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Review of chapter "Gay Paree" from raxadian
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I bet the package is apocalyptic somewhat.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Party Crashers" from raxadian
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Buffy keeps meeting the most interesting people.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "To Paris" from raxadian
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Ah yes, things are never easy if you are the slayer.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Duty Calls" from raxadian
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Ah, a trap using the Buffter...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [12 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cavalry Charge" from VillageOrchid
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Pretty amazing story for action and for character motivation.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Short Order Cook" from VillageOrchid
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Buffy is certainly having a bad couple of days, but she isn't breaking rule one - and that's a plus.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dramatic Entrance" from VillageOrchid
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I really liked how you took a moment of Buffy's thoughts to review that she wasn't trying to kill everyone, but also wasn't going to put herself into any extra danger by trying too hard not to kill the foes she needed to stop. It is a good "meta answer" to people who have written stories about slayers going insane if they kill a human.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [29 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cavalry Charge" from DieselDriver
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Sorry, no reviews till now. Couldn't stop reading. Took a couple of bathroom breaks and food and drink but that was it. To much fun! Glad as all get out that I wasn't involved.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [17 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Party Crashers" from DieselDriver
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Ok, so, enhanced human meet Buffy the extremely enhanced human. This is bound to be fun. She probably thinks they are after her and her package, He probably thinks they're after him. I'm reserving judgement and I'll wait for the author to tell me. Heh, it's probably some of both.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [17 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cavalry Charge" from (Current Donor)BaronScrewtape
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I always thought Hannah would fit in nicely with a Boorne Identity story. Thanks for that!
Review By [(Current Donor)BaronScrewtape] • Date [4 Jan 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cavalry Charge" from DieselDriver
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An MP-5 is a fun little gun with a truly amazing cycle rate. I used to shoot second chance bowling pins at a navy base in SoCal and the navy equivelant of a swat team came out one time. Asked if they could do a quicky demo. So I know that an MP-5 can empty a 30 round magazine before the first empty case hits the ground. What was really funny was watching a pair of regular shooters with 1911A1's modified to shoot pins, clear the table of 18 pins faster than the 2 guys with the MP-5's. 9mm's just don't have much stopping power.

Just as a point of reference, I managed one time to clear 5 pins from the table in 7.58 seconds. I'm slow. My buddy cleared the table (with my gun and ammo) in 3.99 seconds. I watched him do it in 3.5 something seconds with his own gun. He's pretty darned good. Best time I ever heard of was 2.58 seconds.

The 9mm won't even knock a pin off the table (3 feet back to fall off). Minimum 2 shots to get it off. My redhawk will take 2 off with light loads. I know because I knicked one and it rolled behind the next one.

So what I'm saying here is that unless you like to spray and pray, an MP-5 is pretty useless.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [28 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What now?" from DieselDriver
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"micro-manager pointy-haired boss type"

I laughed so hard I choked. Dilbert special... I've worked for several bosses a lot like Mr. Pointy Hair.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [28 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cavalry Charge" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
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It's very hard not to get distracted when I got stuff like this to read. I keep telling myself it will still be there tomorrow and that I should be writing, but... well, even Buffy needs to rest sometimes.

that's my excuse and I'm sticking to it... must reading more... must read more...

Blue.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cavalry Charge" from eriktheviking
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I really enjoy the way you work in the crossover and have Buffy learning from her experiences, well done.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cavalry Charge" from (Past Donor)James
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Brilliant story. Too bad about Finn and Gates.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [29 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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