Ha Ha! Huge smile on my face from that. I can't say that I remember the original sabrina show's episodes that well, but your use of them has pure comedian gold stamped all over it. Thanks for the great read and I'm looking forward to more.
Review By [Michaelsuave] • Date [9 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Yay! An update!!! I really love this story. I hope you have summer free and are going to give us more :)
I reread the first chapter and I have to say that I just about fell off my chair again and was laughing so loud I'm sure my neibors were wondering what was going on. The worst of the laughing started at the line "“Today, we feast!” Salem shouted happily..."
It got louder when we found out one of the Spellman family secrets! :D
Thank you very kindly for updating!
Now to this chapter stuff:
I think you've nailed the characters from Sabrina! The attitudes and the speech! Wild. I can picture Salem especially. The crying and the head bobs and such. It's really easy to picture them with the language you've used.
Now, will this be going anywhere (Plot anyone?) or will it just be Xander popped into the Sabrina series?
Either way, I'm always up for more! (Pancakes anyone?) :D
Review By [AnFan] • Date [8 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Funny part, but I do feel rather lost as I don't know the source material very well. I think your story could do with some fleshing out, because even looking at wikipedia someone would have to read every single episode summary to get the most out of the chapter.
Still, rather funny, I just think you need a bit more detail.
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