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Review of chapter "Vampires and Sentinels" from (Current Donor)jcon
Review:
This is really interesting. Well written; especially the scene between Jim & Angel. Definitely make me laugh to read those two going head to head. The story is coming along well & I look forward to reading more of it. Thankyou.
Comments from author:
I know I had fun writing the bit with Jim and Angel *grin*. It wouldn't have been quite so hairy if Jim hadn't essentially been getting tossed in the deep end, but hey.
Review By [(Current Donor)jcon] • Date [1 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Vampires and Sentinels" from VillageOrchid
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Well, if being on the hellmouth isn't too intense for a Sentinel, I'd say you plan to have Jon eventually go back to Sunnydale with Xander. But somehow, I'm not sure if that would work. He'd be like Connor on crack there.
Comments from author:
That's exactly what's going to happen. Jon has one huge advantage that Jim doesn't. Weird shit is OLD hat to him at this point. He's far, far, far more adaptable than Jim can ever be. That's part of why Jim reacted so strongly to Angel ... he does NOT tolerate weird crap at all well (just watch the show if you don't believe me *snerk*). Jon will need a bit of time to adapt, because the Hellmouth *is* going to be hard on the senses, but he won't be spazzing about demons and spirit animals and fighting Xander (and Blair, who will be teaching Xander) every inch of the way.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vampires and Sentinels" from calikocat
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YES! New chapter! *dances* Can't wait to see what Jon's spirit guide is or how he and Xander meet, or some of the training Jim puts Xander through.
Review By [calikocat] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Vampires and Sentinels" from LNR
Review:
WOOT! YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More Please SOON!

Sooner than the last one please!
Comments from author:
Never fear. I'm back to writing this. Also, an edited version of the first nine chapters is up on ff.net, if you're interested. I haven't changed much, just added bits and pieces here and there, and clarified a thing or two.
Review By [LNR] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Arrangements are Made" from TheologyDiscography
Review:
Aww. That's completely adorable. I must say, Jim and Blair are taking this really well, their own oddness aside. I'm a bit confused on how you're fitting Jon O'Neil into this, but I have faith (hehe) that it will be explained in due time.

When I first started reading, I didn't realize that it started so early in the series, before everything happened with Angel and all. There really isn't much identifying it until several chapters in. Not a complaint so much as an observation.

All in all, excellent start, and the storyline has a feel of definite plot to it, so I'm sure it will continue to be good.
Comments from author:
You'll see how Jon (and the rest of SG-1) gets worked in in a few chapters ... I'm restarting work on this fic after a long hiatus on it. *grin*
Review By [TheologyDiscography] • Date [22 Apr 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Arrangements are Made" from thewrongalice
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This is good - looking forward to more :-)
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [14 Feb 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Arrangements are Made" from Netchka
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Wow! Cool story so far. I hope there is more coming soon. Thanks.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [2 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Arrangements are Made" from gaulty
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interesting chapter, bye
Review By [gaulty] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrangements are Made" from Genuka
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*snicker* looks like everyone but Buffy is actually paying attention and taking charge.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [1 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrangements are Made" from spacey
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*snigger*
Review By [spacey] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrangements are Made" from kayron
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I can't wait to see what happens when Jim meets Angel! Blair will probably go into question overdrive!
Review By [kayron] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Arrangements are Made" from calikocat
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XD Omigod. Angel is so not gonna like being show and tell. *cackles*
Review By [calikocat] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrangements are Made" from mithrilandtj
Review:
From what you've done so far I'd have to guess...
that Xander is the Guide and mini-Jack is the Sentinel

am I right?
Comments from author:
Ding Ding Ding! We have a winnah! Yep. Mini-Jack's the Sentinel and Xander's the guide, though they won't be meeting for a while yet. Jon's senses are starting to twinge, but it takes a bit for them to get to get to 'fully activated' level, and they're not going to cross paths until after that happens (which, conveniently, allows Xander a bit more time to heal up enough so that he can at least walk unaided, 'cause atm, that's so not happening)
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Arrangements are Made" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting... a reveal to the readers but not the characters. Thanks for continuing!
Comments from author:
Yeah. It's going to be a bit before Jon enters the fray, but the process has begun, and I needed to show that, or it would have looked more than a little odd to suddenly go 'oh, hai! Other half!' three chapters (or whatever) down the line.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Arrangements are Made" from LMiC
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Happy sighs... an update before bed... ahhh I feel the love. Poor Xander, so not in love with his hyena. Maybe Jim and Blair need to tell him how they really wound up in that alley...
Review By [LMiC] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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