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Review of chapter "Scar" from LovelyLucy
Review:
Oh god. Okay, first things first...

Please tell me you curve away from canon where it comes to Sirius! Please, oh please! And James! Will he ever wake up?

This is amazing, truly. I can't wait to see more. I'm assuming this story will wrap up the loose ends and then the next will pick up ten years later when Harry starts school?
Comments from author:
I'm afraid I can't tell you anything in regards to Sirius without spoiling things...as for James possible awakening...same thing there - you'll just have to be very patient! And your assumptions are pretty much correct, with some minor deviations!
Review By [LovelyLucy] • Date [3 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Scar" from ChaosLady
Review:
This isn't the last chapter to this story? I'm glad, but I thought that you would start a new story in the series before you got there. I'm glad James is still alive, even if he is in a coma. That came as quite a surprise. I also like that Buffy has figured out the whole Sirius-Pettigrew already. Good for her! I can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
No it's not! Another story is coming, but timeline wise, that one will take place after the first war is truly over, i.e. years away when Harry goes to Hogwarts. I had to keep James alive! I couldn't make everything end up exactly as in canon - what's the point of that? And between him and Lily, Lily has to die so Harry can live and become the boy-who-lived. Her death was inevitable - James' wasn't. I'm glad it managed to surprise you! As for Buffy figuring things out...well, she's really just speculating...you'll see what happens to her suspiscions!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [2 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Downfall" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Whew, finally caught up on the last three updates...and what updates they were! I dug how you changed canon by killing the basilisk...unless canon hasn't changed after all and there were TWO of them in Slytherin's chamber! Cool for Buffy and Remus that money isn't an issue for them now.

It was better for the comment about the Dursleys to be verbal rather than written; this way DD is the only one who knows for certain. Wonder what excuse he'll come up with that Buffy can't raise Harry. That she's the Slayer or that she's living with a werewolf and the Wizarding World would never allow their savior to live in the same house as a werewolf.

As for the scene in Godric's Hollow... you've given me a tribble to try someday.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the updates! I really liked killing the Basilisk...but I was also terrified, because I knew what a big canon change it would be! You'll see what happens in book two instead. :D And of course, you'll see what happens in regards to Harry's custody as well - and I'm so happy the scene in Godric's Hollow inspired you! I loved writing it, even though it was emotionally difficult! I hope I came up with something original.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Downfall" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
This chapter was AMAZING. Your best yet.

And I am so glad that you changed James' ending - yes, yes, not all the way, of course, but I appreciated the fight.

Thanks :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I loved writing the fight, even though it was so difficult to come up with something that would not seem too 'amateurish' and yet not too professional, if you know what I mean? It's so hard to write something original, without making it sound ridiculous...after all, they are fighting with wands...! And I really needed to make this fight better and more detailed than all others, since it is THE fight.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [1 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Downfall" from ChaosLady
Review:
Oh God, I could cry!
Comments from author:
I'll take that as a compliment! This chapter was one of my favourites to write, and, ironically enough, both the easiest and hardest.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [31 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fidelius" from ChaosLady
Review:
Oh no! The Potters are going to die in the next episode aren't they? This chapter is bittersweet!
Comments from author:
*mimics zipping my mouth shut* I'm not telling! But it was very bittersweet two write. In fact, every chapter from here on (25-30) was bittersweet for me...!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [21 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fidelius" from tater
Review:
If Voldemort was using someone else as his secret keeper, it would be Bellatrix. She's totally loyal, and much too crazy to make any sense if tortured. Unless it isn't necessary for someone to understand the language they are told the secret in, then as a parseltongue, he could just use his snake, Nagini, since he could tell her the secret for the spell easily enough. He could have Nagini hiss the secret to anyone he wanted told if they didn't need to understand it for the spell to work. The same loophole with Nagini not being human would work for how he can keep her with him inside the secret.


tater
Comments from author:
I really like your Bellatrix theory! And the Parseltongue thing never even crossed my mind, but it's a really interesting point - I'm impressed!
Review By [tater] • Date [21 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Serpent" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Nice!

And I like your image of Snape!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Serpent" from ChaosLady
Review:
Wow! That was one exciting episode!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I had fun writing it!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [10 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Joshua" from ChaosLady
Review:
I'm sorry to hear Voldemort succeeded, but I know he's going to die soon, so...excellent update.
Comments from author:
:D I'm glad you enjoyed the update!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Children" from ChaosLady
Review:
This story gets grimmer and grimmer. I hope you have a ray of light before the end. Tremedous update.
Comments from author:
It does, doesn't it? As for ray(s) of light, there are, but unfortunately, I don't think there is a single chapter left that's entirely without grief... Though I can also promise not every chapter is all about grief either.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [13 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Treachery" from ChaosLady
Review:
So sad, we're winding down to the conculsion!
Comments from author:
Bittersweet!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Treachery" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
I like how after all of Benjy Fenwick's concern about the Imperio curse, he was able to shake it off...even though it meant he died horribly. Somehow I get the feeling he'd rather die than be forced to kill his comrades.

Can I say how much I'd love for Wormtail to be crushed by a meteorite? Or slip on a banana peel and fall head first into a full outhouse, losing his wand so he can't breathe or escape?
Comments from author:
I liked that too! I really wanted to show his inner strength and give him an end that wasn't depentent on a magical battle (I have so many of them already). And it was also nice to be able to reflect a bit on the Imperius and how it's been used in the war, even though I haven't shown it that much. As for Wormtail...LMFAO! It's unfortuntaly highly unlikely those particular instances will ever occur, at least in my series.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [6 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Speeches" from ChaosLady
Review:
Oh no! It's the beginning of the end! :,(
Comments from author:
So it seems... *evil cackle*
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [16 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Marauders" from ChaosLady
Review:
The story gets more and more poignant as it goes on.
Comments from author:
It does, doesn't it?
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [4 Aug 12] • Not Rated
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