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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bousquem
Review:
I really hope you turn this into a full multi-chapter story. There is so much just waiting out there with intereractions between the two groups and all the trouble that can be caused.
Comments from author:
More will be coming.

And where have the Scoobies ever gone where trouble hasn't been dogging their heels? ;-)
Review By [bousquem] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TwoBlackDragons
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Please, please, please continue this.

I really wish he would do more in this series soonish. I have yet to get into his new series.

What I really wish is that he came from the same planet as Triplicate girl came from and all three of him were just as good a writer as he is. That way he could feed my addiction to nearly all things Ringo.
Comments from author:
Don't worry, there will be more of this. I just don't know when it will show up.


And your wish would certainly be worthwhile if a Literature Appreciation Demon would ever show up. ;-)
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
Review:
Must have been a interesting ride getting there considering all the slavers operating in the area.

Wonder what their first impression of the valley was? Considering the Keldara actually take their check points seriously( not to mention Buffy and Dawn would notice the Keldara males) and if I recall Mike has 3 120mm motor pits on his front lawn.

Hope the girl comes from the Kulcyanov family some of the other Fathers won't take to well the notion of one their daughters being a slayer.

Hope Sam told Adams to tone it done around Buffy and Dawn I don't see Buffy taking well to his brand of humor.
Comments from author:
Well, 'interesting' is definitely one of the words the Scoobies would probably use to describe their lives, wouldn't you agree? ;-)

And I'm sure that the three's interactions with the Clans and the rest of team are certainly going to be fun. ;-)

Yes, Buffy and Dawn would most certainly have noticed the 'yummy goodness' (as Buffy would phrase it) of the Keldara men, just as Xander would have noticed the same for the women. ;-)

As far as the Fathers not approving that one of their daughters was Chosen, remember that the Clans follow the Old Ways, and having the gods bless one of their children is something to be both appreciated and feared, especially since there's nothing the Families can do about it. Whoever had their daughter Chosen to become one of Wotan's Valkyries has been honored, especially since this will ensure that she will be able to be buried in honor, with an army of enemies sent to the afterlife before her.

And do you really think that Adams will believe it when Sam that he has to be exceptionally polite to both of the women who'll be arriving, regardless of what she might say? He's the stereotypical hard-ass SEAL, who doesn't really respect anyone or anything until he's either been shown proof that he should be respectful by people he respects, or he's had his ass handed to him by whoever he's managed to piss off. This situation could go either way, and I haven't really decided yet whether one of the girls are going to hand him his ass in several pieces or not, or which one will do it, if that does occur. ;-)
Review By [war] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Garmorn
Review:
This is two good a premise to leave as a one shot!!! Please turn into a full story later.
Comments from author:
Definitely not a one-shot. Just have to find the time to write more.
Review By [Garmorn] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
Review:
A slayer from the Keldara I almost feel sorry for the demons.

You don't see Mother Lenka impressied to ofter should be a interesting story to that.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Well, Mike describes her, somewhat jokingly, as a witch in 'Keldar,' so I figured, ''Hey, hey not?' ;-)

Either way, Mother Lenka is NOT someone you want to get pissed at you, so if she's respectful to the Scoobies, the rest of the Clans are going to be, at the least, very polite. ;-)
Review By [war] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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