Good beginning. It sounds like Captain Marvel, with Shazam being an Ascended Ancient.
If this was a year later, they might have been able to use the Prometheus to beam Dawn out of trouble. At this time, perhaps the Tok'ra could have helped.
Comments from author:
Sorry, but there won't be any Ascended Ancients showing up here.
They're almost as useless as the Powers That Be (Completely Friggin' Useless) were in the canon Joss-verse.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Black and Gold outfits? I'm gonna need more... I hope Buffy fares better against Doc than Spike did :( And having Xander capable of watching her back and slowing down Glory must be a load off her mind.
Comments from author:
There will be big hints in the next chapter about what happened.
And Doc will be a whole lot more competent in this story than he was in Joss's canon-verse, where he was pretty much just a momentary plot point and place holder.
And yes, Buffy is aware of exactly how competent Xander is now.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
OK, what is the cross over? I saw one asking about Tron, however, Black and Gold form fitting outfit, super strength, speed, flight, invunerlblity, sounds like a Captian Marvel cross over. With "team slayer" using Black Adam's colors.
Could be wrong but what the heck worth a guess.
Comments from author:
An excellent guess, but you'll have to wait for another chapter or two before you'll find out of you're correct or not.
Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [dabraning] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]