Poor child of great strife His concatenated lives Stormy horizon
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Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Great start. It's pretty uncommon to see a Sirius do-over. I have no suggestions on where to go with this fic, but I'm sure you'll figure out a plot worthy of this great starter chapter.
Review By [mariposa] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Not Rated
I'm liking it! I always felt bad that Sirius got the short end of the stick in the books. He suffered for so long for something he didn't do, only to wind up imprisoned again at Grimmauld Place, and then die because of some stupid vision Voldie sent Harry.
I'm glad to see Fate, or someone else, decided to give him another chance.
Fun idea. So he grabs Harry and hides with him for 10 years? Or is a bit more ambitious and goes after Peter P, knowing where he's hiding? The least likely course would be him just going into hiding but ready to intervene in the timeline at a strategic point, I suppose. It's hard to envision an HP who wasn't raised by the Durselys, it was a huge factor in who he was at start of the series.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Not Rated
This is really good but I have no idea where you are going with it. Maybe if you publish the next one or two chapters soon, I will have a viable suggestion. Until then I'll just keep track.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Excellent. Love time travel fics and having Sirius being the one sent back is a great choice. Like this start and Sirius just saying screw this and attacking the asshole guards. I'm hoping his first destination is off to grab Harry; he'll have a hard time talking to Remus without some kind of shield after all... I'd throw out a few ideas but I'm waiting to see which way you take this- whether Sirius is gonna take Harry and just run, if Dumbles is senile or a bastard...
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Not Rated
I can count on one hand, and less fingers, the number of Sirius 'do-over' fics I've seen. And i think that they may have been do-over in a new universe fics. Regardless, this is an exciting and engaging start with so many wonderful opportunities coming to mind I'm a bit giddy. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do.
Some sort of visual break between the two sections would be good, as it was a bit confusing in the first few sentences with 'Sam.'
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Not Rated
