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Review of chapter "When Xander Woke Up" from Klimmatt
Review:
I'm excited to see that you're doing a new version of this, and I'm looking forward to see what changes you have in mind. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Also, as for the Slayer, I'm guessing it was... Faith?
Comments from author:
Swing and a miss. She's back at home, keeping an eye on the rugrats.
Review By [Klimmatt] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When Xander Woke Up" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
I remember the earlier versiopns of this story< will you be re-intergrating the picture you had with them? Also I'm glad the story is back.
Comments from author:
That big empty rectangle will turn into a picture when my artist delivers it. :)
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When Xander Woke Up" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Comments from author:
Should be three to four days away.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When Xander Woke Up" from Raider
Review:
very very nice.
Comments from author:
Thanks. :)
Review By [Raider] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When Xander Woke Up" from (Current Donor)Clavell
Review:
Cool beans, new version! Let's see how you have Xander deal with this trio, and what whackiness you throw at them this time. And, being you, we will obviously have lesbians (Joe's Rule: You can never have too many lesbians).
Comments from author:
Well, just a little. The rest of the girls are technically bisexual.
Review By [(Current Donor)Clavell] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When Xander Woke Up" from Wolfkin
Review:
Quiet on the set! Trigamy, take 3(or is it 4?) . . . And Action! ^_^

Off to a good start, I see. I like the addition of a Slayer to get him there/**TRY** to keep him outta trouble(I'm thinking epic fail, considering . . .) and in general, a good re-write, though I notice you changed Spider-girl's name for this one. A tad distracting, but completely cool as well. You writing skills, already damned good, are even better than normal. Kudos! ^_^
Comments from author:
Publicly? Take 3. In my absence? Take 5 with 3 and 4 never being published. :)

And I changed Gwen/Renée because they added the S8 Slayer Renee and I didn't want any sort of confusion with the character analysis engine, and Gwen was similarly twigging as Gwen Raiden or whatever the A:tS girl was known as.

Actually, looking at this chapter at the moment, I think the "kill bad HTML" engine ate a paragraph or three. I'll need to compare to my master when I get home. There might be a few hundred more words in this chapter by the time I post Chapter 2.
Review By [Wolfkin] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When Xander Woke Up" from yak
Review:
Alexander Lavelle Harris and Katherine Beatrice Bishop
Alexander Lavelle Harris and Cassandra Eleanor Lang.
Alexander Lavelle Harris and Rebekah Julia Drew.

Cassandra Eleanor Lang's name is correct, but as for the other two, I assume that you meant Katherine Elizabeth Bishop [Hawkeye], and Jessica Drew [Spider-Woman].
Comments from author:
Oh hey, they gave Kate a middle name in between when I wrote the first version back in August '06 (the same month the original limited series ended) and now? Cool beans. Not going to edit my story because I have plans for Beatrice, but cool beans. And no. Bekah is an OC. She is related to Jessica Drew, has spider-powers, and like Jessica has a middle name that indicates who one of her parents is...
Review By [yak] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When Xander Woke Up" from Meneldur
Review:
So, here we go again?
Can't say I see much difference yet, other than the detailed notes and explanations claiming there'll be a difference and a feeling that there's a bit more detail involved which is always good. Whatever. I liked the original story, and you rewrites are usually better. I do wish for Blue Belle, HPDaE or other stuff, but since I only write when the muse hits me, I certainly can't complain. Still, one can hope one comic revival might get the other going.
Any reason for not actually naming the Slayer Xander came with?
Until some more, Meneldur.
Comments from author:
There's actually about 700-800 added words not counting notes. The new Slayer actually accounts for only half of that, the rest is details. And I originally kept her name out of things because I was vacillating between a number of different Slayers that could be the one who tranqed and dragged him. By the time I figured it out, I decided not to go back and rewrite because it'd be more interesting that way.
Review By [Meneldur] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When Xander Woke Up" from (Current Donor)Sithspit
Review:
Props for throwing in "The Pirates Who Don't Do Anything"; I *HEART* da VeggieTales! I'm already liking this "Ultimate Edition" better, but I might, just may be, biased.

See, I have this weakness for entertaining authors...stories! Entertaining author's stories! Avoiding confusion there.
Comments from author:
It should be a fun ride. Bit worried about luring back past readers, that they'll only know it's here and updated and interesting when I finally get past where the old versions were and merge the stories together and they start getting emails.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sithspit] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When Xander Woke Up" from xon
Review:
Can't see the picture, and I reserve my opinions of this fic.
Comments from author:
Considering the picture is a transparent PNG, I'd be more than a little amused if you could see anything. o_O

And considering the borderline flames you normally hand out, that's practically a compliment.
Review By [xon] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When Xander Woke Up" from DarkElf
Review:
My Guilty Pleasure has returned. Thanks for starting this back up. You write some of the craziest stuff and this has always been one of the most fun. I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
This one actually has a bunch of new stuff, hence the repost instead of editing an old copy. Chapters are about a quarter to half again as big and are a more uniform length, there's an all-new subplot involving X-23 (who's now a Young Avenger), Gwen/Renée obviously got renamed into Rebekah, and this is just stuff we'll be learning in Part 1 (Chapters 1-8) of 4.
Review By [DarkElf] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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