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Xander the Lycan

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Review of chapter "Chapter 6 – Party time" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.
Review By [APS] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 – The Bronze" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Like it so far.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 – The Bronze" from msdarque
Review:
Interesting chapter, different... but I liked it!
I guess it's understandable that the girls are a bit confused as they are quite young then. Not battle-hardened, so to speak.
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Elizabeth" from Mystikal
Review:
I like this story idea. I think you need a little more fine tuning each chapter. Read it 2 or 3 times and see if the sentences make since to you before submitting it. Other than that this seems like a unique story idea.
Review By [Mystikal] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Elizabeth" from michaelangelo
Review:
The story is riddled with spelling and grammar mistakes, I don't give a shit about that but some idiot may complain and get it blocked. Please don't let that happen, it's a good story and you have no idea how long I have waited for an Underworld/BtVS cross where Xander is a Lycan, people seem fixated on frigging Vampires for some reason.

So a couple of tips, #1: at the very least run it through the sites own spellchecker, even better get a Beta asap. #2: Elizabeth is sounding too mature and not very Cockney ragamuffin.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Elizabeth" from msdarque
Review:
Sweet and wonderful story of Elizabeth. :)
Just like Xander to help and adopt a child (or person) in need.
Congrats! Liked reading it quite a lot.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Elizabeth" from DarthPayne
Review:
Will we get to see events from the Underworld movies?

Perhaps with Xanders help Sonias death can be faked in such a way that every one but Lucian will be convinced that she have infact died.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Elizabeth" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Elizabeth" from (Past Donor)ScottWanderer
Review:
Great Story so far, chapter are abit short but they are sweet.

As for the reviewer Pup I didn't think they realize that in your world the Lycan had not existed until Xander and it is Xander who is Progenitor of these Lycans as none of the Corvinus family even exist in your story.

At least that is what i am getting.
Comments from author:
Thnx, yes they are short but I try to keep them that way at least for awhile.

And you are totally right Xander is the progenitor of the lycan race in this universe.
Review By [(Past Donor)ScottWanderer] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Elizabeth" from Rob
Review:
Nice bit with Elizabeth. Kind of reminds me of a Highlander tale.
Review By [Rob] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 – What are you?" from Gideon
Review:
Good work. I am a bit surprised that Giles has not heard of Xander's race if they are as powerful as Xander says. I wonder what Angel will say to another older man hanging around Buffy?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Coming Home" from lillyb
Review:
I love where you are going with this great work.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 – What are you?" from Pup
Review:
Good story, like the plot the development so far. Only one point of clarification, Lucian is not the Progenitor of the Lycan race. That honor goes to William Corvinus, depicted as the white Lycan in the underworld film.
Review By [Pup] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 – What are you?" from msdarque
Review:
It only gets more intriguing... this is so exciting!
Wonder how the girls are going to react to this changed Xander... what new friends he might have.. ?
Loved reading it, eager for the party, congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 – What are you?" from CPTSkip
Review:
This is one terrific story. I can't wait to find out more about Elizabeth. If Xander is a Lycan does this mean there are the other kind of Underworld vampires out there?
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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