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Review of chapter "Chapter 19: In the Waiting Room" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
There's always consequences! She's asking for Spike? ouch. It's gonna be a bumpy ride!

Blue
Comments from author:
Yeah, might be a bit ugly.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18: The Difference a Watcher Makes" from spk
Review:
So totally forgiven!! :P LOVE that you had Wes shoot Warren! :)
Comments from author:
Like several reviewers already pointed out, Wes is probably the only good guy in BtVS/AtS that would be carrying a gun...and more than willing to use it.
Review By [spk] • Date [29 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18: The Difference a Watcher Makes" from djhardim
Review:
Excellent. Thank you for saving Tara.

After reading this and your reply to an earlier review, I was reminded of an old story of Tenhawk's(CSI-Sunnydale), and an old episode of CSI (I don't remember if it was the original or Miami), which led me to the following. The name was changed to protect the guilty.

Geographically, the Summers' home lay in a bowl. John Smith's home was located across the road and a few neighborhoods away. His home was at a higher elevation than than of the Summers. From his backyard, he could see into the second story window of the Summers home with little trouble.

On the morning that changed everything, John Smith decided to try out his newly purchased 9 mm Glock. Rather than go to the gun range, he set up a target on a tree and commenced firing. One round missed the target and continued on, until it hit Tara.
Comments from author:
Hey, that makes more sense that Warren's bullet killing Tara. Heck, there was an episode of CSI: Miami where a woman was 'shot' by a bullet from her backyard that a hurricane picked up and was whipping around. Guess she should have done a better job of disposing of her spent rounds. Weird that the house wasn't riddled with bullets though 'cause there were a lot of them in the backyard.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [29 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18: The Difference a Watcher Makes" from Misty
Review:
you evil person! very well done & you kept Tara alive... Always a good thing. Thank you.
Comments from author:
Tara didn't deserve to die. I understand the actress leaving, but still...
Review By [Misty] • Date [29 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18: The Difference a Watcher Makes" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
You're sort of redeemed.

You didn't kill my girl and you did rid the world of the evil scum. I won't forget you tortured me though... smiles wickedly...

Blue
Comments from author:
Good thing I don't care about redemption as much as Angel or Faith *wink*.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [29 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18: The Difference a Watcher Makes" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Okay you are forgiven now. :) I'm all giddy that Tara's not dead woo hooo. And Wes killed the bastard, double woo hoo. Buffy will be okay physically if not mentally and here's to hoping Robin isn't too fucking pissed at what happened. You got me loving this story. notice it 12:50 where I am and I still haven't got my ass to bed because I'm waiting up to see if you'd get another chapter out. LOL :)
Comments from author:
That's funny...I've done the same thing with other people's writing, so I understand your pain.

Robin will have Bernie around to keep him in check if he gets too angry so he doesn't do something stupid to ruin his chances with Buffy.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [29 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18: The Difference a Watcher Makes" from andiesimmo
Review:
yeeeaaaahhhhhhhh see i knew you weren't really really evil and you was just pretending to be or you were under the influence of a spell or drink or aliens or something lol thanks for the update and i still say PLEASE update sooooon
Comments from author:
Oh, I really am evil - as an author - but killing Tara would hurt me as much as the readers and I don't like my own pain. *grin*
Review By [andiesimmo] • Date [29 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: Thoughts in Time" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
WTF!!!!!! I HATE YOU. No I don't but geese man don't do this to me. I can't breath right now, I can't think, shit I'm on the floor in convulsions right now. YOU ARE COMPLETELY EVIL!!!! You have 2 seconds to come up with the next chapter before I DIE! :(
Comments from author:
Well, I'd be offended by your words if I weren't being evil about this. I have to admit that it's a little fun to play with canon tragedies. That should worry me more than it does.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [28 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: Thoughts in Time" from amie
Review:
You're an evil author! EVIL! But, hey we all love ya anyways! : )
Comments from author:
Thanks. Gotta get my kicks somehow. Torturing the readers is always good for a laugh.
Review By [amie] • Date [28 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: Thoughts in Time" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
that's just mean, you know that right?
Comments from author:
Yay! Sorry, *snicker* I'll try to be better *guffaw*.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [28 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: Thoughts in Time" from andiesimmo
Review:
again i say aaaarrrrrrhhhhhhh how could you, your just a big evil mean meanie lol so PLEASE update soon :)
Comments from author:
Okay, can't draw it out any longer, I guess.
Review By [andiesimmo] • Date [28 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17: Thoughts in Time" from lunalurker
Review:
EVIL! EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL EVIL!!!!! :(
Comments from author:
Mwahahaha.
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [28 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16: Road to Redemption" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

On the plus side, hopefully no Tara death!

Also, it wouldn't be the new and improved wes if he didn't have a gun!

...he IS packing, yeah???

*wrings hands nervously*

EDIT: Because Wesley is the only character in the Buffy/Angel verse who uses guns actively. I'm just assuming/hoping he knows better than to travel to the Hellmouth without a weapon! :)
Comments from author:
Why would you think Wes would be carrying a gun to Buffy's house?
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [27 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16: Road to Redemption" from spk
Review:
Love that you had Buffy understand Wes' circumstances. Can't wait to see how you handle this scene with Warren. :)
Comments from author:
Well, I'm going to be evil. When the next chapter's posted, you'll see what I mean.
Review By [spk] • Date [27 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16: Road to Redemption" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Well, all I can think is: Tara's in the wrong room to die (thank god). Of course, I don't want any one else to die. Except maybe Warren, and the one person in the entire Buffyverse who is (a) a crack shot (b) likely to be armed with a gun is sitting in Buffy's kitchen. I don't like Warren's odds of surviving this encounter intact.

You know what they say about gun control right?
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Gun control is hitting what you aim at.



That is all. [smirks]

Blue
Comments from author:
Love your definition of gun control!

Hey, Tara shouldn't have been shot at all on the second floor - at least not at the angle the bullet hit her. Guess they didn't think about bullet trajectories when doing the scene.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [27 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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