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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from kayron
Review:
This looks like an interesting story. I like 'Xander's real family' stories, but I don't recognize who his father is supposed to be. I like the idea of Xander having longevity and super healing. They may not be as fun as an active super power, but they come in handy with the actual staying alive part of being a fighter against evil. I am interested in seeing where this story will go.
Comments from author:
Glad you're enjoying the story. You can find out more about Gil here; http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gilad_Anni-Padda.
Review By [kayron] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Robby
Review:
"Will a quarter-million dollars to start be sufficient, Alexander?"

Darn you!! Now I have to wait....XD
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad i got you curious. ;-)
Review By [Robby] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Gargoylesama
Review:
It is nice to see that people remember some of the good characters that came out of Valiant Comics run. I am definitely following this story.
Comments from author:
Yeah, they did an excellent job on several characters, but some of their minor ones really sucked.
Review By [Gargoylesama] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)redjacobson
Review:
Interesting, be curious to see where you take this one, buddy

red
Comments from author:
My muse has shown me several distinct possibilities as far as plot bunnies are concerned, so it's just a matter of deciding which one to follow.
Review By [(Recent Donor)redjacobson] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from malkome
Review:
Well, that's one way to shut up a room of Scoobies :D
Comments from author:
Well, only for a minute, I would guess. ;-)
Review By [malkome] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TAO
Review:
Having been a fan of the old-school Valiant line-up...I have to ask...what are the chances of Xander and crew running into the new CEO of Orb Industries (aka X-O Manowar) aka Aric Dacia?

I can imagine that would be a interesting meeting.

Or worse yet...Toyo Harada and the Harbinger Foundation.
Comments from author:
Any other Valiant characters appearances are at my muse's whims, but none of that is out of the realm of possibility. ;-)
Review By [TAO] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from frankocsic
Review:
Great followup chapter and ending. Looking forward to more!
Comments from author:
Thanks. More to come as my muse decrees. ;-)
Review By [frankocsic] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Mordare
Review:
Well a quarter-million dollars sounds like a OK start. :D
Comments from author:
Yeah, it's a good start on spending money. ;-)
Review By [Mordare] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from lillyb
Review:
great work
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)jcon
Review:
ooohh good start. Intresting new character. Looking forward to more!
Comments from author:
Thanks. Definitely more to come.
Review By [(Current Donor)jcon] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Yeah, because I for one don't have the reference. Are there any photos or art to refer to, at least, for what he looks like? If he's tall and eternal in ancient times he would have been a giant among men.
Comments from author:
Check this site for more on Gil: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eternal_Warrior.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Robby
Review:
Interesting story idea, I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [Robby] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mordare
Review:
I actually do not know who Gil Masters is but the name seems familiar. As always I like the start.
Comments from author:
Gil is AWESOME!!!

Check out this site for more information about him: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Eternal_Warrior.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
Gilad Anni-Padda! Awsome! More!
Comments from author:
Yes, he is.

And there will be.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [26 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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