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Review of chapter "3: The first night, pt. 1." from PATM
Review:
Short but a fine tuned story. I hope the word count per chapter goes way up. Buffy's lack of emotion mirrors the outward appearances the anime it's based on. I hope she goes after ethan in the most violent way possible.
Review By [PATM] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "3: The first night, pt. 1." from Omegaprime
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ROFLMAO!! Poor Ted, he had his undead life planned out and then he got his butt handed to him by the WFM and then Buffy put him out his misery.

Wonder if Giles knows about them?

And poor Buffy and her crew if they have to go after them.

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3: The first night, pt. 1." from Roth
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BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I love Prachett and I love the Wee Free Men and I'm seriously feeling sympathy for the Ted the college going vampire. Damn good stuff
Review By [Roth] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2: What Andrew Summoned." from ktweaver
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I can't wait to see what kind of mischief the Nac Mac Feegle get up to!!!
Review By [ktweaver] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2: What Andrew Summoned." from Greywizard
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YES!!!! ;-)

And I rather doubt that Andrew and the other Lords of Dorkness are going to be in any condition to bother Buffy once the Wee Free Men are done. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "1: Andrew's Summoning." from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
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Took a moment for me to catch on there at the end (I've not read those books in a long time) when I did oh did I laugh!

Please do more.

Dave.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [31 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "1: Andrew's Summoning." from Jazzibear
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I enjoyed this: definite promise here. The thought of the Mac Nac Feegle versus the Hellmouth is most alluring. Hellmouth doomed would be my guess.

A point that I think is important: the great man is Sir Terry or Sir Terry Pratchett, but never Sir Pratchett.
Comments from author:
Ah, thank you. Hadn't realized. I will change that.
Review By [Jazzibear] • Date [31 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "1: Andrew's Summoning." from VampireCow
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Oh, the potential. I don't think Andrew realizes just what he has unleashed on Sunnydale.
Review By [VampireCow] • Date [30 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "1: Andrew's Summoning." from Omegaprime
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Uh oh, Did Andrew bring the Wee Free Men of the Discworld?

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [30 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "1: Andrew's Summoning." from Valkyrie
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You used a latin translation program, didn't you? It shows through in English in some areas. This needs more description, but I like the idea of anything that involves the Wee Free Men! Waily waily waily!

I sort of hope that Buffy becomes the hag. (Since the ability to do magic doesn't seem to be entirely necessary, so much as having a good head on one's shoulders.)
Comments from author:
Yep, latin translate program. Just wanted something quick and dirty. Not to mention, it's Andrew.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [30 May 11] • Not Rated
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