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Chosen against the Child

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Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Life Signs" from SlowMercury
Review:
This story continues to be very interesting, and I can't wait for actual contact between the NWC and the SGC. Unless the SGC can figure out that "the Chosen" isn't a weapon, it may not go very well. Looking forward to the next update!
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Life Signs" from kiwi
Review:
nice fic so far. hope you continue. :D
Review By [kiwi] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Life Signs" from (Current Donor)wizathogwarts
Review:
I really like where you're going with this story. The two parallel investigations, SG-1 and the Slayers, seem to be coming to a convergence. I'm really looking forward to how you handle it. Will the natural cautionary distrust of each group create misunderstandings that can't be overcome forcing them to fight the Ori individually? Or will they put aside egos to work together as they come to understand they fight a common enemy?
I just hope you don't use a contrivance to get them together (like Whistler showing up).
Review By [(Current Donor)wizathogwarts] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Life Signs" from CageFire
Review:
Great to see a new chapter, I wonder what'll happen next.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Life Signs" from Rich
Review:
Good job so far, with an interesting twist on the Slayer origin story (in a Slayer/Origin story). I do see a possible question : if Sam has a way to track Slayer energy, wouldn't it detect the slayers actually living in Colorado Springs ? Is she actually tracking Hellmouth energy instead ?
Comments from author:
Wrong two times. But it allows her to track both.
Review By [Rich] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Life Signs" from borgrabbit
Review:
Haiku logic:

Prophecys to twist
There's a reason don't ya think
A slayer was piss'd



Great start to the story!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Life Signs" from Iceflame
Review:
I'm going to say thank you for a needed update, but it's frustrating how few updates there are :)

I'm sure Buffy will appreciate the military are looking her up for the next major Ka-BLOOEY!!!
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [25 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Leads" from CageFire
Review:
Pretty interesting fic, keep up the excellent work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Leads" from (Past Donor)BuffyFan
Review:
I just caught this story today and I find it very intriguing.
Review By [(Past Donor)BuffyFan] • Date [17 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Leads" from Blackett
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Getting closer. Nice. Can't wait for more!
Review By [Blackett] • Date [17 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Prophecy" from Gideon
Review:
That is quite a specific prophecy, how many chapters do you estimate the story will be to get to that point?
It seems like the two organisations are getting closer to one another and hopefully with Sam already knowing some of the girls it won't take too long to establish some trust. All the different characters and locations did seem to make the chapter a bit distant though. Will some of the next chapters focus more on the experience of a character or group of characters for a significant period of time? Becoming more involved in their lives might help motivate you to write more of the story.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue: Deus Ex Machina" from Gideon
Review:
Great start - I like how you have events from one fandom mentioned in the other, even if they don't know what is reallly going on.

One mistake I noticed - "Buffy trashed in her bed" should be "thrashed"
Review By [Gideon] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Prophecy" from Blackett
Review:
great update
Review By [Blackett] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Prophecy" from nicjphill
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Hopefully the two groups get together soon! Talk about vague dreams. I like the difference in the demons not being overrun but bringing more to earth. Can't wait for the next update.
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Prophecy" from RevDorothyL
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A really intriguing start! I look forward to reading the rest of what you've already written, as well as the planned chapters after that.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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