TtH • Reviews • Occult Killer

Review of chapter "chapter two" from Gideon

Review:

Nice original ideas here, I haven't seen that Xander relative brought in before or quite that approach with the BAU calling them in as civilian experts. I wonder how they pegged the scoobies as experts in the Occult?

Comments from author:

i thought it would be diferent to have Kevin as Xander's uncle. i've seen him as a lost twin, a cousin and just a doppleganger. i'm going it has too do with the eyes only file.

thanks for reading

Review By [Gideon] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]

Review of chapter "chapter two" from serenityselena

Review:

uh oh.... it seem that someone has ties with the old council or something like that....
hope to read more soon ^_^

Comments from author:

thanks

hopefully i'll have another chapter soon but RL is kicking my ass

Review By [serenityselena] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "chapter two" from moringstar

Review:

nice chapters with a clean wrighting style. i would like a bit more meat on the bones as it were but your doing great so keep going.

Comments from author:

i know it's short but my stories always start rather short

*shrug*

they tend to get at least 1000 words after i get going.

thanks for reading

Review By [moringstar] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "chapter two" from dreameralways

Review:

Well crap. Someone's using the stuff from the Cruciamentum.

Comments from author:

yep. now we just have to find out who it is.

Review By [dreameralways] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MissE

Review:

Cute :D I'd definitely love to see more.

Comments from author:

thanks

Review By [MissE] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BerserkerNW

Review:

Cute! I take it this is the one relative Xander actually likes? And he's 'adopted' Willow, too? Thanks for sharing this; I look forward to see where you take it.

Comments from author:

yep and thanks

Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spk

Review:

WOW! Very interesting premise. I haven't seen anything with Kevin as Xander's uncle...nice touch. Can't wait to read more. :)

Comments from author:

me neither and i thought it could work.

thanks

Review By [spk] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JennRosbury

Review:

Awesome I look forward to more!

Comments from author:

thanks

Review By [JennRosbury] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid

Review:

Yeah, I'd like to know more.

Comments from author:

thanks

Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kyzhart

Review:

Loved the Gibbs smack. Can't wait to see more interaction. I also liked how Willow was included as related. It makes sense with how close they were as kids.

Comments from author:

i don't think Willow has any relatives besides her parents so i figured Kevin wouldn't mind her calling him uncle. she and Xander are as close as sibling so...

thanks for reading

Review By [kyzhart] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]