Thanks. I'm waiting for my muse to dictate exactly what comes next in this one, since I've got a LOT of potential ideas as to how this could evolve. ;-)
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Xander's the one who never gets to have any fun. He didn't even get to break out his battleaxe this time.
Comments from author:
Actually, for Xander, getting to beat up an ex-SEAL probably would count as fun, considering the type of opponents he usually has to deal with. ;-)
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from eriktheviking
Review:
That wasn't a pissing contest that was damage control.
Great fun update, thanks.
Comments from author:
As far as the Scoobies are concerned, it was a very minor annoyance, and barely that.
Pissing Buffy off would involve MAJOR damage control, of the type requiring the use of extensive medical personnel and lots of construction equipment. ;-)
Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Since I have never read or even heard of this crossover I had little interest in this story, until, that is, the last line of chapter 2. Now I find I don't care about the source material, I just want to see what sort of damage the Summers Sisters and Xander inflict on the blowhard.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story. ;-)
And you would be able to increase that enjoyment ever so much more of you were familiar with the various Keldara characters, because then you would understand exactly what kind of a horn dog-pig guy Adams actually is. ;-)
I do have to say, though, that Adams isn't a blowhard - he actually is a damn good SEAL, and almost as good as he thinks he is. ;-)
I can just see Adams having to have it balls removed from where they were launched into his skull. Also might be interesting how the Keldara will react to something like the shovel speech if they start sniffing around Dawn or another scooby.
Comments from author:
Adams definitely didn't join the SEALS because he was good at diplomacy. ;-)
And with regard to your other comment, all I'll do at the moment is point out how Mother Lenka greeted the three of them.
Although I do think that they would completely appreciate the earnestness and intent of the typical Scooby shovel speech. ;-)
Review By [bousquem] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]