Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from TheRichmaster
I like the Deathstroke thing and am hoping that you have him meet Deadpool (who marvel admitted was actually based on DC's Deathstroke. Will Xander get the orange/black mask. And it will be interesting if he (completely by accident) ends up taking on Slade's role as 'World's Greatest Assassin.
Review By [TheRichmaster
] • Date [14 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from JinaSolo
This is a very interesting take of the story!
Review By [JinaSolo
] • Date [18 Sep 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from djhardim
Just to refresh everyone's memory
Slade Wilson (DC Comics) aka Deathstroke
Wade Wilson (Marvel Comics) aka Deadpool.
I looked up Master Man. If their description is any indication, I think that Xander will be over his head with him.http://marvel.wikia.com/Wilhelm_Lohmer_
Review By [djhardim
] • Date [22 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from Nycorson
Greatly enjoying. Always love to watch Xander get his ass kicking on. And Odin is perfect. I do hope you continue, ~looks for bribes to offer you~ Thanks
Comments from author:
I do hope to update it and "The Jacket" as well, but I'm currently working on my "War of Angels" project over at the pit.
However, if a certain idiot *cough*Agnar*cough* keeps causing issues, I might take my time in updating.
Review By [Nycorson
] • Date [22 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from darkk
Review By [darkk
] • Date [21 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And down we go the rabbit hole...." from agnar
Sorry but I'm beyond tired of fics that constantly pull this cryptic bullshit 'we changed you/gifted you/empowered you, but aren't allowed to TELL you a damned thing about it' spiel.
It's beyond old and puts me off fics now. The PTB are allowed to fling him across the multi-verse and fuck over Xander, their own reality AND the reality they stuck Xander into, but Cordy isn't allowed to tell Xander he's super strong or fast or can breath through his ass or whatever the fuck was done to him? Bullshit and nonsense pulled out the authors ass because they've either not yet decided what Xander is now, or think it adds 'drama' to their fic when it's really just annoying and dumb.
Edit added later: Gee, it's funny how any review that's negative on any of your fics is deemed a flame from a troll, whether valid or not, polite or not, they're all flames if they don't kiss your ass and praise your work.
Also funny how you think only other fanfic authors are allowed to review your work. Because I'm not published here, or haven't published fanfiction, I'm not allowed to review negatively or critically? Uh, right, you live in a very bizarre world buddy.
Comments from author:
Okay...tried to classify your review as "constructive honest criticism", but after reading it again a few times (and going through the reviews you've left other fics), I've come to the conclusion that you weren't offering constructive honest criticism but were, in fact, just posting a flame and trying rip my story apart out of some sick and perverted desire you have to tear other people down just for some personal self-gratification.
So congratulations, you win this year's annual "Jason Barnett Douche-bag of The Year" award. It's an award given to those people who have nothing better to do with their lives than to log on, look for someone that can tear down and try to destroy just because they have nothing going on with their pathetic excuse of a life.
Okay...so you don't like my fic because it doesn't appeal to you. Fine...no big deal. "If you said, hey...your fic sucks, it's not my cup of tea" and left it that way...that would have been fine. But no, you had to pull a "Barnett" and start attacking me personally.
But since that's all you understand, I'm going to sink down to your level and speak to you in your own language.
IF YOU DON'T FUCKING LIKE IT, THEN DON'T READ IT, ASSHOLE.
There, did that make sense to you? Did that get through? Or would you like me to write it in crayon and use multiple colors so the message will burn its way into your memory?
Oh, and if you think you can do better, go ahead and try. In fact, I'll go look up some of your works right now.
*pulls up Agnar's profile*
Hmmm...not finding anything...oh wait, you haven't put up anything to read.
Gee, imagine that.
Thank you for playing. Now, unlike you, I'm going to log off now, do some stuff in the real world since I have the weekend off and I would like to enjoy it as opposed to argue with some self-appointed jackass who seems to spend most of their free time lurking around here and just tearing other people down just because they have nothing better to do.
So, return to your village, pal...the one that is wondering where their pet idiot has run off to. They really miss you.
Okay, first off if you're referring to my comments to Downery, he doesn't count as a reviewer. He, like you, tried to do a "Jason Barnett" where he trolled, targeted, and flamed people for shits and grins. No useful review or critique of a story. On the upside, he was nowhere near profane and, honestly, he's more of a minor annoyance than anything else.
As for negative reviews, I've gotten my share of them and when I do respond to them my reaction is usually "Oh well...if you don't like it, don't read it". I actually even talk to some of those people for feedback and ideas.
BUT...in your case, I still stand by my opinion. You were basically trolling and flaming authors (which is obvious from most of your reviews) and I called you out on it. If you want to post a critical review...fine, but if you want to use harsh language and utter a string of profanities like you did when reviewing my story (which I noticed you edited out...along with a good chunk of your original review) or others, I tend to fire back. Just because something doesn't fit your idealized interpretation of how a fan produced piece of work is supposed to be it does not give you permission to rip people down to satisfy your ego.
And...as I stated before, if you think you can do better...feel free to show us something of your work. Show everyone how it's done...and then we'll all see how you react if someone doesn't like your story. And no, I wouldn't rip your story apart for shits and grins. Actually, I'd probably just ignore it.
Also...if you have a personal problem with me...contact me directly. Unlike you, I actually have the guts to leave my contact info on my page here.
Review By [agnar
] • Date [14 Apr 14] • Rating [2 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from Eljin
this is great!
the plot is interesting and character relations is reasonable.
i really hope you finish this fic someday, or at least this conflict.
Review By [Eljin
] • Date [27 Mar 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from cwolf
Well, I admit your forum post drew me to read the review lol. I have read the story up to this point however. But you struck my interest in what exactly your morning wake-up mocha reaction spawned.
Review By [cwolf
] • Date [1 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from nerfherder
All this quality work, and then you abandon it... WTF!!! SERIOUSLY! THIS ROCKS! Please update if you find the opportunity.
Comments from author:
I will...once I get my current "War of Angels" fix out of my system over on the pit.
Review By [nerfherder
] • Date [27 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from DeaconKrow
Howdy, This is one of my favs and since your muse is back to work I thought I'd just toss this out and get it fresh in your mind to see if it helped. :)
Comments from author:
Sadly, muse is still mangling a certain Disney property. Although I am picking up the last few seasons of Doctor Who so I can get caught up.
Review By [DeaconKrow
] • Date [10 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from tchizek
Darn I really like this story and wish you would continue it!
Review By [tchizek
] • Date [29 Nov 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from Chikageko
Very nice, I just came across this recommendation this morning. It's got a few flaws, but I've got to say I like it. Looking forward to your continuance.
Review By [Chikageko
] • Date [10 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from LordSia
... You... He... Deadpool. This is just hi-fucking-larious.
... Xander should ask him about the yellow boxes.
Review By [LordSia
] • Date [21 Sep 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from Compston
Its been a year Please update this excellent story
Review By [Compston
] • Date [28 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from Zarthrax
Enjoy the story, hope it resumes...
Comments from author:
I intend to, but I'm currently in a "dry spell" when it comes to writing...though I think it has more to do with it being summer and me goofing off has something to do with it.
However, I do plan on updating this and my "Interesting Times" 'verse as well over on the pit.
Review By [Zarthrax
] • Date [31 Jul 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]