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Review of chapter "chapter two" from AllenPitt
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Somebody's doing a cruciamentum on each of them? A crazed ex-watcher wanting to see if they're "worthy" of being slayers?
Comments from author:
or a crazed ex-watcher that hates all slayers
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter two" from VillageOrchid
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Ooh a clue. I vote for old council member running the cruicitorium or however you spell that drug on them and maybe even the "trial."
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*Cruciamentum* it's definitely an old council member. Just a plain human psycho
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter two" from Gideon
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Nice original ideas here, I haven't seen that Xander relative brought in before or quite that approach with the BAU calling them in as civilian experts. I wonder how they pegged the scoobies as experts in the Occult?
Comments from author:
i thought it would be diferent to have Kevin as Xander's uncle. i've seen him as a lost twin, a cousin and just a doppleganger. i'm going it has too do with the eyes only file.

thanks for reading
Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter two" from serenityselena
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uh oh.... it seem that someone has ties with the old council or something like that....
hope to read more soon ^_^
Comments from author:
thanks

hopefully i'll have another chapter soon but RL is kicking my ass
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter two" from moringstar
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nice chapters with a clean wrighting style. i would like a bit more meat on the bones as it were but your doing great so keep going.
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i know it's short but my stories always start rather short

*shrug*

they tend to get at least 1000 words after i get going.

thanks for reading
Review By [moringstar] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter two" from dreameralways
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Well crap. Someone's using the stuff from the Cruciamentum.
Comments from author:
yep. now we just have to find out who it is.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MissE
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Cute :D I'd definitely love to see more.
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [MissE] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BerserkerNW
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Cute! I take it this is the one relative Xander actually likes? And he's 'adopted' Willow, too? Thanks for sharing this; I look forward to see where you take it.
Comments from author:
yep and thanks
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spk
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WOW! Very interesting premise. I haven't seen anything with Kevin as Xander's uncle...nice touch. Can't wait to read more. :)
Comments from author:
me neither and i thought it could work.

thanks
Review By [spk] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JennRosbury
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Awesome I look forward to more!
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [JennRosbury] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
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Yeah, I'd like to know more.
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kyzhart
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Loved the Gibbs smack. Can't wait to see more interaction. I also liked how Willow was included as related. It makes sense with how close they were as kids.
Comments from author:
i don't think Willow has any relatives besides her parents so i figured Kevin wouldn't mind her calling him uncle. she and Xander are as close as sibling so...

thanks for reading
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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