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Review of chapter "Peanut Butter - day three" from RevDorothyL
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I really like the idea of Dawn and Jack as silence-loving fishing buddies.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Peanut Butter - day three" from Kalliza
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Yay! Love it. Hoping you update soon (hopefully with a long, juicy chapter)! Love watching relationships develop, and these ones're looking to be pretty fun!
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Peanut Butter - day three" from VillageOrchid
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Glad to see more of this. I thought Jack's pond didn't have any fish. Did they go to one closer that had fish - for a day trip?
Comments from author:
Dawn picked the fishing spot.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
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In second review of this chapter, I realize that Jack actually had to censor himself from saying, "Space Monkey," as it might engender too many of the wrong questions.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Peanut Butter - day three" from AllenPitt
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well, at least Sam's civilian life isn't as dangerous as Buffy's. Still can get dangerous, though. So, will Dawn's life intersect with the SGC stuff at any time? She was a ball of glowing energy once. Maybe an Ascended?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Peanut Butter - day three" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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Dawn and fishing? Heh. I wonder how the family will react if/when Buffy will come back.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [18 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day 2" from Rich
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Three truckloads of files will almost certainly contain info on the Initiative, and therefore on Buffy's real job; this should get interesting. On another note - the Carters aren't well-endowed ? Have you SEEN Amanda Tapping ?
Comments from author:
I don't really make a habit of watching women's boobs, lol! But, if you need a reason, pretend Sam is an exception and Dawn is a bit bigger, or at least displaying them in a way that they look bigger.
Review By [Rich] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Day 2" from AllenPitt
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So.... Dawn is from the IWRY episode, taken by the monks then aged up, or something weird like that? And Angel refuses to realize it? That's different.
And Willow wasn't able to repair the Buffybot in time to keep Buffy's death a secret? Will W. go ahead and resurrect B ?
Spike will likely show up at some time, the promise he made was to protect Dawn not "continue my work as a slayer" or whatever...
Comments from author:
Oh my god...you're the first person to get it. You get a cookie!

Oh, and Halfrek Episode got bumped up. There's a comment reply explaining a bit of it somewhere. Go you!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day 2" from Gideon
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It is nice to know that Dawn at least has someone to grieve with her now and that Sam is able to make that connection at least, even if she doesn't really know what is going on. It also makes sense that people outside Sunnydale would be notified of Buffy's death unlike in canon where it seems none ever found out she was dead. That will cause some problems when Buffy is brought back :)
I am a bit surprised that they are considering showing her the gate though, none else's family gets to know about the gate, why is Dawn so special? Are they going to try to hire a high school age girl as a linguistics expert?
And where is Spike? He promised to look after Dawn, so is her now travelling to Colorado to meet up with her?
Comments from author:
Spike is a secret ^_^

But, when you think about it, all of Dawn's family is involved with the gate. There's really no way they could keep it from her. Especially since Jacob is technically Dawn's primary guardian. But that will come in later.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
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A little confused about the timeline, but some nice character moments.
Did Dawn "wish" to Halfrek that there never was a Buffy-bot? Is that why Hallie has the internal monolog about it?
Comments from author:
We're pretending that the Halfrek episode happened before Buffy jumped. And because that case wasn't really resolved, Halfrek came back when Buffy died and put her with someone who would actually pull a trigger to keep Dawn safe.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Day 2" from JasonBarnett
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so they think Buffy commited suicide? No, just bad idea. It's absolutely terrible. Just say it was an accident.

And vengeance demons can alter reality, including retroactively. Introducing Halfrek makes Dawn dumb for not just invoking a wish. "I wish Spike hadn't been knocked off the tower by Doc." "I wish they'd forgetten to bring a knife." "I wish I'd jumped before Buffy had gotten there." "I wish the Knights of Byzantium hadn't found us and we'd gotten away from GLory." Any number of things.
Comments from author:
Have you ever actually tried to figure out what a crying girl is actually saying? Like really? You end up with five different stories in as many minutes. Besides, this is what Sam thinks happened. Sleep and grief addled minds buddy.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cflat
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This is a great idea and can't wait to see where you go with it. How old is Cassie here, btw? I'm assuming she'll be somewhat in the story.
Comments from author:
Cassie may or may not factor in too greatly, at least not for a few chapters yet. There's three different otpions for this fic and I haven't picked one yet. Cassie is only in two.
Review By [cflat] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
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Nice beginning and I want to read more of your story. I like the 'Daniel-crush' Dawn is developing. But putting two such chaos attractors together is probably going to be a Bad Thing. Poor Jack and Sam. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SpinelessPunster
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Good beginning. It'll be a story I could follow a long time.

One issue, did you refer to dawn's dad as Angel instead of Hank once? Not a biggie. When will Spike visit? I figure a week hopping trains, unless he steals a car...
Comments from author:
Hmmm...Angel you say? really? hmmmm.....*cheeky smile*

Spike may or may not visit, I honestly hadn't considered him. But! I now have a couple ideas regarding a visit that might not happen.
Review By [SpinelessPunster] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
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Nice work, I hope you have more planned for this story. I'd love to see how this plays out.
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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