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Review of chapter "24 Hour Party People" from grd
Review:
Hope Maggie has poor bladder control. Outstanding.
Review By [grd] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "24 Hour Party People" from (Past Donor)DonSample
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> I nodded and in a *couch,* started slowly moving forward,
> being careful only to watch the observer out of the corner
> of my eye. Nothing will alert a sentry faster than staring
> at the back of their heads.

The only thing sillier that trying to sneak up on a sentry while wearing a sofa, is the idea that they won't notice you if you don't look right at them.
Comments from author:
Furniture is always an excellent disguise.
Review By [(Past Donor)DonSample] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "24 Hour Party People" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Heh. The upcoming conversation will enlightening, I'm sure.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [17 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Probe" from Mcspender
Review:
I hope this means we're gonna see Bourne's favorite trick, with Buffy doing the honors scaring goood ole Maggie with a line about her poor choice of shoes.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Probe" from PATM
Review:
Oh yes, quick updates! Is Dave the Bourne character? 'cause he seems more loquacious then that Damon fella was. Other wise he is proactive enough, which is great for Walsh, yeah?
Review By [PATM] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Probe" from Gideon
Review:
Dave sure is handy as a spotter! And while you mentioned Sam and Dutch you have carefully left it open for just about anyone to turn up. What Fun! I can't decide if I want to see Riley and Graham taken down hard or if I want them to realise their mistake and join up with the good guys. I guess it is much too soon for that to happen. I hope they have time after they take down Walsh for some shopping of Buffy will be seriously bummed!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Probe" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Don't think I'd want to be Walsh or her goons by the time Bourne and Buffy get done with them.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Probe" from JoeDineen
Review:
I like it so far, it should be fun.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Probe" from AllenPitt
Review:
Glad to see she's smart enough to call in some favors for backup. Gee, Finn is only a sgt.? Promotion doesn't come as fast outside the Initiative, I suppose.
Walsh is taking a huge risk in this op-- if it blows up on her, she's toast. Though she was supposed to be toast at end of last failure. Buffy should really make sure of her this time.
It'll be interesting to find out what's in the package...
Comments from author:
Sergeant was the last rank Buffy saw him at.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What now?" from AllenPitt
Review:
I hope they at least wear gloves when they open the package. Yikes. Probably wants Buffy for raw materials for "Adam". Or maybe it'll be "Eve". Surely there is a phone call or 2 that Buffy could make?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What now?" from ShalaDakiri
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Well, at least they've made a start at figuring out Walsh's game. My question is: How is Joyce going to react to whatever alphebet soup agency trying to find out if Buffy has contacted her?
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [13 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retreat Gracefully" from NrDg
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I love this series and this story is going great. I like that you are portraying an ADULT Buffy who is mature and competent as I would expect the character to grow (into unlike a lot of other stories where she is portrayed as just a super powered adult aged child). I have gotten a lot of workout on Google search with terms you use - not a real problem and I am learning a lot. You got me to watch The Bourne Identity, which I haven't seen before and got me hooked on the series. I really like that Buffy is acknowledging and aware that others have superior skills and is willing to work and learn from them. Really looking forward to updates and future stories.
Review By [NrDg] • Date [10 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retreat Gracefully" from JimmX
Review:
I was afraid this was going to be Buffy vs Bourne--much better this way. Very fun series.
Review By [JimmX] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retreat Gracefully" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Buffy should have let Walsh get eaten. Bet she's regretting the decision to save that witch now.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Retreat Gracefully" from tomfo
Review:
Ooh its getting really interesting now, looks like walsh is up to her usual not too bright tricks, cant wait for more.
Review By [tomfo] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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