The package, did Walsh survive, all that. Meanwhile "Dutch" might be taking her along on a rescue mission in South America.... looking for something predatory?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Who would have thought a candy vending machine would be the deadly weapon that took down a formerly human killing machine? Nasty deaths for the Finn brothers. About all they could expect once they started tangling with Buffy. Dare I hope that it is backup coming through the roof?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking Things (and People)" from Gideon
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Problem solving - Buffy style. Pity that fight wasn't the last of them :(
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Short Order Cook" from ShalaDakiri
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I loved both fights; they kind of reminded me of boss fights from some videogames I've seen and/or played.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [28 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Short Order Cook" from JoeDineen
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"And then the roof blew in" Excellent, I look forward to more.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [28 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Short Order Cook" from Greywizard
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Excellent!! ;-)
And Finn's gonna need more than just a couple of aspirin to take care of that headache. ;-)
Of course, I can see Faith, after she hears about this little caper, telling Buffy she should have stuck one of the forks in Finn's scrotum, to ensure he "could never fuck with you again." ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [28 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Short Order Cook" from AllenPitt
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wow, Walsh will be filling out a lot of paperwork after this day is over, for sure. I wonder what her 2 new pals made of the horde of monsters fighting them, then said monsters panicking when word that "Slayer!" was there got around. Roof blew in... reinforcements? For one of the sides, anyway.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [28 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Short Order Cook" from Hecatonchires
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Ouch!
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [28 Oct 11] • Not Rated
So, a cyborg killed by vending machines and an extension cord ? I'd love to see what the CSI people would make of this scene. Maybe that could be another story in the series ?
Review By [Rich] • Date [27 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Electric-fork-of-BBQ-DEATH????? On the 1-10 scale of creative means of killing, that one has to rank at about... 25 or so :). And so, of course, the roof literally has to be blown off the place right after it happens :). Oh, and you just *had* to have one of the bad guys match Buffy's little heavy-machine-gun-as-sidearm stunt! Excellent work on this chapter :).
Review By [Clavell] • Date [27 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking Things (and People)" from RafMereC
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cool chapter
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [27 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breaking Things (and People)" from AllenPitt
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That's going to hurt in the morning. Gee, Walsh is going to have a tough time covering all these losses in her next budget. She's now in a position of having to come up with something truly amazing, or she's toast just from spending so much for no result. Not to mention her setting killers after Buffy only holds up for so long before people start asking questions. This # of dead should also raise some eyebrows. Hm, Riley is still in there somewhere, too...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Clavell
