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Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from Swordchucks
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What?

What!

Okay, pretty interesting ending. Threw my brain for a loop. I was very much expecting Xander to stay Karen, but I wasn't expecting it to work out the way it did. I was more expecting him to come home and find that his original body had been turned into supergirl, too.

Anyway, I liked this story a lot and will definitely watch for the sequel!
Review By [Swordchucks] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from VillageOrchid
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"Soul Clone" or wrong dimension? Thanks for continuing. Very complex and cliffy, too.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from SamDragon
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THis will be very confusing for Xander and Xander(Karen).
Can't wait to see how you handle this meeting. :)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from draconis
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Wonderful story! Great treatment of the recent fight scenes and Xander/Karen inside Divine's mind facing 'Max' and how she dealt with the essence of Divine. Now that was unexpected.

However, the INSTANT you first began describing the Draconian artifact, I knew where ultimately you were headed with it. It was the best solution given the circumstances. And of course, I fully expected you wouldn't leave Karen and Irma forever separated by bazillions of dimensions.

Looking forward to the sequel. Thanks.


EDIT TO ADD:
Speaking of Epigoni (in your first response)....which I thought was excellent so far...have you dropped the series? Epigoni: Atlantis still shows incomplete after 4 chapters, and weren't you also considering/working on a 3rd story for the series? Oh, and "Far From Home" (sequel to Blue Dawn) also shows incomplete. (nag, nag, nag, poke, poke, poke, nudge, nudge, nudge)
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story, and yeah, I didn't think I'd be taking anyone by surprise with the Draconian Katra. I actually had a couple of different possible endings planned when I started this fic. This one had the advantage of both not turning telepathy into even more of a Deus Ex Machina than it already is in the X-Men comics AND not rendering Karen totally unusable as a heroic character. I actually got so far as to do an outline of an ending in which Karen and Kara remained merged, with the Draconian Katra failing to work in time, and Karen eventually fading to nothing, with Kara keeping just a few fragments of memory, but that one depressed me too much, and the themes of heroic defeat and heroism in the face of death are ones I've already explored in other fics (Blue Dawn and Epigoni, to be specific), and didn't really help me to tell the kind of story I wanted to tell with this one.
Review By [draconis] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from grd
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Outstanding. I was hoping something like that would happen. I wonder if Doc Strange got the right dimension.
Review By [grd] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from tealruby
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Nice, can't wait for the sequel!
Review By [tealruby] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from finsdale
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thoroughly enjoyed this story, and was not expecting the twists at the end.
Well Done. I'll try to wait patiently for the sequel.
Review By [finsdale] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from BlueEyedJedi
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Wellll, that's different. A lot of interesting twists. Xander could not have done different with baby Divine, it's just who he is. I am Eager for the Sequel.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from SmithAndWesson
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Loved it, felt the conclusion was very well written. Can't wait for the sequel.
Review By [SmithAndWesson] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from borgrabbit
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I just wrote this one for a different story on a different website, but it applies here too.

Random hairy canary haiku:

Look back frequently
One still misses cliff edge dire
Toes grab the tree root

☺☻☺☻☺☻☺☻☺☻☺☻☺☻☺☻

I wait with bated breath. Please hurry. I'm turning blue!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from Studyofchaos
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Excellent job. Can't wait for the sequel.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from BaileyMatutine
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This was a good ending. I'm looking forwards to the sequel.

Mind setting it as an official series to make things easier on your followers?
Review By [BaileyMatutine] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from superbrutal
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That was a epic chapter! I enjoyed it very much!

Great Job!
Review By [superbrutal] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from Jarvey
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Great end, very Doctor Who :)
Definitely recc'ing this one.
Review By [Jarvey] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Unjoining" from RubyPaladin
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Wow, didn't expect that one to happen.
Review By [RubyPaladin] • Date [4 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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