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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Netchka
Review:
Cool start to the story. Can't wait for the next chapters to come.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story. New chapters show up at my muse's whims.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Wolflady
Review:
Do you think he will learned any better when he wakes up? Hope so. If necessary, Buffy could 'spar' with him for a while after she calms down.
Comments from author:
Even Adams would learn enough to not say something like that in front of the Summers sisters again. ;-)
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gladius
Review:
Well, that was inevitable!

Thanks, greywizard, well worth the wait! More, please!
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. ;-)
Review By [Gladius] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from LordCorwin
Review:
Well done, and I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm waiting for my muse to dictate exactly what comes next in this one, since I've got a LOT of potential ideas as to how this could evolve. ;-)
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from war
Review:
Oh yeah thats the old Adams charm we've all come to love.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Yep. As I've mentioned previously, Adams didn't join the SEALS because he has great diplomatic skills. ;-)
Review By [war] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from AnimeRonin
Review:
Xander's the one who never gets to have any fun. He didn't even get to break out his battleaxe this time.
Comments from author:
Actually, for Xander, getting to beat up an ex-SEAL probably would count as fun, considering the type of opponents he usually has to deal with. ;-)
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from eriktheviking
Review:
That wasn't a pissing contest that was damage control.

Great fun update, thanks.
Comments from author:
As far as the Scoobies are concerned, it was a very minor annoyance, and barely that.

Pissing Buffy off would involve MAJOR damage control, of the type requiring the use of extensive medical personnel and lots of construction equipment. ;-)

Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from LordSia
Review:
... O.O;
The mental picture of the poor sod's fate would not have looked out of place in Commoragh itself.
Comments from author:
Nasty thought, there. ;-)

I'm currently working on the next part of this story and should have it ready soon. ;-)

Thanks for reviewing. ;-)
Review By [LordSia] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Longslide
Review:
"Hey, Mike! You didn't tell us you brought in a couple of new whores!"
1. This will not end well for Adams.
2. I thought SEALS were smarter then that?
Comments from author:
1. No, it won't. ;-)

2. Yes, I thought so,too, but this *is* Adams, remember. The man didn't join the SEALS because he's got mad diplomatic skillz, as they say. ;-)

Working on teh next chapter now. ;-)
Review By [Longslide] • Date [17 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from athanor
Review:
Since I have never read or even heard of this crossover I had little interest in this story, until, that is, the last line of chapter 2. Now I find I don't care about the source material, I just want to see what sort of damage the Summers Sisters and Xander inflict on the blowhard.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story. ;-)

And you would be able to increase that enjoyment ever so much more of you were familiar with the various Keldara characters, because then you would understand exactly what kind of a horn dog-pig guy Adams actually is. ;-)

I do have to say, though, that Adams isn't a blowhard - he actually is a damn good SEAL, and almost as good as he thinks he is. ;-)
Review By [athanor] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from OdinMage
Review:
This can not end well... I sense extreme property damage ahead.
Comments from author:
I don't think there'll be as much property damage as bodily damage (to Adams). ;-)
Review By [OdinMage] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from bousquem
Review:
I can just see Adams having to have it balls removed from where they were launched into his skull. Also might be interesting how the Keldara will react to something like the shovel speech if they start sniffing around Dawn or another scooby.
Comments from author:
Adams definitely didn't join the SEALS because he was good at diplomacy. ;-)

And with regard to your other comment, all I'll do at the moment is point out how Mother Lenka greeted the three of them.

Although I do think that they would completely appreciate the earnestness and intent of the typical Scooby shovel speech. ;-)
Review By [bousquem] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CrazyCamera
Review:
Oh i loved that ending and can not wait to see how bad the damage is.. and it Katya going to show up?
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story.

And the Scoobies are going to be meeting a lot of Mike's crew, probably in a number of different settings.
Review By [CrazyCamera] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from purrfus
Review:
this is just gonna end painfully isn't it?
Comments from author:
Only for Adams. ;-)
Review By [purrfus] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from clei
Review:
>"Hey, Mike! You didn't tell us you brought in a couple of new whores!"
>

Dead man walking, and not a vampire either....
Comments from author:
Not dead - just very, *very* injured.

And probably crawling, not walking. ;-)
Review By [clei] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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