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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CageFire
Review:
Sigh, dang it. If you're going to put slash in it, then please mark it as such so it doesn't show up in my search results. It's not that I have anything against homosexuals, but I really don't want to watch/read it. They can do whatever they want in private, but I don't want to be forced to watch. I feel the same way towards obese, ugly, and elderly people. It's wonderful that they found somebody to love, but I really find them highly unattractive and don't want to watch.

I'll give it a few more chapters, but if you're intending to get any more graphic about it, or making it a major part of the story, please let me know so I can remove it from my alerts, because it just ruins the story for me. There's only so much I can skip over before it becomes pointless to even read the story.

I've had that problem with stories in the past, where the summary /claims/ a really interesting plot, and then they turn it into a slash smut fic, under the guise of "romance", and I didn't see almost any sign of the plot that drew me to try that story in the first place. I have tried repeatedly to read slash fics that had an interesting plot, trying very hard to just ignore the parts I really didn't want to read, but every single time it has just been ruined for me.

The rather hypocritical part is that I have to force myself to admit that if it was a good straight pairing I would actually maybe liked the fics(or maybe tolerated based on how it was done), but that's only because I could actually get some entertainment value out of such a pairing, while slash pairings just seem gross to me. Once again, I'm not prejudice, but I don't have to get off on it either. I swear there's some people out there who think "Oh, you hate gay pairings, you must hate gay people." If anybody is prejudice it's them.
Comments from author:
ok I can see this is obviously a touchy subject so I'll tell you that I already have the whole story planned out. There will most likely not be aything more han the kiss that was in the last chapter. Also i did add the slash to the story warning when i actually determined that it was going to be in the story after plotting the story out. Sorry you didn't catch it. I will say that it will be a part of the story but that there will be no smut in the story. Xander will most likely not get with anyone. If there is anything it will be in a sequel and i'll be sure to put a warning in the summary.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from QundraDraconum
Review:
Thank you for the warning, I've turned off tracking now. Thanks for the story.
Review By [QundraDraconum] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from anomoly
Review:
I do like this story and think it is well written, but like some other folks Slash is not my cup of tea. I also agree that a non-slash version would be welcome. I know it is more to do, but I think you will find you have just as many fans for it as you do a Slash version. Either way, have fun and keep writing.
Review By [anomoly] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from missinglink
Review:
Sorry to add to the others, but while I liked the start and flow of the story, the idea that you are a) going slash and b) making others slash out of canon is not my cup of tea. I understand you need to write what you feel is your strength, but I would rather you just leave Xander as not in a relationship then. There are plenty of stories that have nothing to do with relationships of a physical or emotional one beyond friendship. Hate to leave a nice start, but this has always been a deal breaker for me and I am sure for others as well. Best of luck.
Review By [missinglink] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from hpssslashfan
Review:
This is very well written so far. I like how leaving his comfort zone has created such interesting changes in Xander. Anyone who expected a cookie-cutter version of Xander isn't thinking about how expanded his world has become. I luv that he can now acknowledge a boy-crush and how being a stripper plus a telepath would open him up to more experiences than he "usually" would let happen.

I would think that if you honestly saw how others saw you when they are attracted to you that you would have to be flattered.

Keep up the good work!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [hpssslashfan] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from possom
Review:
Xander knew it was pathetic but he could admit that he was developing a little crush on him.

I dreaded how the fic would turn out after that, an I was right. My unckle is gay, so I don't have a problem with it, but I don't like to read stuff about it.

Plus Xander's not into guys, same as Remy. While the plot is good and the fic is great, you might be loosing some readers with suddenly making it a slash fic.

Here's an idea, make two versions, one het and the other slash or let someone else wright a het version.
Review By [possom] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Dhampyr
Review:
Okay you lost me when you made Gambit gay for Xander. One is a consummate ladies man in love with Rogue and the other never showed anything close to homosexual interests in canon. The story premise itself was fine right up to that point. It was well written and I wish you good luck with the rest of it but this is where I stop.
Review By [Dhampyr] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from SilentAddiction
Review:
Love it so far!
Review By [SilentAddiction] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from deamon
Review:
ok I like your story but I cant read slash. So sorry i have to stop reading your story. But even tho I will stop reading it cuz of the slash i will say that you are a good writer tho and what I did read I liked.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the compliment. I understand completely...there were a few times I've tried to read straight stories and i just couldn't do it.
Review By [deamon] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from kayron
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I am very interested in finding out how the XMen will react when they find out Xander's parentage. I'm looking forward to that. 'm also very curious about the kind of mutations that Xander has. The telepathy. The 'optic' blasts. ThoseI recognise. But where does he get the flying from, and what is the deal with the sun and the lessoning appetite? One thing about Xander was that he always liked to eat.
Review By [kayron] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from MagnusXXN
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....Xander's not gay.



): )
Review By [MagnusXXN] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from xon
Review:
Really? Slash pairing for Xander?

If you are, just answer this question; why?
Review By [xon] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from superfan
Review:
Well, that was fun.
Review By [superfan] • Date [27 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [25 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Pup
Review:
Squints eyes and looks around, *gravely voice* "Ninja's, it just had to be ninja's."

Good story progression and thanks for the itching in his eyes that I believe will develop into my favorite yell from X-Men: Legends
"OPTIC BLAST!!". Havoc's hand blast also kick mucho ass.
Review By [Pup] • Date [25 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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