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Review of chapter "New Girl in Town" from ladyfiana
Review:
I not normally one for gender bending either but I like how you've written this. The part about him not wearing a bra was very funny. I hope for Xan's sake he does start wearing one soon or he's going to have more than Johnny hitting on him/her. Not to mention the pain if he does anything strenuous(OUCH). I sense a big freakout coming on for Xander. Not being able to find his family is going to so suck for him. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you write more soon.
Review By [ladyfiana] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl in Town" from Riniko
Review:
Looking forward to reading the next chapter, the writing is very good. The only strange point is that Xander should recognize the FF, she may not have believed that they were the same people, but she likely would have commented on them using their names. After all Xander is a comic reader, but there is the chance that while Xander's world had DC comics they did not have Marvel, I don't remember all which comics were mentioned on the show.
Comments from author:
In the show, they do mention Buffy's 'spidey sense,' but for the purposes of this story, Marvel comics do not exist in the world of Buffy.
Review By [Riniko] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl in Town" from darkplayer
Review:
Very interesting start to the story. It has a lot of potential. I look forward to seeing where it goes from here. Please update soon.
Review By [darkplayer] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl in Town" from fictionnut
Review:
Great start, look forward to more. Please update soon.
Review By [fictionnut] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Girl in Town" from RubyPaladin
Review:
I love the story so far and I can't wait to see what you do with it. I'm guessing the spark of energy left over from Halloween is what saved Xander from becoming street pizza.
Comments from author:
You are correct.
Review By [RubyPaladin] • Date [13 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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