Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Actually a good choice. These pseduo Nazi's use magic - no real names for them. Towards the end they are going below decks, not planning on "blowing" them despite being a couple?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from moringstar
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nice update keep the goodies coming
Review By [moringstar] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from Omegaprime
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Wow, Xander is gettng his grove on and pissing off that jerk by comparing him to the other two leaders of Hydork.
Loved his choice of alises and the conversation between Aries and Odin.
I see that Magneto is enjoying the show as well.
Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from Bobboky
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very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from tchizek
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Okay, I love it; First Xander on a rampage - great! Second “Think you’d be willing to sub-contract him out?” - wonderful! Third Xander detecting and commenting on Odin and Aries watching - how perfect is that! Fourth Xander snarking at Von Strucker to get him so pissed off he splits up his forces - pure Xander, and perfect!
Great chapter, thanks!
Review By [tchizek] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from grd
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He could have also said Wilson Fisk and started a war between the Kingpen and Hydra. Love then conversation between Odin and Ares. Subcontract indeed.
Review By [grd] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from lordamnesia
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Keep up the fantastic work, this story only keeps getting better!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from ZaziTheBeast
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Haha I'm loving the story so far. I laughed pretty hard at the Slade Wilson thing because I pictured Xander running into Deadpool and Deadpool constantly teasing him about that...like calling him 'Lil' Stroke' lmao
Review By [ZaziTheBeast] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from eriktheviking
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A well done Xander hunting down Nazis and killing them brutally.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from RafMereC
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Love the Wilson.
It maybe one the things that prompt the docs to consider Wilson for Weapon X in the first place.
Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from JediKnight
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Very good work on the update, I hope you'll be adding more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from JonnyNapalm
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Really good flow to the action sequences...and the interspersion of the Odin/Ares bits were a nice touch. Xander always seemed like he'd match up pretty well with those two...especially the Marvel versions. Looking forward to the confrontations with Master Man/Warrior Woman/ and Strucker those should be a grand conflagration. It'd be oddly appropriate if Xander ended up taking Strucker's arm that he eventually replaces with the life sucking gauntlet. Interesting that he went with Slade Wilson and didn't just jump in as Frank Castle. Then again, he's likely going to be using a LOT of aliases as things progress. I'm hoping the 'close' you referred to was this PART of the story as opposed to the story in it's entirety, cause the story you're telling is a lot of fun. I'm hoping to see more, but I can understand if you're looking to start working on other projects. Just know that this one has some great material that you're doing a fantastic job with. Nicely done.
Comments from author:
Heh...funny you should mention that about Strucker....
*turns his head and addresses his mafia plotbunnies*
"Locate Mr. Napalm, take him out to the woods, and get rid of him...he knows too much."
*turns back to address reviewer and puts smile back on his face*
But thanks for your review, and please ignore the black SUV with the carrots on the license plate that just pulled up in front of your house....
Just Kidding. But seriously...you're on the right track.
And this is just the first story. I have a sick feeling this might end up being what my "Interesting Times" 'verse over on FFN turned into.
*shudders in terror at the prospect of creating a second monster*
Review By [JonnyNapalm] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from Dragonhulk
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The Slade Wilson comment deserves the ten on it's own. He could have gone for Fury because this is a Marvel Universe, but going for the one eyed mega mercenary of the DCU was great. Scenes like this that show him as both a badass and a goofball are great work.
Comments from author:
And this verse's Fury is the Samuel L. Jackson version...at least it will be when he shows up.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from EroSlackerMicha
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Deathstroke the Terminator...(insane cackle)
Well at least he didn't do the Darkwing Duck spiel....that could be next time. (more insane laughter) keep up the good work. and I'm not surpried this story is doing well. its not the same ol same ol, you've got something different and people like it.
Comments from author:
I just think it's going to be amusing when Strucker is going to become obsessed with killing a fictional character.
Review of chapter "Just Some Senseless Slaughter and Bloodshed" from HolyKnight
Review:
Meh, its less cliche than John fukken "Die Hard McClane. .. .
Comments from author:
Heh...already did that in one of the earlier chapters. And yes, there is an internal monolog coming up where Xander and Hyena have an argument about him "getting his 'Die Hard' on".
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]