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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SpinelessPunster
Review:
Good beginning. It'll be a story I could follow a long time.

One issue, did you refer to dawn's dad as Angel instead of Hank once? Not a biggie. When will Spike visit? I figure a week hopping trains, unless he steals a car...
Comments from author:
Hmmm...Angel you say? really? hmmmm.....*cheeky smile*

Spike may or may not visit, I honestly hadn't considered him. But! I now have a couple ideas regarding a visit that might not happen.
Review By [SpinelessPunster] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WildMartin
Review:
Nice work, I hope you have more planned for this story. I'd love to see how this plays out.
Review By [WildMartin] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Hallfrek as social services caseworker...what a frightening notion...But Dawn with a crush on Daniel...that is perfectly believable. Thanks and looking forward to the next update.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Xeelia
Review:
Love the beginning, hope you update soon! :D
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AngusH
Review:
Great start and I'd be interested to read the next chapter.

I can see that there are changes in the family tree, but I'm not sure I understand them yet.
Hopefully it'll become clearer to me as I read more.

Looking forward to the next chapter very much
Comments from author:
Joyce and Sam are sisters. Dear old Dad stopped talking to Joyce because she married Hank and their brother (I always forget the borthers name) never really knew Joyce had kids.
Review By [AngusH] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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