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Review of chapter "Day 2" from JasonBarnett
Review:
so they think Buffy commited suicide? No, just bad idea. It's absolutely terrible. Just say it was an accident.

And vengeance demons can alter reality, including retroactively. Introducing Halfrek makes Dawn dumb for not just invoking a wish. "I wish Spike hadn't been knocked off the tower by Doc." "I wish they'd forgetten to bring a knife." "I wish I'd jumped before Buffy had gotten there." "I wish the Knights of Byzantium hadn't found us and we'd gotten away from GLory." Any number of things.
Comments from author:
Have you ever actually tried to figure out what a crying girl is actually saying? Like really? You end up with five different stories in as many minutes. Besides, this is what Sam thinks happened. Sleep and grief addled minds buddy.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cflat
Review:
This is a great idea and can't wait to see where you go with it. How old is Cassie here, btw? I'm assuming she'll be somewhat in the story.
Comments from author:
Cassie may or may not factor in too greatly, at least not for a few chapters yet. There's three different otpions for this fic and I haven't picked one yet. Cassie is only in two.
Review By [cflat] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Nice beginning and I want to read more of your story. I like the 'Daniel-crush' Dawn is developing. But putting two such chaos attractors together is probably going to be a Bad Thing. Poor Jack and Sam. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SpinelessPunster
Review:
Good beginning. It'll be a story I could follow a long time.

One issue, did you refer to dawn's dad as Angel instead of Hank once? Not a biggie. When will Spike visit? I figure a week hopping trains, unless he steals a car...
Comments from author:
Hmmm...Angel you say? really? hmmmm.....*cheeky smile*

Spike may or may not visit, I honestly hadn't considered him. But! I now have a couple ideas regarding a visit that might not happen.
Review By [SpinelessPunster] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
Review:
Nice work, I hope you have more planned for this story. I'd love to see how this plays out.
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Hallfrek as social services caseworker...what a frightening notion...But Dawn with a crush on Daniel...that is perfectly believable. Thanks and looking forward to the next update.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Xeelia
Review:
Love the beginning, hope you update soon! :D
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AngusH
Review:
Great start and I'd be interested to read the next chapter.

I can see that there are changes in the family tree, but I'm not sure I understand them yet.
Hopefully it'll become clearer to me as I read more.

Looking forward to the next chapter very much
Comments from author:
Joyce and Sam are sisters. Dear old Dad stopped talking to Joyce because she married Hank and their brother (I always forget the borthers name) never really knew Joyce had kids.
Review By [AngusH] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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