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Harry Potter and the Goddess (of the) Dawn

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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Xeelia
Review:
Great chapter!! I can't wait until she finally gets to Hogwarts!! hehe Keep up the good work! :D
Comments from author:
Thanks!
I'm TRYING to move things along, and get her to the school, but I tend to overdo the minutia a bit.
Still, she'll meet Ron and Harry next chapter, and hopefully get to Hogwarts two chapters later (since the ride on the train will take at least one).

Thank you for the encouragement!
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Some how it seems like there's some kind of corrective reality damper around Dawn.. because every time she says she's a goddess Draco just thinks she's being a high-born bi-ach. Which is normal for him. Thanks for continuing and going into details.
Comments from author:
::because every time she says she's a goddess Draco just thinks she's being a high-born bi-ach::

In his defense, the High-born Bitcas ARE just like that!
I think it finally penetrated the third time around, though.
Which is why he's rubbing his hands together and going 'Mwa-ha-haa!'
(well, not really doing that, but certainly things look brighter for him than he'd first assumed).

Thank you for continuing to comment!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Well...

Little miss Dawn, pardon, *Aurora* is quite the hand full *coughbitchcough*, isn't she?

;)

Thanks for the quick update... looking forward to the next chapter!
Comments from author:
You say that like it's a BAD thing!
^_^

Probably a couple of days for the next chapter; I do have to work occasionally.
Before the weekend, though, hopefully.

Thanks for commenting (again)!
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AllenPitt
Review:
ok, she's trapped in an eleven year old's persona, so I don't think she's stupid so much as oblivious to a lot of the implications of her actions. Plus the whole Glory thing, makes her short tempered/imperious and all that, probably. I almost feel sorry for the various wizardly factions maneuvering to be the ones 'managing' her. As she gets older even if they manage to indoctrinate her in a lot of things...they'll probably find her very hard to control.
Meanwhile she's kind of burned her bridges with Giles & Willow/Tara.... And it'll be a few years before she can manage a 'bring back Buffy' spell, at least. Still, with luck all the attention on her will make HP's life a little easier. Gee, I wonder what house she'll end up in. I doubt the Hat would dare to not-put her in Slytherin.
Hm... and, in Quirrell, V. will get a lot of info about her...
Comments from author:
The HP verse doesn't lack for people who consider themselves to be Chessmasters (in the tv tropes sense of the term), so yep, there will be those who try to set themselves up to 'manage' Miss Summers.

On her end of things; yes, she has made herself fairly unwelcome back in Sunnydale, and she's also realized that she can't simply go around opening portals at random, looking for Buffy's soul.

The sorting hat thing... maybe I'll manage to surprise you.
Maybe.
A little?
::looks sad::
Probably not.

::Edit::
Hey, thank you for the Rec!
First one for the story, wooooot!!!
Thank you, sir!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Gideon
Review:
And in this chapter it seems that Aurora has inherited some of Glory's stupidity along with her power too! How sad:( I'm not sure yet if this gives Harry a powerful Enemy of his Enemy or another dark lord to defeat. Either way it is sure to be complicated. At least none of it should be a surprise to Harry and friends if Aurora keeps blurting things out like that.
Comments from author:
It may well turn out that she's not especially bright (because Glory wasn't exactly a bright spark, and for that matter Hogwart's is full of students who are average at best).
I'm not quite sure if you readers would be okay with a 'dim' Dawn... although with Draco, Harry and Hermione, there are certainly lots of other clever types around.

The next couple-three chapters will see the drawing of some lines and the taking of some sides, so you'll have a clearer idea of how things are going to go.

Thanks for continuing to read and review!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Interesting.

The hair could be an issue. Uber long hair can look good or awful depending on the amount of care. And really long hair takes a lot of care. Of course magic provides options.

When Aurora is Dawn the hair wont be so long?
Comments from author:
::Interesting::

Interesting is good; I'm down with Interesting.

The care of long hair can be managed pretty handily with the aid of magic in the Wizarding World. Still not a trivial thing, I'll grant you, but be patient and I'll tie it in with something that might satisfy you and the others.

::When Aurora is Dawn the hair wont be so long?::

Her NAME is AUR--

Ahem. Sorry about that, flashback to the chapter.
Um, I'm sure I don't know what you mean?
_>

Ah, yep! I have no idea what you mean!

Thanks for commenting!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Excellent start to what could be a very unique story.

I hope you continue, and soon!
Comments from author:
Hey, thank you!

I fully intend to post the next chapter today, if at all possible.
Feeling very psyched about the story, and the many reviews!
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
Review:
Neat concept. It's interesting that the Malfoys already know enough about her to want to have Draco meet her. Even if she can't resurrect Buffy now, she's going to see or hear of Voldemort trying it multiple times (the philosopher's stone, the diary, on and on). Sooner or later she's either going to realize it's a bad idea OR manage it.
Will she find later on that she has to do the brain-suckage thing to keep from going nuts? Ouchie.
*** Spike made a promise to Buffy. Odds are he's going to be more interested in protecting Dawn than helping the scoobies in Sunnydale. At some point she might send a letter asking him for help or protection. And he'd come a-running. And would probably be ok with a resurrection, too. Recall his reaction to finding out about it -that even if Buffy 'came back wrong', he'd still want that.
Later on will Dawn have an alternate form? Kind of like Ben/Glory? i.e. "little Dawn/big Dawn"?
Comments from author:
Um.
Okay, I was trying to keep up with the reviews, and reply to every one as they came in, but in this case... I have to pass.
For now.
Because you are WAY too close to the mark with at least one of your guesses.
I mean, 'yay you, good guessing!' and stuff, but sheesh!
At least let me write it first before you go blabbing spoilers all over the place!
(^_^)

Seriously, though, thank you for commenting!
I'll come back and fill in more of a reply in a couple of chapters, after I've gotten past the spoilerly part.
Until then: Shhhhhhh!!!!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Review:
What is Dawn's wand made from? I don't know if it's fanon or canon, but often the wood used is based upon a person's birth month. As for the wand core, how about her own hair?
Comments from author:
Dawn's 'wand' is so bizarre as to defy any brief explanation I could attempt in this limited space.
I'll get to it pretty quickly, so be patient and all will be made clear.

I'd never heard that about the wood, actually.
There are 'birth woods', in the same way there are birth stones?
Hmm!

Thanks for commenting!
Review By [djhardim] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Xeelia
Review:
I like this premise. I don't like the uber long hair I hope she cuts it to at least her ankles, hair that long is extremely heavy, especially for such a young girl. (sorry i know it's fiction but just bugged me *blushes*) Have her eyes changed colors too?

I get that she's being so bratty due to all the loss she's suffered along with the other traumatic issues that have befallen her as well as absorbing parts of Glory but she will get better I hope. I also hope she realizes that Buffy might be in heaven and how horrible it would be to rob her of that.

What kind of wand does she have??

Can't wait for more! :D
Comments from author:
::I like this premise::

^_^!

::I don't like the uber long hair I hope she cuts it to at least her ankles, hair that long is extremely heavy, especially for such a young girl. (sorry i know it's fiction but just bugged me *blushes*)::

No worries; it IS kind of extreme.
Can you tell that one of my favorite movies from last year was 'Tangled'?
^_^!
She might cut it some; not sure yet.
Her eyes? Hmmm.

We'll have to see how she develops; I've not thought that far ahead, so it'll happen (or not) as I go along.

Her wand I DO know about, but I don't want to say yet. Let's just say it's... unusual.
VERY.

Thank you so much for commenting!
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Oh dear, it looks like Dawn has inherited some of Glory's attitude along with her Power :( At least Giles managed to talk Willow out of her great mistake. I hope Draco isn't meeting her on the orders of his Father (ie Voldmort) but I fear my hope may be in vain.
Comments from author:
Hey there.

::Oh dear, it looks like Dawn has inherited some of Glory's attitude along with her Power :( ::

A bit, yes. Maybe it's just a package deal. That other goddess, Illyria, wasn't easy to live with either :-)

::At least Giles managed to talk Willow out of her great mistake::

Yes, and Dawn's life is a dark and lonely place because of it. Still, perhaps she'll manage to make some friends at her new school....

::I hope Draco isn't meeting her on the orders of his Father (ie Voldmort) but I fear my hope may be in vain::

Ironically, the answer to that may be both yes AND no. Not sure yet, need to actually write it down, first.

Thank you so much for commenting! Lots of reviews make me a happyhappy writerperson!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MistofRainbows
Review:
You lost me at she's short and tiny and a female draco for some reason that I can't really understand. If you wanted to pull this off you should probably have started back when things went different. Even a scene or two could have helped. As for Draco even being informed or sent, I've got to view it as some idiotic desire to have a Dawn/Draco mix. She came off as very very un-Dawnlike.
Comments from author:
I basically decided to actually get her to at least some Hogwart-ish situation in chapter one, rather than risk losing people with a chapter or three of laying in backstory.
I'm working on the next part now, and it will include the first of several flashbacks which describe the events that led to this.
Actually, Draco will likely be more mature in this one; still an ass of sorts, but not so horribly one-note stupid/arrogant as in the books/movies. Dawn; sure, yes, she's different. Quite a bit younger, mentally as well as physically, and with traces of uber-bratty Hellgoddess thrown into the mix.
Dawn/Draco? Well, kind of early days for that, being as how they're both (very) prepubescent, but 'idiotic'?
You ARE familiar with the basic tropes of this thing we call 'fanfiction', right? We DO tend to do wacky things in them, and the shipping two previously unrelated characters is pretty standard.
(But WILL it be Draco? She hasn't even MET Harry yet, after all. Or Hagrid. Or Mrs. Norris. Heh, heh... heh.)

I'm sorry if that sort of thing doesn't provide floatage for your personal and private boat, but all of us have our most favorite and least favorite things. If I wanted to see Dawn shown as 100% canon Dawn, I'd watch my DVD's.

Still, thank you for giving the story a shot, and thank you also for sharing your thoughts on it.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
I am *so* tracking this one now! No one can accuse you of an unoriginal concept, at least! Dawn inherits Glory's powers? Love it. I say - go for it, Aurora! Embrace your dark side, crush the so-called "Dark Lord" and rule the Wizarding World! Mwa-ha-ha-ha! :-)
Comments from author:
Okay, reading this review has basically made me fall in love with you.
^_^!

I approve of every word you said.

::hurries off to work on next chapter::
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [9 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from borgrabbit
Review:
Dawn needs an attitude adjustment. Hope the bindings hold long enough to do the job. I guess she's headed to Slytherin...sad.

Great start and looking forward to more!!
Comments from author:
::I guess she's headed to Slytherin...sad::

Well, 'there are Slytherins and there are Slytherins'.
Wait till you see which kind we have in our basket before judging.

::Great start and looking forward to more!!::

I certainly can't ask for more than that.
Thanks!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deathgeonous
Review:
This looks very interesting. I most look forward to more. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the reviewage!
More should be posted very soon.
(cause reviews are writing fuel!)
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [8 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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