Interesting start. "Hi there, we created your universe!" It seems like the ship will be more useful now (?). Please continue with this - it has exciting potential (plus we need a flashback with more background detail of the scary apocalypse).
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [31 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Continue! Continue! It doesn't have to be right away but I think it could make a good story. Buffy and co ending up safe on earth is not an interesting story but them turning up on an intergalactic starship is pretty cool :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [31 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]