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Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Coming Home" from Mechconstrictor
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Pretty good story you have here. As you said, the only real problem with it is the spelling. If you have one, a good spellchecker should fix most of the mistakes that I saw. Not all, but most of them. Other then that, I'd suggest getting a beta reader. They could give you a second set of eyes for any mistakes. I hope to see more.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Coming Home" from eriktheviking
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A well done, fun reunion.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Coming Home" from Hanzo
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 – Coming Home" from msdarque
Review:
Interesting... my curiosity is certainly paying attention.. LOL
Congrats! Liked it, eager to read more.
Review By [msdarque] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
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That is a pretty good twist on Halloween. I wonder what would happen if Xander finds another Xander still living his life in the present? And is the Elisabeth he is with a Buffy that was sent back in time too?
A few errors but pretty good for a first story. Keep it up!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darkplayer
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Interesting start. It has a lot of potential. Please update soon.
Review By [darkplayer] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarthPayne
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An ok start.

A bit odd with the usage of full names though.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
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A well written and tantalizing opening.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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