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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
A well written and detailed scene setter, well done.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj
Very interesting start!
I think this is a first with Wesley as Harry's relative

BTW as a former Watcher, does he know about wizards?
- The Council does tend to have their noses into 'everything'
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tabee
What an interesting premise!

I like that they're related, but not that closely. Helps to explain not knowing each other and all that crap.

It's nice to see Wesley get another chance, maybe with him gone (as in not in the country and available at the last minute) will help the others realize how helpful he was/is.

Course, I also hope that if they do contact them he tells them to take a long walk off a short cliff :p

Can't wait to see his reaction to Harry's prophecy and the whole wizarding world thing! Hm... do you think wizards have social services and all that? And how soon will Dumbledore realize that the Dursleys are gone? So many questions!

Thanks for sharing and happy writing!

Tabee :)
Review By [Tabee] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MarcusSLazarus
Still early to say for sure, but there's some definite potential in this plot that I wouldn't say no to seeing explored in greater depth...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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