

Yup, Xander is part Roma. As for speakinbg without thinking, he only just turned sixteen, he's still allowed some leeway. No one deserved that. Tony Harris in my story really is a nasty piece of work.

Most of the cops shown in the series are actually good people. Only clueless as to the supernatural, except for Munroe, who knows and is on the take.

Hannah has certain advantages we'll be getting to later.

Thanks and thanks for reviewing
Review By [war] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Memories of things not done" from EllandrahSylver
Review:
This is a very interesting chapter. It brings together a lot of unique elements, and makes the Inca Mummy Girl plot much more complex. Poor child.

So Roger got his comeuppance after all. *grins* Very nice.

And hey look! Giles learned that he's been talking directly with someone who he admires... Giles being star-struck by Jon Carnahan was cute. *grins*

The Romany twist on Jessica Harris was very intriguing. I'm sorry she died.
Comments from author:
In canon Amata apparently learned English from listening to people at exhibitions. I somehow doubted that would work, so the taking of memories was born. It also opened the door to some truly horrible memories.

Yup, Roger is going to get everything he deserves, and so will Tony.

Star-struck Giles was fun to write as well. After vilifying Jessica and then this, I feel sorry about it too.

Thanks for reviewing
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Silver linings" from (Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
Looks like angry Joyce and real angry and scary Simon are going to get to come out to play-I can definitely see both of them going Beatrix Kiddo on anyone even remotely involved in harming family.
Comments from author:
Oh heavens no. Nothing as restrained as that.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [(Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [17 Nov 11] • Not Rated
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