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Review of chapter "Harry meets the Scoobies" from jimk
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Overall it is a fun story. Though, I do cringe every time one of them calls him dad. They were in their early 20's when Sunnydale cratered. They'd known him eight years at that point and were used to calling him Giles. Being adopted at that age with no explanation and all calling him dad just sounds a little creepy. If that's the purpose then cool, but if not then it makes you wonder if this is some wish demon mutated world or something similarly demonic.
Review By [jimk] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "well that was a surprise" from AllenPitt
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Poor Xander. Can't catch a break. And Faith may not be aware of the child just yet. What a way to find out, dear old dad pops up out of nowhere.
Poor Snape. Sirius, the man he despises more than anyone else, now has relatives? Ouchie.
Hm... Angel was from Ireland originally. Any chance of Seamus et al being distant relatives? Or of Drusilla being related to Trelawney? Seers do run in families...
There are a lot of British types in the Buffy/Angel shows, so lots of possibilities. Wesley was Head Boy of his school. Need I say more? Spike back when he was William...who knows.
Comments from author:
ask me these in a private review and I'll totally answer. I do have firm plans for both Spike and Dru. I forgot about Wesley thank you for reminding me. i can definitely add him in. have him straiten out Percy.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "White Hats" from Cmiller
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That was great.
Loved the comment about not betting against Faith.
Adored the Scoobs backing their new boy wonder.

Ps. Glad you liked my "Charged to Ripper" and if you have any suggestions on where I can take it send me a message.
Comments from author:
:) thank you
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "White Hats" from ChaosLady
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Wonderful. Great combo of mushy and funny. Can't wait til the next update!
Comments from author:
thanks wasn't sure if it was too mushy or not
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "White Hats" from kayron
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Harry really got lucky! As an new Scooby he is going to learn that they have his back, and they WON'T stab him in it.
Comments from author:
yeppers. scoobies stick together

thanks for reading
Review By [kayron] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "White Hats" from AllenPitt
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any chance the Order will eventually notice HP is spending a lot of time outside the 'blood wards'? Mrs. Figg? Just a thought... most likely they won't notice a thing.
Comments from author:
Harry already told Sirius he got a Job but eventually the potter guard will notice. I haven't decided how long it will take for them to notice yet, but certain members (Moody and Tonks) will definitly notice.
Harry will still be spending his night within the 'blood wards' so Albus isn't going to notice at all if i can help it. you never know what my muse will decide thou
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Question for question" from ChaosLady
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Moldibutt! LOL! The Q&A is interesting. You really need to work on the shortness of you chapters.
Comments from author:
i know but my muse felt it a good place to end

thanks for reading
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Question for question" from AllenPitt
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Oz's ability to control the shift would be huge news to the trio, for obvious reasons: Remus. Hm.. wouldn't it be fun if Darla has a portrait in Hogwarts? (from pre-vamp days). Being able to talk to her would be something, for Connor.
Let's see... Dawn is really 'green glowing energy' -maybe Trelawney would be able to 'see' that, but nobody would pay any attention to her, as usual? The Avada K. spell is green.. any relation? Might be funny if D is immune to it, it uses the same wavelength or something.
Comments from author:
more ideas :D thank you.

i think i will use Dawn being immune to Avada K.

as for the rest well have to wait and see how it works
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Question for question" from Cmiller
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lol. Oz's word quota for the day... wouldn't it be for the week?

Anyway I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
i thought about making it the week quota but then he wouldn't get to say anything during the groups weekend shopping trip.

As always thanks for reading. i really like charged to ripper
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [1 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry meets the Scoobies" from AkashaDrake
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Connor...no new ideas on the L. I just figured Liam after his father. I mean Aurelius is clearly a reference there as well

I would like to know a few things about how it is that Xander, Dawn, and Buffy all call Giles "Dad"

Other than that, I actually find myself waiting for the next part.
Comments from author:
L was for Liam but i might change it cause i kinda like the idea AllenPitt gave.

Dawn *is* Giles daughter. they did a 'heritage potion' after Joyce died and Hank claimed Dawn wasn't his.

Xander had abusive parents. Before Xander went to africa he and Giles had a heart to heart. along the lines of you're the best father figure i could have asked for/ i'd be proud to call you son. something like that. Willow's parents were absent most the show. So when Xander started calling Giles Dad she did too.

that's how it goes in my head anyways. Thanks for reading
Review By [AkashaDrake] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry meets the Scoobies" from AllenPitt
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Addendum: Connor's "L" middle name could be Longbottom, of course. That might work even better... As long as it's not Lockheart, of Gilderoy fame, heh.
Comments from author:
more ideas thank you ;)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry meets the Scoobies" from AllenPitt
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I'm glad HP & Hermione are at least a little suspicious at first, wouldn't have lasted this long if they weren't. Giles having known James P. will help a lot. Hopefully Giles wasn't in Slytherin, or that would not be of the good..
But the really big question: C.L. Aurelius. What does the "L" stand for? Any chance it's Lovegood? Just wondering if maybe Darla was related to one of the wizarding families, maybe she was a squib? It'd explain why Connor has magic & would be a fun tie-in...
Comments from author:
thanks. humm you're giving me ideas
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry meets the Scoobies" from ChaosLady
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LOL! The introductions were were hilarious.
Comments from author:
thank you i really do try
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry meets the Scoobies" from Cmiller
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LOVED Faith's introductions!~!!!!!~!
Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
thank you

Faith and Xander are my favorites to write.

they can get ways with saying almost anything
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alexander's stray" from ChaosLady
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This is really good, even if the chapters are kinda short. I can't believe I waited til the 5th chapter to read it!
Comments from author:
thank you for reading

the second and third chapter should of been one chapter but i'm just figuring out the platform. it kept deleting itself. i dont even know how to make italics :(

i'm working on the whole longer chapters
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [30 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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