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Review of chapter "Wedding of Two Lifetimes" from FireWolfe
Review:
A very enjoyable update. I like this Andrew a lot. It would be nice to see him excell on his own and gain some confidence. He was a character that had a lot of potential.
Fire
Comments from author:
Thank you. I wanted to do something a bit different with Andrew, as he would be a completely different person if raised with a loving family (or at least not raised with a sadistic sociopath). So thanks again! I hope you continue to enjoy this.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Beginning of Everything" from (Past Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
great update
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [(Past Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Beginning of Everything" from LallaBelle
Review:
Oooh it's coming along nicely. I'm guessing Andrew and Aaron's mum has got post partum depression or something like that?

Also would I be right in guessing that Mr Jorgensen is a certain former Colonel? ;D
Comments from author:
Portpartum is correct. And it depends on which former Colonel you're thinking about... ^_^

Thank you for the review, and for reading this. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Review By [LallaBelle] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All Coming Back Now" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good chapter. I haven't watched Criminal Minds regularly enough to have a timeline or much personal knowledge about Hotch - but I do like the actor and the character holding back his own personal darkness as he investigates that of others.
Comments from author:
Agreed. Hotch is a great character, and the actor does a wonderful job portraying him.

In the first season, Hotch's birthday is shown to be in early November. And he was a senior in 1987, so I'm going with that for his age, regardless of any information that is given out later.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wedding of Two Lifetimes" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I had thought most of this story would be about Andrew's new childhood. I'm glad to see some forward motion, though... though a six year engagement must have been intense. I guess they wanted to finish their degree study work first? And what of romances for the older Scoobies? Anything?
Comments from author:
Childhood details are coming. This just seemed like the best place to start. Yes... they wanted to finish their degrees...

The older Scoobies will meet their love interests (assuming they have them) in time. That's for a different story entirely.

Thanks for the review(s)!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "All Coming Back Now" from (Past Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
can't wait to see little hotchner
Comments from author:
Me either! ^_^

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wedding of Two Lifetimes" from (Past Donor)pinkhairedharry
Review:
hehehe i was wondering how you were going to add criminal minds to the mix
cant wait for more
Comments from author:
Thank you!

And just so you know, my mind sent me in a new direction, so Andrew's last name is Hotchner now. Just a heads-up for when I get the next chapter up.
Review By [(Past Donor)pinkhairedharry] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Wedding of Two Lifetimes" from Gideon
Review:
I haven't read the other stories but this series sounds great!
A whole new childhood for each of them allows you to move each character in interesting ways. Keep it up!
Comments from author:
Thank you! Here's hoping you continue to enjoy it.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Wedding of Two Lifetimes" from FireWolfe
Review:
I'm really glad you came back to this series. it was rather nice to see it updated.
Fire
Comments from author:
Thank you. Hopefully I can actually complete it, right? ^_^
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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