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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarkTopaz
Review:
I am glad to see that you are still writing and I can't wait to read more I would love to see have Black tom Cassidy reacts to haveing a son.
Review By [DarkTopaz] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cjcold
Review:
Nice start.

I have to say that Xander as a Banshee is quite interesting. I was thinking it would be a boring power but you have really added some excitement to it.

I was thinking that from the title that it would be dazzler's powers, though I may be wrong it looks like Xander might be going into the musical industry and meet her their. It is nice to see Xander and Oz working together. You always do good work with Oz's character.

I am thinking this is Evolution since the public doesn't know about mutants.

More soon please.
Review By [cjcold] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Tamojin
Review:
Kudos on the new idea. I always loved Banshee from the early X-Men comics; felt that he never got enough page time though. His relationship with Moira was also underdeveloped. I can see a number of potential cameos you could play with: Cain Marko (our beloved Juggernaut) as you probably know used to hang out with Tom, then there's the Excalibur gang and their connection to Moira McTaggert (I can see Kitty and Xander hitting it off - especially if he's a musician), Oz, Willow, and Rhane Sinclair would be an interesting love triangle. Someone mentioned Siryn already, and if you bring her into things then you have an opening for Deadpool (The more I think of it, the more I really hope for Deadman Wade and Xander meeting up - there's just something magical about a friendship between the pair that makes me viciously giddy. Can you imagine how Angel and the rest of Sunnydale would react to such a team up? It gives me tingly shivers!)

Any who, just a few ideas that jumped into my head while reading. Use them if you like, discard them if you don't. Either way, I eagerly await more of your work.

Salud!
Comments from author:
you want deadpool? you got it!
Review By [Tamojin] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from msdarque
Review:
Absolutely loving it - fun, interesting.. Xander singing (and well) superb! :D
Congrats and kudos! Eagerly waiting to read more.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ora
Review:
Excellent
Review By [ora] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Morgomir
Review:
The start of another great fic. One small suggestion "Orbs of Nezzla'Khan" might make an interesting addition. (They got almost completely ignored in the show.) Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL! Loved the ending!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)GACTsevil
Review:
Interesting idea, can't wait to see where you take it.
Review By [(Past Donor)GACTsevil] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from superfan
Review:
Very fun. If I were him I would try to keep Daddy Harris in my life 'cuz unless he was an abusive A-hole, he is the one that should be called dad. After all, he took the responsibility of it, ol' Tom was just a sperm donor.
Review By [superfan] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from dorkmoon
Review:
Good premise, although it feels more like a one-shot than a multi-chaptered story.

In keeping with his Irish heritage, Xander could go by the codename “SAMHAIN,” the Celtic Halloween holiday. This would be ironic considering all the Yet-Another-Halloween-Fanfic there are out there. The Irish and Scottish pronounce SAMHAIN as ‘Sawin’ or ‘Savin.’

There was also a 'Ghostbusters' villain named Samhain in the animated series, a pumpkin-headed ghost embodying All Hallow's Eve.

At some point, Black Tom Cassidy was badly injured and had a wood-like substance grafted onto his wounds, giving him chlorokinetic control over plants. If Xander got a blood transfusion from his father, he might develop similar abilities.
Review By [dorkmoon] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from annararen
Review:
Bit weird how Faith gets discarded so easily here.
Other than that, quite good :)
Review By [annararen] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Chikageko
Review:
Certianly interesting... I suppose this is going to push willow to develop her magic faster, now that two of her friends have powers? If you continue the story and go that way, please have her do somthing with battle magic. Her spells in the series were all largely useless untill glory.
Review By [Chikageko] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Narf
Review:
Not bad keep up the good work thanks and bye
Review By [Narf] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Narf
Review:
Not bad keep up the good work thanks and bye
Review By [Narf] • Date [8 Jul 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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