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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChaosLady
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I realize that you got a lot of reviews from one chapter but I've loved this story and I normally don't like this category. Please don't stop here!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [4 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Loatroll
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Looking very interesting! Looking forward to more! :-)

Thanks for the great read.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [28 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jackattack
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I rarely review. But this intrigues me, and I look forward to more installments. If you avoid a couple of common pitfalls and cliches you should really have something here.
Review By [jackattack] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cglasgow
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Oh damn, Badass Season 4 Wesley is coming home to the British Wizarding World? With a child to protect? An abused child who was locked underneath the stairs like he was, and a prophecy that's screwing them over?

Never before have I been so tempted to actually feel sorry for Death Eaters. This is (hopefully) gonna be /epic/.
Review By [cglasgow] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WolfWriter
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Well, Wesley is definitely NOT going to like what Harry has been through at the hands of Petunia, Vernon, Dudley and Marge. If Petunia doesn't kick the bucket, I think Wesley will more than likely take her out himself.

As to being a good parent to Harry, I do think he'll manage it. If only to go in the opposite direction of his father, who seemed to be a right prick to me in that one episode.

Once he finds out about the prophecy, he's going to blow it to smithereenies, maybe kill Dumbledore, and do his damndest to get rid of the Deezers.

I foresee a very cynical, cautious Harry going to Hogwarts, and be sneaky enough to not get put into Gryffindor.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dreameralways
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Interesting concept. I wonder how Wesley would react to receiving Harry's letter and finding out that such a school exists or why Harry was orphaned the first time. I do hope that you do at least one more chapter.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AriaDragoncrest
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Great start
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
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just an extra note---he & Snape might get along very well, once Snape realizes their similarities --both are men who made a huge mistake that ruined their lives and are struggling to overcome it. Despised by most of their peers, and all that stuff.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from proofreader
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Somehow I see this Harry ending up with a lower tolerance level for lazy backstabbing idiots *Cough*Ron*Cough*, and more appreciation for getting good intel *Cough*Hermione*Cough* and loyalty *Cough*Neville*Cough*. Maybe I should see a doctor about that frog in my throat too...
Review By [proofreader] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
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He didn't recognize the name "Harry Potter" so he at most knows a little bit about the wizarding world, but only a very little. Likely nothing. I wonder how long it is until Harry's 11th birthday?
This is probably the best move for him. He could get back in the Angel gang, as per the show, but things were just never the same again after the kidnapping incident. Better to start over.
Earlier Wesley wouldn't have been much help to HP, but this Wesley really has his act together. And having a kid to take care of might bring him out of his depression. he's in a pretty dark place right now. He got Angel out of the ocean, so I'd say they're even at this point.
He's almost perfect as a guardian for HP & dealing with the wizarding world etc. I can just imagine him in Diagon Alley. His knowledge of magic/demons etc would surprise the heck out anyone there.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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An interesting start. Tracking this one now.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)deiticlast
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Great job, milady! You can set a scene very well! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Review By [(Current Donor)deiticlast] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ElaineRhodes
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Intriguing premise!
I can't wait to see where this goes & what the ramifications are for both the wizarding world & for Angel Investigations/Wolfram & Hart.
(Can't wait to see what Harry & Wes think of each other...)
Review By [ElaineRhodes] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kaleecat
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Love the idea of Wesley taking custody of Harry before Hogwarts. Somehow I think things are going to be very different, in a good way. At this point Wesley is jaded and a bit lost, but he's a force to be reckoned with *because* of all his experiences good & bad.

I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
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A better choice for Wesley. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. Just sunk in... Harry's 10. So Wesley either will or will not find out about the Wizarding world before Harry turns 11. Very interesting. Thanks for sharing!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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