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Review of chapter "Snickers and Stones" from AllenPitt
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so Dawn is the result of "I Will Remember You" ? Ouch. Makes some sense, though. Does Angel know? One would think he'd talk to her. I like that not everyone gets along with/is friends with everyone else, that wouldn't be normal. The Dawn/Cassie thing, great. Dawn throwing up on Jacob, great scene. One would think Spike would show up, he made a promise to Buffy & would likely haunt the area for a while..
Sam is NOT great mother material, doesn't know how to manage the Dawn/Cassie problem etc.
Comments from author:
At first Dawn was going to be sensitive to the gate, and there was going to be some weird magicy healing of the gate or keeping Dawn Earthbound, but this seemed a bit more lighthearted.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doctors and The Doctor" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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Actually it seems quite in character for Sam to ignore her ward, and anything that does not match her world view until her nose has been thoroughly rubbed in it. Had I been Dawn I would have headed to Sunnydale the instant the Initiative files appeared and Sam did not discuss them. Anything to do with that organization should have made her run. (THough Sam taking them home is unlikely)

Thanks for writing
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Doctors and The Doctor" from Chaoskitten
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*giggle*

I agree with Dawns summing up of The Silence.

....and I really can't wait for more.
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doctors and The Doctor" from tomfo
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There is a lot of potential with this story but I am really confused with the timeline. The summary says buffy failed the CPS inspection but in the first chapter you make out that buffy only recently died? and sam takes her cos there isnt any other legal family, and now in this newest chapter dawn is referring to things that dont happen till after buffy is resurrected. Can you clear this up for me cos I'm really confused.
Review By [tomfo] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doctors and The Doctor" from Alkeni
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Hmmm....
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doctors and The Doctor" from Gideon
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This chapter seemed extremely disjointed to me, but that may be because I don't know the stargate episodes very well. The first bit seemed like half a conversation and the rest of the sections also seemed to have bits missing. Maybe it would have been easier to flesh it out if you spread it over two or three chapters instead of one?
I got that Sam was spending a lot of time on the base and Daniel was spending more time with Dawn than is strictly healthy for a grown man and a female teenager :) But I'm not sure who has read the initiative files and who has not. Has Dawn signed a non-disclosure agreement yet or has she just rifled through the files on Sam's desk without asking? Is this a few days after Dawn arrived or a couple of weeks?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Doctors and The Doctor" from AllenPitt
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Sam really isn't that bad, but she's got a demanding job, she's a workaholic, and from Dawn's perspective it looks that bad, I think. I'm surprised Spike hasn't shown up just to check that she's ok. I like the idea she was created by the Ancients, nice tie-in.
Any chance the scoobies bring Buffy back, but keep it a secret from Dawn?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doctors and The Doctor" from RevDorothyL
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I'm just glad you're continuing with this story, and I adore the idea of Dawn and Daniel working out Gallifreyan script and refusing to answer phones while watching Dr. Who!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Peanut Butter - day three" from Gideon
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Dawn caught a fish? I think even Buffy would be impressed!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Peanut Butter - day three" from garrycooper
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Just found your story and I love it.
Comments from author:
Sadly this won't update until I have a firm grasp on my homework. Nor will any of the other stories.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [10 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Peanut Butter - day three" from Alkeni
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I like this fic. Update soon, please.
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Peanut Butter - day three" from Odin
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This is a great start. So many possibilities. I was a little surprised about the gate coming up so quickly, but I can hardly wait to read about Dawn's reaction. Three truck loads of files also should contain some interesting surprises, depending on how much is redacted. Thanks for the story, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [Odin] • Date [23 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Peanut Butter - day three" from dugleikoo
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I think I like it so far, I'm going to stick to it and see where it goes.
Review By [dugleikoo] • Date [22 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Peanut Butter - day three" from dreameralways
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I can't wait to read about Sam's surprise when she realizes that Buffy is in the files they're getting, or will those files be so redacted as to be virtually useless?
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [21 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Peanut Butter - day three" from (Recent Donor)jcon
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This is going along really well. Enjoying the story. Well written characters. Look forward to further updates.
Review By [(Recent Donor)jcon] • Date [20 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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