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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Longslide
Review:
"Hey, Mike! You didn't tell us you brought in a couple of new whores!"
1. This will not end well for Adams.
2. I thought SEALS were smarter then that?
Comments from author:
1. No, it won't. ;-)

2. Yes, I thought so,too, but this *is* Adams, remember. The man didn't join the SEALS because he's got mad diplomatic skillz, as they say. ;-)

Working on teh next chapter now. ;-)
Review By [Longslide] • Date [17 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from athanor
Review:
Since I have never read or even heard of this crossover I had little interest in this story, until, that is, the last line of chapter 2. Now I find I don't care about the source material, I just want to see what sort of damage the Summers Sisters and Xander inflict on the blowhard.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story. ;-)

And you would be able to increase that enjoyment ever so much more of you were familiar with the various Keldara characters, because then you would understand exactly what kind of a horn dog-pig guy Adams actually is. ;-)

I do have to say, though, that Adams isn't a blowhard - he actually is a damn good SEAL, and almost as good as he thinks he is. ;-)
Review By [athanor] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from OdinMage
Review:
This can not end well... I sense extreme property damage ahead.
Comments from author:
I don't think there'll be as much property damage as bodily damage (to Adams). ;-)
Review By [OdinMage] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from bousquem
Review:
I can just see Adams having to have it balls removed from where they were launched into his skull. Also might be interesting how the Keldara will react to something like the shovel speech if they start sniffing around Dawn or another scooby.
Comments from author:
Adams definitely didn't join the SEALS because he was good at diplomacy. ;-)

And with regard to your other comment, all I'll do at the moment is point out how Mother Lenka greeted the three of them.

Although I do think that they would completely appreciate the earnestness and intent of the typical Scooby shovel speech. ;-)
Review By [bousquem] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CrazyCamera
Review:
Oh i loved that ending and can not wait to see how bad the damage is.. and it Katya going to show up?
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story.

And the Scoobies are going to be meeting a lot of Mike's crew, probably in a number of different settings.
Review By [CrazyCamera] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from purrfus
Review:
this is just gonna end painfully isn't it?
Comments from author:
Only for Adams. ;-)
Review By [purrfus] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from clei
Review:
>"Hey, Mike! You didn't tell us you brought in a couple of new whores!"
>

Dead man walking, and not a vampire either....
Comments from author:
Not dead - just very, *very* injured.

And probably crawling, not walking. ;-)
Review By [clei] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Eureka
Review:
Me thinks Adam may be in trouble.
Comments from author:
Good bet. ;-)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from war
Review:
"Hey, Mike! You didn't tell us you brought in a couple of new whores!"

Leave it to Adams to make a good impression. 8-)
Hope no one from the Families heard that after Mother Lenka honored them or he might have a ax flying at his head.

The gang sure has got good at the diplomat thing and with Xander mentioning Sam's adventures it should be interesting to see how the Families react to her now.

Great timing with the story I've been counting the days til Ringo's E-arc story Queen of Wands comes out in April( Plus Tiger by the Tail from this series is suppose to come out later this year) and this will let hold over til then.

Great story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Are you talking about the social impression , or the one Adams' face will make against the wall. ;-)

And I've been waiting on another Kildar story since forever, it seems. ;-)
Review By [war] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from trongod
Review:
Excellent to see that you've continued this - BIG fan of The Kildar and the Keldara here!

I'm wondering who gets to put the trainers/staff into the proper state of mind to appreciate the sisters Summers: Mike, or Xander.... Or will they just sit back and let Buffy pound them into the gravel, then Dawn blow them away with her own abilities...

As always, Bravo Zulu!
Comments from author:
Well, as far as who shuts the Chief up, I can see it happening several different ways, and with varying levels of damage to Adams. ;-)

I'm waiting for my muse to decide which one will work best for the story.
Review By [trongod] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from djhardim
Review:
Good. Warning: Parents may want to remove children under the age of ten from the room before the next chapter.

A link to the previous story:
http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-10340/Greywizard+Requiem+Regrets+and+A+Reunion.htm
Comments from author:
An excellent parental warning, indeed. ;-)
Review By [djhardim] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Wolflady
Review:
Hey! No fair! That was a cliffhanger and a half! Two! The mind boggles at the fur (not to mention blood and entrails) that are going to fly after THAT question.
Comments from author:
Sorry, but I just write what my muse tells me to write, when she tells me to write it. ;-)
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from eriktheviking
Review:
Well written and in character for both canons as well as a good laugh with the Chief.
Comments from author:
Thanks, but I don't think that Adams will be laughing at all, once the repercussions of his loud-mouthed comments are done. ;-)
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from WolfWriter
Review:
That guy is in for a smackdown, the question is who will deliver it; Buffy, Dawn, Sam or Xander?

I vote for all four of them to kick the shit out of him.

He had better not be treating any of the women in the camp that way, otherwise, Mother Lenka will neuter him....without anesthesia....or antiseptic.....or anything that will make it less painful.

Nope, she'll just chop off his willie and be done with it.
Comments from author:
Well, all I can really say about Adams is that he didn't become a SEAL because he has 'mad diplomatic skilz', as the saying goes. ;-)
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [25 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Letomo
Review:
Good start, I loved the original series.

I do wonder - with the way that the Keldar are into the Old Ways, how well will they take mention of the Watcher's, or that there is more than one Slayer, since that is not of the Old Ways?

I hope the muse strikes again!
Comments from author:
I'm pleased you enjoyed the story. ;-)

And I've got the next chapter partially written. Hopefully, it'll be ready to post soon.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [16 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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